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ultrasqaur [2022-06-13 16:43:53 +0000 UTC]
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GXUNIVERSE [2022-06-05 04:01:54 +0000 UTC]
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Bendy96 [2020-05-17 18:52:21 +0000 UTC]
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rosewitchcat [2018-10-11 21:41:53 +0000 UTC]
poor her
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kinghammer413 [2018-09-24 18:30:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god! This needs to be a movie!!!
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PRINCE-OF-CREEPS [2018-07-14 02:46:37 +0000 UTC]
in a the world of my imagination, for killing her family, Laura would have the legal right to kill all the Ravencroft villager. they ought to help the village, but those vile villager killed them and made them extinct. I am sorry but wish I could burn that village to the ground with all the townsfolk in it. to make them perish for their ignorance and badness.
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PRINCE-OF-CREEPS [2018-07-12 21:43:19 +0000 UTC]
when I look at Laura, even in her "hag" form I perceive her an angelic beauty for her heroism. the people of Ravencroft should be destroyed for their refusal to accept their savior, simply for being a witch. I apologize for being rather obsessive on this topic, but if I had the power to do so, I would destroy that town that killed Laura, and would slaughter the townsfolk for their ignorance. I hope this does not disturb you or frighten you, but I believe Laura's fate a unfair. she deserves justice. I am sorry.
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PRINCE-OF-CREEPS [2018-07-04 00:16:55 +0000 UTC]
Laura should be loved! I may not be religious but the people who condemned her are the ones who deserve to die and burn in Hell! she and the other Witches of this story were good and deserve respect. a Pox on the people of Ravencroft for their filthy ignorance! sorry, but I think this story is unfair. very tragic. I can't stand it. I hope you won't take this as a threat, but if I could I would avenge Laura and the rest of the Witches. if I was able to I would destroy that town on their behalf. oh, Witches, I am sorry for you condemnation! again, I apologize to you for getting too preachy, I just can't stand how Laura saved everyone but was executed for Witchcraft anyway.
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Mayli-Song [2018-07-01 00:49:39 +0000 UTC]
Wow. That is an exceptional story.
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maxvision92 [2018-05-23 07:55:28 +0000 UTC]
"Back"story? Where would the story possibly go from here? It is rather hard to follow off of a backstory that ends with the protagonist dead.
Unless...
Unless something happens, like, say, a fisherman stumbles on her final resting place while out on his boat. Then the police exhume her body from the depths, but at some point between that and the autopsy, the body vanishes, or Laura awakens in the ambulance or something. Then I guess there's a folklorist in town or something, who's well-read on the legend of the witches who lived outside of Ravencroft long ago and is certain this IS Laura Knightwell; and maybe they're Jonathan's reincarnation and I guess the new love interest. Also there'd probably be a kid, this kind of story would probably have a kid in it who befriends Laura and isn't frightened of her true self. And all while Laura's becoming acclimated to this new time, something ancient and terrible stirs; the demons have awakened from a long slumber, and they are fixing to kill the last of the witches who had defied them for so long, so long ago...
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maxvision92 In reply to nerdsman567 [2018-05-24 05:04:52 +0000 UTC]
Additional fact I'm not sure if I should be ashamed; my description of the demons waking up was SUPPOSED to be written more akin to "Synchronicity II", because it's my favorite Police song of the few I know. "Many miles away, something crawls from the slime at the bottom of a dark Scottish lake" I abandoned this because at the time I forgot the words to the song, and wasn't sure how far whatever hellmouth those demons were using to come through was from Ravencroft.
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maxvision92 In reply to nerdsman567 [2018-05-23 19:28:02 +0000 UTC]
Well, it's a good outline or pitch for a new story. If nothing else I can do those no problem.
I dunno if I helped in any way with that, but if so, I'd be glad to know.
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Aphrodite1234 [2017-12-03 03:20:58 +0000 UTC]
this would be a Beautiful Background to a Changeling Character in Pathfinder RPG
Changeling are the allways female offspring of Hags with males of any race
left in orphanates or temples
when they turn 18 the hag mother start to call them to became full hags, those who resist are reward in death by Desna, the goddess of Dreams
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Skaramine [2017-09-08 20:56:26 +0000 UTC]
What great heroism.
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B-MasterAnimation [2017-04-23 06:41:08 +0000 UTC]
I like it! Mind if i make a story based on this as well, Kenny?
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B-MasterAnimation In reply to nerdsman567 [2017-04-23 20:52:21 +0000 UTC]
I think it will be like what if the witch was immortal and then some boy found her inside the ocean and brings her to his home hoping to make her a better person.
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nerdsman567 In reply to B-MasterAnimation [2017-04-24 05:48:37 +0000 UTC]
I've actually thought doing a sequel VERY similar to that idea, where Laura reawakens in modern times and is confused by modern advances! However, I never felt inspired to draw said idea. lol
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nerdsman567 In reply to B-MasterAnimation [2017-04-24 15:58:33 +0000 UTC]
No, actually. I was mostly inspired by Tim Burton's Sleepy Hollow (1999) while drawing this.
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B-MasterAnimation In reply to nerdsman567 [2017-04-24 16:07:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh. Well, Tim Burton also directed Dark Shadows. That counts as a Tim Burton film.
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Totaldramafan102 [2017-03-22 02:23:27 +0000 UTC]
Sheesh this is a tragic tale, good job though. I hope the village gets what's coming to them and end up destroyed by demons
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HybridAidan764 [2016-07-12 13:50:58 +0000 UTC]
Wicked Awesome Art! You know every hero could be in the dark past does NOT mean the terrible past had to consume you,and go use protection to go brave,powerful,faster,stronger and futhermore you care about in the future.
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