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Nalenthi — The only one who knew my night
Published: 2013-04-05 18:01:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 34700; Favourites: 723; Downloads: 244
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PLEASE NOTE:I am not looking for critique on the story of the comic, simply the quality of the art, I am no writer and I do not intend to be. Any criticism you can provide on the matter of art quality would be greatly appreciated.
Also, please refrain from posting comments like "AH FEELS" or whatever, I don't have a response to it, it evokes no emotions from me, it benefits no one, it is a waste of both of our time and it floods my inbox.
I will throw in a free requests for worthy critiques that I feel helped me.
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From what i had comprehended from the Snowdrop video was what i thought to be that Luna had been banished to the moon before Snowdrop died and thus never was fully able to say good bye to the one pony who 'knew her night'
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Woow, this is... Sad 
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Beautiful art, lovely and sad back story. Either way, gorgeously done, good job.
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i think in panel three you should round out her face.its a suggestion other wise its good
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but on the third panel she was getting old (thats what i saw)
luna's immortal so she doesn't get old unlike the other ponies
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pls dont make sad comics.. imma.. imaa..
(rolling on floor, crying)
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How sad........................ Nice comic.
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The sketchy style of the background in comparison to the figures is very effective. The simplicity of the story conveyed through the art. The depth of the colo(u)rs and texture is detailed and the pale consistency also conveys the mood well.
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what fan fic/comic/video does Snow Drop come from. I see her everywhere but I have no context for her existence.
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Thank you, however I must follow that link after I get off work... If I remember... I am more forgetful than Derpy....
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thank you for sharing that and (sort of) reminding me to watch it. oh the feels!
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overall really well done but I do have one criticism: Snowdrop's muzzle is too square, which according to the art conventions of the show, makes her look like a boy/colt. If you were to make changes (I don't know if you're done with this and onto the next piece yet) I would say rounding the muzzle out would be a good move.
Or just pay attention to that in the future.
great use of sequential art altogether though, I look forward to your being featured again.
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It's squared because of the wrinkles.
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Fair enough. It might be my computer not showing all the little details that confused me.
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The emotion conveyed here is very clear, they start out happy and loving but as it progresses it seems to become a bit calmer and slower, perhaps because of Snowdrop's age? The lone colored tombstone on the last panel is a wonderful and powerful way to show that Snowdrop was special to Luna, with the princess' back turned to it, it almost seems like she's trying hard to forget Snowdrop to dull her pain or maybe she just finds it hard to look at without remembering all the happy memories she had with her.
Overall this is a beautiful interpretation of the story (I haven't seen the episode but after seeing this perhaps I should) and the artwork is spectacular and the fact that there is no dialogue makes it that much more powerful.
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Thank you very much. You definitely should watch Snowdrop, it's not show quality but it's a nice episode.
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You're quite welcome vuv
I have watched it now, its very sad vnv but well done none the less
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Hmm... I thought Snowdrop died during Luna's banishment? I must have misinterpreted the story.
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Actually, as many have pointed out, that was a misinterpretation on my part.
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Oh. I thought it was me 'cause I only watched it the day after it came out XD
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This is absolutely gorgeous and honestly difficult to find fault with. One thing I will point out is the filly Snowdrop on the first "panel"; I'm not sure how closely you are intending to stick to the show style, but her proportions are quite off for a filly. Also, Luna's wings in general are set further back along her body than is typically accepted or canon for a pegasus, and for a good balance between the weight of her head and her hindquarters. There are a couple of other small anatomical details that might be pointed out, if it's something you're concerned about. 
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;.; If only this had happened. But Luna got banished not long after Snowdrop made her first snowflake.
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I like how you conveyed Snowdrop aging/growing up. It helped to establish a timeline to the story. This is really well done.
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is it okay if i pointed out something with one of the panels?
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Go ahead but please check one of the other comments hasn't already pointed it out.
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The muzzles seem a little box like in the second and third panel, shouldn't it be rounder? *cowers in fear* don't hurt me!
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I prefer a very squared muzzle. It's simply part of my style.
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ah all righty, just never seen that before is all so it caught me off guard
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It might just be me, but in the first two panels Luna looks kind of old . . .
And I got the impression "I never got to . . ." implied that Luna began to be consumed by her jealousy during Snowdrop's life, and wasn't there during Snowdrop's final years either because she had pushed away those close to her and isolated herself, or because she was on the moon. But on the other hand, I don't see anybody else talking about this, so perhaps my interpretation is less obvious than it seems to me.
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I think this looks really good. I like the painting style, the shading style, etc. My only issue is that I think the chins are a little too tall? It looks a little odd.
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