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Nawaii — In the Presence of Aristocracy

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YAY! Jay took third in the dressage class! Congrats, buddy!


Horse: Jay Bird

Rider: Ariel Bakers

Class: Dressage

Start Number: 16

Music: Piano Concerto No. 1 (B Flat Minor) - Tchaikovsky

Stable: CandleWick Equine Facility

Show: Villa Gana 1st Winter Show


Mane is braided like this on opposite side: forums.arabianbreeders.net/upl…


This was by far the most elaborate background I think I've done! I hope it pays off, I can't say it looks as great as I envisioned... Oh well! More snow!



Jeez! Where was Jamie these days?! It seems like Ariel's doing all the work carrying CandleWick's name all by herself! Anyways, this time she is competing again with our dapple grey Andy. Jay seemed to be on his game today, too, and he knew it. From the very second he strut off the trailer he's been holding his head high and prancing in the frigid temperatures, giving Ariel a hard time hanging on to him with her stiff fingers. He even caught site of a nice Thoroughbred mare and began to lurch towards her before Ariel yanked him back and he stepped back into place. Crazy boy...


Besides! This wasn't the place for him to misbehave! The grounds were beautiful and every well-manicured lawn was lined in pristine shrubs. The elegance of the stables and the surrounding buildings shamed the little shack back at home! Every mount had elegant, long legs and even their winter coats were kept in a well-groomed manner. The pair was alone this time, which meant that Ariel had her hands full with unloading all the tack. She was able to park close to one of the stable's entrances and lead Jay directly to his guest stall. She headed back out to the trailer where she rolled in her tack trunk, and all the buckets and hay nets the stallion needed before hiking back out into the flurries to drive and park the truck. It was times like these when she really wished she had a big strong man to do all the heavy lifting!


She returned to the large, grey boy who was calmly nibbling on shreds of hay, swishing his tail. They would have to ride that evening so it was imperative that the stallion's long dark mane be braided. No halter was needed as he quietly ate when Ariel brought in the step stool and began working on the braid design she found the night before. She worked her way down his muscular neck and finished with a small blue tie that matched the cold hues in the snow outside. He turned and looked at the girl who was regretting taking off her gloves to work - her fingers still hadn't thawed - and blew warm sweet hay breath in her face. She giggled and stroked the velvety muzzle he presented her with, and then noticed the time on her watch. Her ride was coming up!!!


With incredible energy she zoomed in and out of the stall, with soft brushes, hoof picks, and rags overflowing her arms she groomed Jay before placing his gleaming white show pad on - brand new for his first international show! Jay watched as the human scurried around his stall and took all her energy like a champ. She placed his saddle on a situated it just as the withers began to slope. Finally, the bridle slipped over his face and the double bits slid over his tongue. Jay flinched at the cold metal and began to chew it while he was lead out of the stall. He stood looking around at the mares down the corridor again as Ariel pulled on her show jacket and adjusted the hat on top of her brown hair, pulled back into a bun. The pair was ready.


They headed towards the warm up arena, thankfully it was indoors! It was one of two, and it had high ceilings that were touched by similarly high windows. Outside them, snow falling down at a rapid rate, and icicles hung from the very bristles on the pine trees. Ariel could see riders over the stone edge in the dressage arena outdoors. They would have to go out there... very soon, but for now she focused on the warm up. Turns on the forehand were the first step to get Jay focused on her leg cues. They did leg yields and shoulder in. Then renvers, simple lead changes, flying changes and half pass. He was using his haunches so well today and he lifted in the front just as the pros would! His balance was impeccable and he was soft and supple despite the cold weather. By all points, Ariel decided he was ready! Their names were called.


Ariel braced herself as a stable hand opened the door for them to head out to the show arena, and Jay seemed to do the same, his ears flicking away from the cold gust that blew in. Ariel called our a grateful thank you to the man and trotted out into the blizzard. The rides before them must have shaken off the snow that covered the blades of grass of the ring. They entered at A a beautiful collected canter and at X came directly down to a halt. It was perfect! But then... at the very last moment, Jay stuck out a hoof behind. Crap... Ariel thought and she prayed this wasn't foreshadowing for what was to come in their ride. Her nerves began seeping down into her hot stallion. He too, began to fidget, even as they took off at a canter again and tracked left. She hoped to pass it off as shivers as they moved into shoulder in down the side until they met E. A ten meter circle into ronvers down the remaining rail. Down center line again and half pass from D to H, where they completed a flying change. As they cantered past the judges, this time, though, the nerves had swept away. Jay was doing fantastic!! He half-passed again from M to X, flying lead change, back to F. At A they came down to trot. They came around the corner, and at K they began passage to E, then switched to piaffe. He stayed in place and still had an active hind end - JUST what the judges were looking for! Back to passage, they came down to walk at H, and a rein back went beautifully at C. They proceeded again and had their free walk from M to E. His Spanish influence was surely visible now because even on a loose rein, he almost had a Spanish walk! He was collected again afterwards and as he reached K, he picked up the left lead again and proceeded down the center line. At D, he planted his hind end and lifted his shoulders into the air and rotated in a glorious canter pirouette! A simple change of lead at X and then at G another canter pirouette the other direction and tracked right at C. He switched leads every 2 strides across the diagonal before coming down center line again and came to X. Another canter halt transition to end the test and this time no hoof stuck out! A chilly ride, by a warm, warm finish!!!!


Ariel was smiling at the salute, and if Jamie were here, she would have surely snapped a picture of the happy team.



My stories are always so long. Dx I apologize if you read all of that! Anyways... hopefully Jamie will be competing soon and then the two best friends can be united again! After all, they're always a winning team when one is helping the other.


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Comments: 46

WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-10 21:28:28 +0000 UTC]

"Oh well, more snow!" xD I hear you there!

Looks lovely though, I like the overall color scheme.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-10 22:10:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It'll be great after all the seasonal competitions have passed! Sunny weather is definitely more cheerful to draw!

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-11 10:29:31 +0000 UTC]

It is, but at the same time, sunny skies are kind of generic in pictures. Snow and rain and mud (or at least sunset shows) just seems to add something to art.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-11 21:01:57 +0000 UTC]

Very true! Especially like what you said about sunset art. It adds warmth to the image, and gives it depth!

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-11 21:35:28 +0000 UTC]

I have seen some shows taking place at night, which as far as realism goes that sounds silly to me, but considering these are all art-based shows then it's cool because everyone can use glowing stuff like lamps and whatever, and starry skies above, etc. I like shows that add details like that, make the place/setting interesting.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-12 05:32:44 +0000 UTC]

Definitely! When I think about it, I have yet to do a HARPG picture at night... I must fix that ASAP!

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-12 11:13:23 +0000 UTC]

You could enter this one night show with me, I guess! xD

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Well, it's not like the MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT but it says there are stars out.

I really wish I could find shows for something other than dressage   at least they also have jumping, I can squeak around that and still enter, but ah, can't do dressage unless it's in-hand.

don't people ever get tired of drawing dressage moves? I wanna draw some barrels or trail rides or something! I wish there were some TWH shows around.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-12 15:26:20 +0000 UTC]

Is there a TWH HARPG group on DeviantART? If so they could most definitely refer you to some shows, I would assume! For now I only know this show that offers a separate class of something other than dressage: nawaii.deviantart.com/journal/…


Just keep looking I'm sure they're out there! And yes, I definitely get tired of drawing dressage moves. I'm a dressage rider in RL, though, so I guess it is easier than show jumping or other disciplines for me.

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-12 16:01:54 +0000 UTC]

It's funny because where I live, EVERYBODY has a TWH, everybody rides western, and all the local shows are gaited classes, fast rack races and then barrels. But here on dA, all the stuff I'm used to is nowhere in sight!

I have found one TWH group and registered there but apparently it's been on hiatus a long time and is just now trying to get started back up. I hope they fix it up.

I'm in realbreed-realcolor and they are doing a little survey right now to see what kind of shows people would like and having people vote in stuff, just seems not many people vote for the "something besides dressage" categories. BL

And ohey, I've already bugged the person running this show about dress codes, I asked them what "liberty" was. Are you entering? It was linked on somebodysuch's drawing and I clicked and snooped. It could have been you.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-12 21:53:46 +0000 UTC]

I have a tooon of show entries to get done right now. I'm planning on entering my Dutch Warmblood stallion in Rosenhill's 3DE show, and then one of my geldings in the 3DE class in SilviasDesires winter show, and then one of my mares in the same winter event. So that's 7 total entries due by Feb. 28. BUT! I have never done a collaboration before and would be super excited to do one with you if we find a Pas de Deux class!

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-12 23:07:33 +0000 UTC]

I've never done one before either. I've made bases for my friends to make OCs out of and drawn my char on a page while my friend put theirs next to it, but never had anybody color my lines before. It sounds neat but you know, only if you want to and have time for it. o3o It might help if the picture was something useful. I could help you make a ref for one of your ponies maybe?

Omg 7 shows by Feb 28 :'D I'm in one for sure, and waiting on another to let me know if it's okay for me to join theirs, and if they do then just those two events will keep me busy forever. I started figuring maybe I should ask people first before I start drawing up pictures. I've never been IN an event before. D: I'm drawing up my first now, but keep finding others I want to try. I have to tell myself to finish them one at a time before entering another. xD;

Never entered any before and I'm awful nervous about it. ;A;" I guess it's better to ask in advance before spending 2 weeks drawing and THEN get told "Ummm you don't really qualify for this" or something. D;

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-13 02:57:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you will qualify! No problem! Most shows list restrictions in the show journal so as long as constellation meets those I am sure you will be fine! As for the actual completion of the show entries finishing one before they other is always a good thing! It's king of like getting one school assignment done before beginning another. At any rate, I can't wait to see your first show entry! I remember mine. I entered 3 times for 2 horses in one show so I had six total entries and I checked everyday to see who my competition was. First shows are the best! You will have such a great time with it!

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-13 11:18:59 +0000 UTC]

the only thing I'm worried about is like, I was pretty much under the impression that most of this generally revolves around the horses, right? usually I see people don't even draw the rider, or they only draw up to the shoulders so they won't have to draw a face, etc. I kind of got the feeling most people didn't really make characters, they just came up with a name that sounded cool for the sake of the registration form.

but some people really do come up with in-depth characters...

anyway, I've yet to see any rules regarding how you make your rider character, so that's what I'm nervous about. all I ever see is just that you need to list the name/age. there's never any rules saying I can't do what I'm doing, but I get the feeling that's only because nobody's done it before.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-14 05:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Well what are you planning to have your character do that makes them so difficult from other riders entering shows? I'm sure it's nothing that can't prevent you from entering a show! Besides, as far as I've noticed, the most in-depth characters always score higher than those that write a couple sentence story. I definitely wish I was better at characterization, but you seem to have a real talent for it!

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-14 17:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Yuichi isn't a character, he's a real person, and nobody has specifically said anywhere that your rider has to be a character you made up... I kind of expect some people to say my entries don't count because of that. I don't know. I'm kind of under the impression it doesn't really matter who is ON the horse, it's mostly the horse itself that matters. And it's all based on effort and stuff anyway... Maybe I'm just being paranoid, I worry too much about everything. :'D It's not like in edition to being real he's also a world famous trainer/jockey/something like that and is supposed to have some advantage because of who he is.

I do think people who have put lots of work into their characters and have written out stories about them and such should outplace me, they deserve credit for all that. Winning isn't important to me anyway, I just like to participate, draw these cool show events instead of just reusing my stable background all the time, etc.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-14 23:14:54 +0000 UTC]

I didn't realize he was real! That is so cool! No wonder your writing about him is so well-captured! I find it hard to write about people I just made up in my head. And like I said, if I were the judge of one of these competitions, I would be a little more flexible than most hosts are in their rules. Who's to say you can't make art about a real person? If anything I think it's really cool and unique and is refreshing to see among this almost entirely made up world! I hope whatever show you're entering allows it because I want to see more from Yuichi and Constellation - at a show too!

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-15 14:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks so much ;A; -hides under blanket-

He LOVES the comments people leave him on his website, but it won't let me type anything so... I made him a horse? I wouldn't bother with all this if I didn't truly believe he'd appreciate it. I don't think horses are exactly one of his interests, but he likes animals and I feel like if I draw nothing but him I'll look like an obsessive freak. I like to exercise my own creativity a little and have him do something in the pictures other than just stand around. I think it makes the pictures a little more interesting/memorable, and I had a lot of fun making Constellation and her home.

I saw somewhere that one of the groups said you could only have fictional horses in your pedigree, so I presume if you're not allowed to make Secretariat your great grandsire then prolly no real riders in that group as well, but I don't recall which one had that written on it and I really don't see why it really matters either. :S

I considered drawing her with a character rider in events but that just feels like it defeats the purpose, so I've decided if the event/shows get niffy about it, I'll just come up with my own places to take them.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-17 00:45:46 +0000 UTC]

There you go! If you can go to the shows other people put on, you can always have your own! And I'm sure that's not a rule for every show, I would be surprised if they were. Just keep looking! Besides, unless they do extensive research, they probably won't know he's a real person, so you're safe.

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-17 12:32:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, most people aren't clicking his name link and are assuming I made him up, and it kind of makes me feel bad/sneaky. D: If it looks like I pretended to make him up just so I could win a show, I'm afraid it would hurt his feelings. If he's judged in an event I want people to know who they're judging. I would rather be disqualified because he's not a character than win because people didn't know he was real.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-17 16:24:54 +0000 UTC]

I definitely see your point! And then I would definitely bring it to the judge's attention just to make sure it's okay. But if he's not a well known rider in real life, which I don't think he is because you said he loves animals, but horses aren't necessarily his prime interest, I don't think they will have a problem with it. Just let them know he is real.

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-17 16:29:25 +0000 UTC]

The only horse I've ever seen him ride was a carousel :'D~

I donno. I wonder if I might end up just doing my own thing. I've heard so much about how drama-llama the horse community is on dA, I can already see things people might do. Like if I beat someone in a show, it'd be all, "But that's not even your own character and I worked really hard on my story and murrr!!!"

I asked someone if it was all right for me to be in their event, in a note and a comment, and they haven't answered. I hate when people do that and I'm not sure what to do.  This might end up being the only event she participates in. I don't like conflicts. That wasn't the point of the drawings. If it doesn't make people happy, I don't want to do it.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-17 16:37:03 +0000 UTC]

Well don't make the decision never to compete again before you even heard if they'll allow the real person to be in the art! Honestly, I don't see the point in art either if it doesn't make you happy, so to put rules on art just defeats the purpose in my opinion. The less rules the better! Besides the obvious be respectful, give proper credit sort of things. I hope they respond quickly though! I understand your frustration in wanting to begin on such an awesome idea!

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-17 16:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I'm not sure what to do when they don't answer. It's like... well they didn't say "no", so it's okay? or they didn't say "yes" so it's not okay? annoying. :/ ~

Well for starters, I figured it's best to make that part as clear as possible.  I decided to ask all the event holders before I start drawing anything, and if anyone else has a problem with it later, they can take that up with the person who made the show.

She hasn't been in any events at all yet, and it seems that isn't necessary for people to appreciate her.

I don't know... I just do things differently, and I know it probably confuses people, and I'm worried about it.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-17 18:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry too much! If it makes you happy to draw him and Constellation then no one can tell you differently! And like you said, people already appreciate her even without being in competitions so if shows aren't for her than we will all be just as excited to see her around the barn.

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-17 20:56:45 +0000 UTC]

~

The person from realbreed-realcolor, that had the voting for events OTHER THAN DRESSAGE FOR A CHANGE, just told me it was okay to put him there soooooo~ that event is going to get drawn before the one that never answered me. Bc -flaps wrist at them-

I would have been disappointed if he couldn't be in that one cuz I helped come up with events to put on the list and stuff.  I have a cute barrel-racing idea I can finally get to draw.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-18 06:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness I can't wait to see it come to life! I love your stories, they have so much personality!!!

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-18 11:58:51 +0000 UTC]

I don't like literally roleplaying Yuichi, like I won't have him "talking" to other people's characters (he doesn't say anything in any of my comics, ever) or anything like that... but I've seen him, erm... "compete" ... before and... I don't know if he's actually trying and just can't win, or if he just doesn't care and screws up on purpose because it's funnier than taking it seriously, but I got all kinds of ideas for Constellation farting around in competitions she has NO HOPE of winning and just making it fun/entertaining instead of being impressive, cuz that's the way he rolls and I love that about him.

THANKS SO MUCH! -works really hard-

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-18 17:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha I love how he doesn't take it seriously! That's way more fun than stressing over getting everything perfect for a show!

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-18 19:21:48 +0000 UTC]

  He's just a lovable little ball of lovableness.  I hope he likes his silly show pony.

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Nawaii In reply to WhiteFoxFarm [2014-02-19 05:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Who wouldn't?

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WhiteFoxFarm In reply to Nawaii [2014-02-19 10:12:31 +0000 UTC]

:'3 ♥

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MapleFilly [2014-01-03 16:16:40 +0000 UTC]

This looks awesome ! Did you use a brush for the snow? It looks amazing! What a cute horse

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Nawaii In reply to MapleFilly [2014-01-03 17:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! I did use a brush, on Gimp it's labelled Splats 01. I covered the page with it and then used motion blur to get the effect.

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MapleFilly In reply to Nawaii [2014-01-03 19:45:20 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Thanks

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Snofte [2014-01-02 20:28:58 +0000 UTC]

What a wonderful feeling of it, and a lovely horse!

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Nawaii In reply to Snofte [2014-01-02 21:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you so much!

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MissDudette [2014-01-02 17:47:56 +0000 UTC]

It is a great background! Good luck

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Nawaii In reply to MissDudette [2014-01-02 18:15:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you think so! Thank you.

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VirtualLithy [2014-01-02 14:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous snow effect!

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Nawaii In reply to VirtualLithy [2014-01-02 18:15:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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DestinyNoel [2014-01-02 05:25:57 +0000 UTC]

LOVE it! The horse,rider, and background... all of it! I'd say you have a swell chance to win ^^

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Nawaii In reply to DestinyNoel [2014-01-02 05:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow, what a sweet comment, thank you!

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DestinyNoel In reply to Nawaii [2014-01-02 05:39:17 +0000 UTC]

No problem <3 and thanks for the Llama ^^

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Nawaii In reply to DestinyNoel [2014-01-02 05:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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Song-Wolf-Farm [2014-01-02 04:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Sweet! Makes me feel cold, but then again, that could be northern WI weather lol *oogles the tail*

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Nawaii In reply to Song-Wolf-Farm [2014-01-02 05:17:15 +0000 UTC]

You live in WI?! You poor thing! I will send some hot chocolate your way!

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