Comments: 12
Byeonaraye [2012-05-11 11:55:05 +0000 UTC]
Nicely written - this is one of the better written reactions to becoming a Pokeuman I've seen around here. Also, even I, a grammar/spelling Nazi, can't see anything you did wrong there, so well done on that too.
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UmbraDragonX [2011-09-18 01:45:50 +0000 UTC]
ohh... nice
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Man-in-crowd-4 [2011-08-01 07:30:20 +0000 UTC]
Great story! This is really good, keep it up!
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ArmaggedonDoom [2011-08-01 01:00:00 +0000 UTC]
awesome story. I am curious how the vans can operate underwater
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tobias1532 [2011-08-01 00:36:04 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting chapter. I might be able to convince Tobias to send you some training tips, one Dewott to another. If he tells me, I"ll send a note your way.
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Galactic-Rainbow [2011-07-31 23:09:10 +0000 UTC]
Great Pokeumans story! I really like the idea of the Atlantean Base being underwater.
One thing I don't understand, though, is the speaker's mom. She said that there would be a birthday present for him, but the next day, he says that she and his dad are away for the weekend. What was up with that?
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Galactic-Rainbow In reply to necrozuma [2011-08-01 17:01:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for explaining that. His mom seems mean, though--it's his 16th birthday, and apparently, he still doesn't get the present...
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