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Published: 2010-02-22 00:18:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 9005; Favourites: 211; Downloads: 140
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She did not say anything. There simply was nothing to say anymore - everything had been discussed a million times over and there seemed to be no way out from the corner those discussions had led them. Air of the room felt colder than it should have. He packed the last of his necessities listening to the shuffling sounds of her dress as she moved away from him. She had gone to hold their son, the little creature sobbing with slumped shoulders.

He knew he should not look at them, for his own sake, but he couldn't bear to just walk out the door. Kolyat was crying, every one of his loud sniffles tearing open a new wound in Thane's heart.

"Why can't father stay?"

Irikah didn't respond, but simply kissed her son, rocking slighty in a vain attempt to soothe the child. For the love of Arashu, she had asked every night for years now, why did it have to be this way?

A light touch on her shoulder notified her that the man behind all this grief was trying to approach them once more. Irikah shuddered and dodged away from her husband. He let out a pained gasp at her reaction.

"I am... sorry. For what it is worth, I will not be gone more than a month," Thane Krios meekly offered to his family. No response. Desperation, guilt, love and fear strangled him, burning his chest, killing his resolution, murdering his calm and concentration. How he wished Irikah would kiss him goodbye the way she once used to. How he wished little Kolyat's tears weren't quite so bitter.

"Siha, please-"

"Husband. Just go."

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Thanealiciously dedicated to the ladies over at the Neck Snap Appreciation Society, as always.

I can't possibly be the only one who had her heart weeping at Thane's story about how he left his family one bit a time?

I've had images of Irikah floating around my head for days, waiting to be put on a paper. And for some reason, I'm rather fascinated by the Krios family overall. You would think I'd just be kind of happy that the family is-no-more, leaving Thane up for grabs, but yah. Fangirls. You never know about their weird thought patterns.

I'm not 100% happy with the way things turned out, but I still feel like I really bled my heart onto this thing, haha. I bet it's the angst, that stuff gets me every time.

Photoshop and Wacom, my whole third (3) fully digital thing! I'm still pretty much just experimenting with pressure sensitivity and colors - and familiriazing myself with a tablet. This time I left the lineart sketchy just to see what that would look like - only to be able to say now that I much prefer the clean lineart, hehe.
Both art AND story by yours truly this time.
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Comments: 129

RainbowRenders [2013-04-23 12:35:28 +0000 UTC]

This is the most beautiful Irikah version I saw till now.
Wonderful job.

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bbb35 [2013-02-12 20:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Awww. So Sad, yet so beautifu a drawing

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Sgtpaintbrush [2012-07-06 06:47:28 +0000 UTC]

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PainHidanFan [2012-05-22 18:49:26 +0000 UTC]

It's so cute T^T <3

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Kota-Artic-Wind [2012-04-02 05:50:56 +0000 UTC]

I love the Detail and the story behind it.

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Sparky28 [2012-03-03 20:44:27 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad Great job with this scene!

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Compass-Wave [2011-09-03 02:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Heartbreaking, but a beautiful picture. I love your depiction of Irikah.

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Szu-Yu [2011-06-03 09:40:02 +0000 UTC]

The atmosphere captured is just so sad! Amazing work, my friend! Irikah is so beautiful!

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ArdhistiCAT [2011-04-03 07:51:35 +0000 UTC]

is that the original past of Thane Krios

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NeitiCora In reply to ArdhistiCAT [2011-04-03 08:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Just my version of it.

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ArdhistiCAT In reply to NeitiCora [2011-04-09 04:00:34 +0000 UTC]

owh,
i tought it was real,
cuz during i played ME2 i've never seen Thane's wife

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Rana-E [2010-11-02 09:56:05 +0000 UTC]

I don't even know where to begin!

First, Irkah! HOLY CRAP WOMAN! She is so freaking beautiful and and womanly and and beautiful!! <3
The drawing is awesome in itself but add to it the angsty bit you wrote and it's an emotional roller coaster ride. I cried and I'm not even kidding!

Kolyat's big head isn't a problem for me, it didn't take anything away from the story, so I believe no, you're not screwed over.

I love this, a million times I love this.

and I really really really really would love to see more of your work.

Keep it up! <3

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NeitiCora In reply to Rana-E [2010-11-02 18:25:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much such a wonderful comment! I squeed inside - and a little on the outside too, to be honest. I didn't want to make you cry though, sorry!

I think my grasp of my new-ish tools, fully digital drawing, is getting much better and I'm kinda tempted to do more Irikah just to make up for the flaws that I now see in this piece - so I'm really glad to hear someone sees through the mistakes and into the heart I tried to pour into this.

As for more of my work, working on it, working on it. As long as you like drellsies, you should be pretty happy with what I've got coming!

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Rana-E In reply to NeitiCora [2010-11-03 06:03:10 +0000 UTC]

YAY for more drellsies!<3

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HeavensWingsRainDown [2010-08-06 16:20:17 +0000 UTC]

OMG THIS IS AMAZING! THANE ROCKS! I don't want to ruin anything for you, if you didn't finish the game or something. But I want to talk about it so much!

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NeitiCora In reply to HeavensWingsRainDown [2010-11-01 22:18:44 +0000 UTC]

I've finished the game a bunch of times, no need to worry about spoiling me.

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SeppunZetsumi [2010-08-05 06:23:09 +0000 UTC]

How could Thane leave such a pretty wife behind?

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NeitiCora In reply to SeppunZetsumi [2010-11-02 18:22:47 +0000 UTC]

I don't know, takes some spine to leave and leave and leave yet again for another mission. Oh poor Thane.

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SeppunZetsumi In reply to NeitiCora [2010-11-02 22:59:20 +0000 UTC]

I know. Poor guy. He did what he had to.

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noobersen [2010-04-08 01:34:55 +0000 UTC]

Woa awesome!!! Its like something Thane could tell Shepard ingame! Love how you illustrated Irikah

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NeitiCora In reply to noobersen [2010-11-02 18:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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noobersen In reply to NeitiCora [2010-11-02 19:44:33 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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vigoreyes21 [2010-03-15 22:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Woah! your Irikah looks great. I know it will be difficult to draw a beautiful dame with reptilian features. You managed not only to make her looks beautiful but also royal, tender and loving.
Love her clothes too.
I'm wondering if you'll write a longer story? (pleeeeease XD)

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NeitiCora In reply to vigoreyes21 [2010-11-02 18:20:04 +0000 UTC]

First of all, thank you for all the kind words. Much appreciated as long as it has taken me to get to replying.

As for the longer story... well the truth is that I don't really do fanfiction, well didn't at least. I actually wrote a one-shot a while ago, my first ever fic published. I'm still kinda terrified of writing longer pieces though, but if I ever was to write something, I'm sure it would feature Thane and probably Irikah too.

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Felinna [2010-03-12 14:53:05 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I love shading!

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NeitiCora In reply to Felinna [2010-11-02 18:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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miraclemight [2010-03-01 00:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Aww...poor Siha.

(wow,Thane has been wearing that outfit for 10 years?! Just joking)

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NeitiCora In reply to miraclemight [2010-03-01 14:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Yah, tell me about it. But maybe now that I'm more confident in drawing a Thane that actually looks like Thane, I'm gonna go wild and draw him... *drumrolls* WEARING SOMETHING ELSE!

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DeadlyNinja [2010-02-28 14:29:41 +0000 UTC]

that is just too sad..the story made me tear up it would be so sad that it happened this way (which probably did) and he didnt even get a kiss goodbye before she died

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NeitiCora In reply to DeadlyNinja [2010-02-28 19:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm really fascinated by that part of Thane's story... leaving them one bit at a time and I'd imagine at some point it had to come to this.

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Leyne [2010-02-27 12:21:41 +0000 UTC]

I love both the drawing and the ficlet, you did a great job in capturing emotions! Irikah's robes are gorgeous, she looks graceful and noble.

Don't worry, you're not the only one who found Thane's backstory heartbreaking. He's such an intriguing character, deep, complex, contradictory...

Thanks for writing this little piece, it's short but very powerful.

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NeitiCora In reply to Leyne [2010-02-27 22:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for such a lovely comment! I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed it. I seem to go for short and emotional ficlets... don't know if I could manage writing anything longer though. I feel like it's often true, even in literature, that "You say it best when you say nothing at all". It's not what you actually write, but what's written in between the lines.

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Leyne In reply to NeitiCora [2010-02-28 08:55:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! And I agree with you about writing.
My fics are usually short, too. I'd like to write humorous, novel-sized stories, but it looks like my brain is programmed on angsty one-shots. Or fluffy one-shots.

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NeitiCora In reply to Leyne [2010-02-28 20:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Angsty and fluffy oneshots are perfectly fine, don't blame yourself! As a reader I actually much prefer one-shots/shortish fics, because too often I a multi-chapter fic just gets abandoned in the middle.

Now you got me curious, do you have any of these angsty/fluffy fanfics of yours posted somewhere?

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Leyne In reply to NeitiCora [2010-02-28 22:09:34 +0000 UTC]

Ahem. Not yet. Actually I haven't written much, and this will probably sound extremely stupid, but I'm very shy when it comes to my writing... I 've never had the courage to upload anything.
I'd like to post something though, I just have to find the guts to do it.

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NeitiCora In reply to Leyne [2010-03-01 15:21:13 +0000 UTC]

No no, not stupid at all. Or at least I can sort of top that stupidity - I've written like.. hundreds of pages for RPs - text that is just like fiction - but I'm still shy about writing actual fiction. I've drabbled this and that, and I still don't have the courage to write an actual fic, let alone post it. X)

Maybe we should just get over ourselves, huh?

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Leyne In reply to NeitiCora [2010-03-01 17:32:35 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling. ^^

Hehe. Yeah, we should.

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Dacha-thwei [2010-02-25 21:42:42 +0000 UTC]

This is a very well-drawn picture, I like how you draw the Drells - I can't draw them at all (I've tried, but bah...)

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NeitiCora In reply to Dacha-thwei [2010-02-26 02:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm not really happy with this yet, but I'll keep to it as long as it takes to create drells I'm actually satisfied with.

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Dacha-thwei In reply to NeitiCora [2010-02-26 21:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Yer welcome! maybe you could give me some tips of how to draw'em I should really need one

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NeitiCora In reply to Dacha-thwei [2010-02-28 20:43:04 +0000 UTC]

Sure I can give you tips, but I'm definitely no pro... The way I work, I just have several references of Thane and Kolyat from different angles and I try to go with those, following the details and trying to concentrate on the distinct features that define them as Drell and not just human with a green skin (facial structure differences, mainly cheek bones, eyebrow area and nose, for example). Was there something specific you wanted to hear about?

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lubyelfears [2010-02-23 21:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful work, Cora. The emotions are almost tangible.

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NeitiCora In reply to lubyelfears [2010-02-23 23:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, darling! Highly appreciated. Now, where's moar TIM?

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InverseReality-2 [2010-02-23 07:21:19 +0000 UTC]

The art is awesome, but I keep thinking of Kolyat in drag when I look at his mom... XD Sorry, I should take this more seriously... it's a tragic story! ;___;

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NeitiCora In reply to InverseReality-2 [2010-02-23 16:32:30 +0000 UTC]



This... deserves to be drawn. Or written. Kolyat in drag. Young assassin-wannabe going undercover.

And on a more serious note, thanks for the kind words again. You see how we're moving dangerously towards the situation where I'm writing fanfiction and you're betaing it and giving me the beating of my life for being crap?

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InverseReality-2 In reply to NeitiCora [2010-02-23 17:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Bring it. And FYI, I'm a very nice reviewer. I have good references!

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NeitiCora In reply to InverseReality-2 [2010-02-23 20:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Well you're The One I'd trust to give me real, spot-on crit and not just stroke my ego, so I don't really care THAT much for nice, but your ability to point out the problems in text and give suggestions on how to improve the whole thing. As much as my ego likes stroking, that wouldn't exactly make the fic any less painful to my potential, poor readers.

All of this assuming I ever actually write something else than these snippets to go with pics, haha.

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InverseReality-2 In reply to NeitiCora [2010-02-24 12:16:11 +0000 UTC]

I think feedback is best tempered by telling the writer both what they did right (first) as well as what didn't work for the reader. So write something longer! *POKE*

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NeitiCora In reply to InverseReality-2 [2010-02-25 13:51:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm kinda caught up in an art-spree right now, but IF I ever write anything, you'll be the first to know.

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BlazedStarbon [2010-02-23 01:23:15 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful and sad and amazing!
Simply, breathtaking.

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