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NepherimCrystal — Prince Rielle
Published: 2009-04-30 04:14:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 786; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 8
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An ollld character of mine that I've never been able to do justice. He is a part of an elven race that are Descended from Fae. They have Vestiges of wings that sprout when they reach sexual maturity. Hope you like him. I'm proud of how this turned out.Related content
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Really liking this style^^
And the bird is rly beautiful!
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I'm loving his hair and wings. :3
/pets his wings
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/nudges toward messanger
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/delayed reaction, signs on LAAATE
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Absolutely gorgeous! I love your new style ^__^
Same question; if you'd like some critique I'll gladly help out with some pointers =]
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I'm always open to suggestions.
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Okay then.
-Whilst most of the colours are very well chosen and fit nicely together, I think the bright green looks a little off. It doesn't really fit in with the rest of the piece. For next artworks I would recommend choosing a good and balanced colour palette; colour is an important way to capture a mood or a certain feeling or atmosphere.
-To me, the fingers look a little thick and pointed. Of course the person has long nails, but to me it looks as if some fingers are actually pointed too, which seemed a little strange to me. Also, the little finger on her left (our right) arm, should be at least bent a little more, I think. I tried it and I am unable to keep my finger straight like that. Could be me though, I have weird, crooked little fingers. I must compliment you here as well, though, because I think that apart from this, the hands are very well-done. They are extremely hard to draw and you pulled it off very well, it looks realistic.
-I adore the style in which you've drawn the face. I don't have much to say here. Perhaps just a small nit-picky thing. I've noticed on this, and another piece as well, that your noses seem to look a little wide and flat and not as a nose should be shaped (although noses are annoyingly hard, I cannot draw them correctly either). [link] Perhaps this could help you(/us) out a little?
-Do I spy the smudge tool? D: If I may say this: no matter how easy it may seem, I would strongly recommend against using the smudge tool. Although it takes a lot more time, smudging without using that tool is really worth it! Basically, you do that by choosing a colour that is, in saturation, value and hue, in between the two colours that you want to smudge and use it to mix the other two.
Apart from that, there is really nothing to say. I am awed by your improvement and I'm extremely looking forward to seeing your new pieces. Love these so far.
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Beautiful!!!!!!
wow. wonderful job on the painting!
would you like some small critiques?
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Sure. I know I've still got to learn to color clothe and stuff.
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I read what shiaine said and I have to agree with him/her a bit.
Plus I have a couple other things to. Don't be too over whelmed. I'm going to keep it simple and not a novel.
1. The neck is doing funny funny things it looks a little too straight. And you forgot to put shadows on it to match the rest of the body. ^.^ Plus boys have their little Adam's apple. At first I thought it was a girl because it was missing.
2. Try not to use the blur or smudge tool. I used too.... [link] and now I use a different technique [link] Though this one still has a small amount of smudge... Oh! This one has none [link]
YOu can just see the difference. If you want me to show you I can.
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HOORAY! Its finished its finished its FIIIIIINISHED! UFUFUFUFUFUFU! I got to see all the WIPs happy happy! Also I STILL freaking love the birdy
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