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Naxaron — Time to prove

Published: 2019-08-01 01:29:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 371; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Almost done with uploading everything. Story comes tommorow X_X


3rd Annual Summer Show Storyline - START  


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-two years ago-

“More rhythm! You will never have the right distance for the jump! Come on, you stupid. This way you won't even survive the style round of the show jumping and you will even receive penalty points for time. THEN you must be ashamed of yourself if that happens. "

Duncan's scream was loud and clear. One that Iluska regularly heard for her Show Jumping and cross training, which she unfortunately had twice a week. Iluska was definitely not a bad rider, but she is very caused and thinks too much about the jumps. This to the displeasure of the grumpy man in the middle of the ring. He had decided that Iluska is an easy victim. For half a year she was harassed and she got references to her head. The young lady come out of hell and anther hell took place. Certainly after one of the biggest decisions she had to make that morning.

Buck like Bas did his jumps well, but was restrained by his absent rider. It is a very brave stallion that anyone could be placed on without problems. Only the most skilled horsemen could get the best out of what Buck had to offer. Duncan had managed to make Iluska drive more daringly, but today he saw nothing of it to his frustration.

Iluska saw everything blurry and double. The hospital visit was definitely not positive. She was given antibiotics against the infections. Her stomach is terribly nagging with pain and her body is struggling. "Take it easy and take a day off," she was told, but she would still start her work on time and told no one something. No one should know what a stupid mistake she made. It was her secret...

"LOOK UP!"

Iluska was shocked and suddenly saw the jump ahead. Instead of going along, she braked by pulling on the reins and Buck refused for the first time in his life with her. His head plummeted, Iluska lost her balance and flew forward almost in a slow motion way from her horse. She smashes her back against the obstacle while Buck dived back in fright. He even shouts loudly before he came to see how his rider was doing. For a moment everthing start to become black for the young lady while she tries to calm down her breathing. 

“Unbelievable. Pack your freaking stuff and stop what you are doing. What a stupid fall this was. What a shame. "

Buck's breeze brought her back to earth and Iluska's eyes become watery. She stood up even when her body screamed in pain. Her stomach ache was no longer that bad with the stabbing pain of her back at the moment. Her hands fought for a moment to stop shaking to grab her reins. It took her some minutes to get back on her horse without screaming and crying from her pain. She grabbed her courage and remained silent to continue the lesson. It was also her last working day before she was formed into the person she is today.


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-Present day-


Everthing it started 2 years ago and here she is again. Duncan is her jugde for the class. Deseo was in shape, ready for his first show and she was becoming more and more charmed by the stallion. He came in like a lean long lanky that didn't know what to do with his legs. Every day, she discovers new wounds on his legs, because he taps himself again. Now it is a big powerhouse that really has a drive in its movements. Iluska greeted the jury and did hold Duncan's gaze a little longer while Deseo galloped on his place. If eyes could kill, she was already been disqualified for killing the jugde. The bell rang, causing the stallion to explode with energy that Iluska knew how to use. The large stallion was quite agile and jumped far above the obstacles. He certainly had potential, but you had to be able to dose it.


She was no longer a scared, insecure and naive girl like that day from the training. She no longer kept her mouth closed and certainly no longer bowed to those bastards like Duncan. The only question is that she didn't end up in a dark hole. Her answer is: no

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Horse Damned of Deseo

Rider Iluska Licharzo

Breed: Trakehner  mix

GenderStallion

Age: 5 years

StableUndead Naxx'ramas

ClassNovice Show Jumping

Show CT Dutch Equine Summer Show


Reference: Own Stock


© NBrongers  / Naxaron  /  Nalonyda  

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Comments: 3

GutCaballo [2019-08-04 08:52:13 +0000 UTC]

ooh I love this picture! Especially the colors and the background fits perfectly with the pose of the horse

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SundaysPony [2019-08-01 07:19:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow that is absolutely stunning, I love the colors and the perspective is amazing! The composition of this piece is absolutley fantastic!

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Jian89 [2019-08-01 06:42:50 +0000 UTC]

Love the angle in here

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