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Published: 2015-05-18 20:16:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1163; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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I hate it so much D: yeah i know It suuucksThats why not much will comment on it
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So good. Looks awesome. Has Sonic in it. Hedgehog with blue eyes with FABULOUS clothes. So much blue. So good skin color.
Just joking about most of them. This oc is awesome , but my previous words was from the no-live side from me. Anyway , (because we are all by all here to write a critique ... ahum ... very serious bussiness) Jay , you did a nice job like always , and now we can see how you do it (Did he by almost everything but who cares? ) . You did a nice job. Keep it going and see you later! Cya my spriting amigo !
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Good work on the shading, but the very dark quill looks weird because you put it above the lighter quill, so maybe you could improve that in the future.But well done on the goggles, those are nice, just that you could make them a little bit smaller next time. Well done on the jeans and the jacket, that is pretty good.The eyes are pretty good, but you should try experimenting a different hairstyle, they kinda look all the same. I like the skin pallete too! Your characters quality is really good!
So give yourself a break m8, Sky-scrub looks good!
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Good work on the shading, but the very dark quill looks weird because you put it above the lighter quill, so maybe you could improve that in the future.But well done on the goggles, those are nice, just that you could make them a little bit smaller next time. Well done on the jeans and the jacket, that is pretty good.The eyes are pretty good, but you should try experimenting a different hairstyle, they kinda look all the same. I like the skin pallete too! Your characters quality is really good!
So give yourself a break m8, Sky-scrub looks good!
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Poorly done shading.
The hands are not right for the position.
Good design of clothing + accessory.
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thank you for noting that.
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as a person who stalks matt....
i think you need to make the lower quill shorter
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since when i stalk matt
and ik about the bottom quill
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No, i am the one who stalks matt
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Oh so that's why them googles and color and stuff looked similarΒ
Lemme give you some tips
That bottom quill should be shorter cause it looks really weird sticking out like that
Try and work around the googles instead of putting them on after the quills, like I always put them on first before the quills so I can work around them, then again never put them on a hedgehog so lel
Your color choice is pretty goodactually, just the pants don't work but that's another thing, try not to pillow shade and you sould be fine
It's a good sprite tho don't get me wrong 
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Thanks for the critique I`ll try my bestΒ
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"I hate it so much"
"it suuuucks"
Hell naw this is boss
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Tha-Derpy-Jay <----Boss
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