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I saw the SootHouse video on Miitomo a week ago and I had such a visceral reaction to the fucking post at the top that I had to do a response featuring my own fan characters, Curio (Lucario) and Shine (Luxray).

Seeing how this is my first comic, it would be nice to hear a critique on it, mostly on the set up and punchline. The art is a bit loose (mostly because of my own laziness and being out of practice) so the characters look a bit wonky this time around, if they weren't before.

Chapter links:
1. Dendemille's Daredevil.
2. Dendemille's Pests.
3. Dendemille's Dealer.
4. Dendemille's Mosher.
5. Dendemille's Brawlers.
6. Dendemille's Riders
7. Ambrette's Teachers
8. Ambrette's Subjects

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Description
I saw the SootHouse video on Miitomo a week ago and I had such a visceral reaction to the fucking post at the top that I had to do a response featuring my own fan characters, Curio (Lucario) and Shine (Luxray).

Seeing how this is my first comic, it would be nice to hear a critique on it, mostly on the set up and punchline. The art is a bit loose (mostly because of my own laziness and being out of practice) so the characters look a bit wonky this time around, if they weren't before.

Chapter links:
1. Dendemille's Daredevil.
2. Dendemille's Pests.
3. Dendemille's Dealer.
4. Dendemille's Mosher.
5. Dendemille's Brawlers.
6. Dendemille's Riders
7. Ambrette's Teachers
8. Ambrette's Subjects

Mirror to FFN:
Mirror to AO3: