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Description A long time ago, there existed the small village of Ravencroft. In Ravencroft, there lived a beautiful young lady with porcelain skin and unusually bright red eyes. Her name was Laura Knightwell.

Laura was no ordinary young lady, for she was born as the daughter of a witch. As one might expect, witches were unwelcome in the town of Ravencroft. They were social outcasts who lived in small camps in the woods just outside the village. For many years, the villagers were led to believe that witches are evil and untrustworthy. In most of the world, they are. These witches, however, were a very different story.

These witches did not use their magic for evil purposes, but rather for very good ones. At one point, they all used to be normal, everyday women who lived in the village among the others. You see, these women did not choose to become witches. In fact, they did not just learn magic alone. They were born with it. These witches were a rare breed where their magical abilities manifested themselves around adulthood. These witches joined an alliance to use their powers to ward off the demons that inhabited the land and threatened the village. However, they mainly retained their magic for healing purposes, which they disguised as herbs and other substances. For generations, the witches taught their eldest children how to cast spells and brew special potions in secret.

However, their supernatural powers came with a hefty price. Over time, as the witches continued to forge their spells and fight off the demons, their magic would gradually drain them of their humanity. Their magic not only aided them, but it also corrupted them. Their magic would twist their minds and give them very grotesque appearances, with cold, black eyes with piercing red irises, discolored skin, long, black, claw-like nails, long and serrated yellow teeth, and unusual red marks running down from the lower half of their eyelids. They didn't turn evil. They may have had an intimidating presence, but they were still relatively caring people. However, their personalities did become a tad more "kooky and eccentric."

When one of the witches who lived in the village would become "feral," they would soon leave the village to join the others in the woods, knowing they would soon be put to death if anyone saw them. From then on, these witches would dedicate the rest of their lives protecting the boarders of the village from the demons who wait to feast on them.

Once Laura had come to age, her mother (Center Witch on the Upper-Left) sent her to live in the village to assist those in need. For the most part, Laura lived out her days without a hitch.

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- On occasion, Laura fluctuates between her normal-self and her feral-self (Lower-Left), but manages to suppress it before others can see her. She is always anxious when this happens, fearing her wicked side with show itself at the wrong time and exposing her. But she also can't help but find a sense of ease and satisfaction whenever she uses her spells or goes into her feral mode.

- In one instance, Laura falls in love with a nice young man named Jonathan (Lower-Left) and the two plan to be married. But when the village is hit by a harsh winter, many villagers become severely ill (Laura and Jonathan being the few who are still healthy). So Laura uses her powers on an enormous healing spree, with Jonathan assisting her. Fearing he may not love her for being a witch, Laura is hesitant about telling him about her powers. The remaining villagers become very suspicious by these sporadic recoveries and suspect the use of witchcraft. They soon come to the conclusion that Jonathan is the witch and have him arrested. When in court, he's convicted guilty and sentenced to death. Soon after, the villagers set off into the woods to uncover the remaining witches that are lurking by. They arrest all of the remaining witches, including Laura's mother, and sentence them all to death, completely unaware of their good doings. Laura was the last of her kind.

- Laura is absolutely devastated by this incredible loss. All of her anger and sadness build to the point where she transforms into her full feral mode (Lower-Right). She becomes super enraged and wants revenge on the entire village for being so ungrateful for what her people did for them. But she soon realizes that all of these events occurred because of her own interference. She also realizes that there's nobody to stop the demons from attacking the village!

- Laura fights off the hordes of demons singlehandedly (Upper-Right). The elder witches had grown weak and could not face them alone. But Laura was young and much more powerful. By the end of the night, she manages to eliminate every last demon. Exhausted and short-winded, Laura realizes that she has exposed herself to the entire village.

- Laura herself is arrested for witchcraft and sentenced to death by drowning (Lower-Right). She is chained up and is thrown over a cliff into a lake. When submerged in the water, Laura realizes that sometimes you cannot escape the ignorance of man. She decides that she would rather die a sensible young woman than a corrupted hag. All she wanted was to help people, but only brought death because of it.

Good Lord! I wrote sooo much backstory for this one. O_O

 

"Laura Knightwell: The Witch of Ravencroft" © Me
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Comments: 158

ultrasqaur [2022-06-13 16:43:53 +0000 UTC]

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GXUNIVERSE [2022-06-05 04:01:54 +0000 UTC]

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ultrasqaur In reply to GXUNIVERSE [2022-06-13 16:44:58 +0000 UTC]

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Pyro-raptor [2021-10-14 09:13:49 +0000 UTC]

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nerdsman567 In reply to Pyro-raptor [2021-10-14 17:06:11 +0000 UTC]

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Pyro-raptor In reply to nerdsman567 [2021-10-15 05:07:10 +0000 UTC]

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frogerknight [2021-07-24 04:12:58 +0000 UTC]

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nerdsman567 In reply to frogerknight [2021-07-24 15:25:04 +0000 UTC]

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talkingtoiletking [2021-07-14 08:31:36 +0000 UTC]

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nerdsman567 In reply to talkingtoiletking [2021-07-14 16:00:48 +0000 UTC]

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NickMaster64 [2021-02-15 21:48:59 +0000 UTC]

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nerdsman567 In reply to NickMaster64 [2021-02-16 20:51:59 +0000 UTC]

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sugarsweetie13 [2015-06-03 03:08:44 +0000 UTC]

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i think this character is lovely and it would make for a great cartoon series. the characters are original, the story seems heart warming, and it has nice art designs. You are great at making up original characters. I even took inspiration of of some of your drawings if its ok with you. this girl looks really beautiful and she looks like she has amazing paranormal powers. The boy she's is in love with seems romantic and they would look like that would make a cute couple. What I'm trying to say is that this picture is really good. I love how it looks.

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Bendy96 [2020-05-17 18:52:21 +0000 UTC]

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KaptainJay [2019-12-10 02:28:36 +0000 UTC]

Great story
Downer ending

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nerdsman567 In reply to KaptainJay [2019-12-10 03:01:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^

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LovestarHazelangel [2018-11-30 04:41:11 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if I ever commented in works involving Laura, but I think she's a very interesting and well designed character. ^^

I hope to see more of her; keep up the amazing work.

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nerdsman567 In reply to LovestarHazelangel [2018-11-30 17:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like her!

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LovestarHazelangel In reply to nerdsman567 [2018-11-30 17:36:45 +0000 UTC]

  

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rosewitchcat [2018-10-11 21:41:53 +0000 UTC]

poor her

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kinghammer413 [2018-09-24 18:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god! This needs to be a movie!!!

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nerdsman567 In reply to kinghammer413 [2018-09-24 18:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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ArtMakerProductions [2018-07-31 22:26:47 +0000 UTC]

This a 12/10. Good work. 

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nerdsman567 In reply to ArtMakerProductions [2018-08-01 17:34:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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PRINCE-OF-CREEPS [2018-07-14 02:46:37 +0000 UTC]

in a the world of my imagination, for killing her family, Laura would have the legal right to kill all the Ravencroft villager. they ought to help the village, but those vile villager killed them and made them extinct. I am sorry but wish  I could burn that village to the ground  with all the townsfolk in it. to make them perish for their ignorance and badness. 

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PRINCE-OF-CREEPS [2018-07-12 21:43:19 +0000 UTC]

when I look at Laura, even in her "hag" form I perceive her an  angelic beauty for her heroism. the people of Ravencroft should be destroyed for their refusal to accept their savior, simply for being a witch. I apologize for being rather obsessive on this topic, but if I had the power to do so, I would destroy that town that killed Laura, and would slaughter the townsfolk for their ignorance. I hope this does not disturb you or frighten you, but I believe Laura's fate a unfair. she deserves justice. I am sorry. 

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PRINCE-OF-CREEPS [2018-07-04 00:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Laura should be loved! I may not be religious but the people who condemned her are the ones who deserve to die and burn in Hell! she and the other Witches of this story were good and deserve respect. a Pox on the people of Ravencroft for their filthy ignorance! sorry, but I think this story is unfair. very tragic. I can't stand it. I hope you won't take this as a threat, but if I could I would avenge Laura and the rest of the Witches. if I was able to I would destroy that town on their behalf. oh, Witches, I am sorry for you condemnation! again, I apologize to you for getting too preachy, I just can't stand how Laura saved everyone but was executed for Witchcraft anyway. 

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Mayli-Song [2018-07-01 00:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow. That is an exceptional story.

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nerdsman567 In reply to Mayli-Song [2018-07-01 16:12:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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maxvision92 [2018-05-23 07:55:28 +0000 UTC]

"Back"story? Where would the story possibly go from here? It is rather hard to follow off of a backstory that ends with the protagonist dead.

Unless...

Unless something happens, like, say, a fisherman stumbles on her final resting place while out on his boat. Then the police exhume her body from the depths, but at some point between that and the autopsy, the body vanishes, or Laura awakens in the ambulance or something. Then I guess there's a folklorist in town or something, who's well-read on the legend of the witches who lived outside of Ravencroft long ago and is certain this IS Laura Knightwell; and maybe they're Jonathan's reincarnation and I guess the new love interest. Also there'd probably be a kid, this kind of story would probably have a kid in it who befriends Laura and isn't frightened of her true self. And all while Laura's becoming acclimated to this new time, something ancient and terrible stirs; the demons have awakened from a long slumber, and they are fixing to kill the last of the witches who had defied them for so long, so long ago...

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nerdsman567 In reply to maxvision92 [2018-05-23 18:05:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's quite a story you've come up with for Laura's return! I like your ideas, though! You're on to something there!

I've actually thought about making a continuation of this story, where Laura reawakens in modern times. However, I haven't had a whole lot of motivation to flesh out said story, unfortunately.

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maxvision92 In reply to nerdsman567 [2018-05-24 05:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Additional fact I'm not sure if I should be ashamed; my description of the demons waking up was SUPPOSED to be written more akin to "Synchronicity II", because it's my favorite Police song of the few I know. "Many miles away, something crawls from the slime at the bottom of a dark Scottish lake" I abandoned this because at the time I forgot the words to the song, and wasn't sure how far whatever hellmouth those demons were using to come through was from Ravencroft.

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maxvision92 In reply to nerdsman567 [2018-05-23 19:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's a good outline or pitch for a new story. If nothing else I can do those no problem.

I dunno if I helped in any way with that, but if so, I'd be glad to know.

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Aphrodite1234 [2017-12-03 03:20:58 +0000 UTC]

this would be a Beautiful Background to a Changeling Character in Pathfinder RPG
Changeling are the allways female offspring of Hags with males of any race
left in orphanates or temples
when they turn 18 the hag mother start to call them to became full hags, those who resist are reward in death by Desna, the goddess of Dreams 

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Skaramine [2017-09-08 20:56:26 +0000 UTC]

What great heroism.  

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nerdsman567 In reply to Skaramine [2017-09-09 17:26:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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B-MasterAnimation [2017-04-23 06:41:08 +0000 UTC]

I like it! Mind if i make a story based on this as well, Kenny?

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nerdsman567 In reply to B-MasterAnimation [2017-04-23 17:06:11 +0000 UTC]

Sure, go ahead! I don't mind, as long as you credit me.

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B-MasterAnimation In reply to nerdsman567 [2017-04-23 20:52:21 +0000 UTC]

I think it will be like what if the witch was immortal and then some boy found her inside the ocean and brings her to his home hoping to make her a better person.

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nerdsman567 In reply to B-MasterAnimation [2017-04-24 05:48:37 +0000 UTC]

I've actually thought doing a sequel VERY similar to that idea, where Laura reawakens in modern times and is confused by modern advances! However, I never felt inspired to draw said idea. lol

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B-MasterAnimation In reply to nerdsman567 [2017-04-24 11:20:03 +0000 UTC]

How about getting inspired by Dark Shadows?

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nerdsman567 In reply to B-MasterAnimation [2017-04-24 15:58:33 +0000 UTC]

No, actually. I was mostly inspired by Tim Burton's Sleepy Hollow (1999) while drawing this.

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B-MasterAnimation In reply to nerdsman567 [2017-04-24 16:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Well, Tim Burton also directed Dark Shadows. That counts as a Tim Burton film.

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nerdsman567 In reply to B-MasterAnimation [2017-04-24 16:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know. I've seen that film, as well.

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Totaldramafan102 [2017-03-22 02:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Sheesh this is a tragic tale, good job though. I hope the village gets what's coming to them and end up destroyed by demons

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nerdsman567 In reply to Totaldramafan102 [2017-03-22 02:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know. I'm sorry.

Thank you!

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HybridAidan764 [2016-07-12 13:50:58 +0000 UTC]

Wicked Awesome Art! You know every hero could be in the dark past does NOT mean the terrible past had to consume you,and go use protection to go brave,powerful,faster,stronger and futhermore you care about in the future.

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nerdsman567 In reply to HybridAidan764 [2016-07-12 18:14:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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HybridAidan764 In reply to nerdsman567 [2016-07-12 22:17:24 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome anyway.....

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PrincessArtistK [2016-06-05 22:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Wicked Art!😎

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