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DireLilith [2015-07-21 19:23:50 +0000 UTC]
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alright, you want a critique, huh? *cracks knuckles*
at first glance, i thought this had to be photoshopped up the wahoo. i thought maybe you used one of your environment rendering programs to make this. but reading, i see you took a picture. did you use a filter over it?
many times, natural photography loses its appeal because the images can be so stark. but looking at the undersides of the lily pads, at the veins, it almost looks like there's a filter or some sort of softening blur used that made it look less intimidating. nature is beautiful but can also be harsh. something about this image feels like that harshness was taken away. not sure what you did because i'm no photographer. but artistically, whatever that was, i like it.
i also notice the same aspect on the curled up and decayed leaves further in the background. they just don't look glaringly 'real', they look touched up. so you must have really worked on the angle to get this just so.
i really appreciate the lily near the middle but slightly off to one side. too close to the middle and it would have looked too much like a set-up. also, the sunlight didn't take away from the lily, and actually makes it seem as if the lily has its own lighting. kind of like in 3D, self illuminating? that's how the lily looks, because it's giving off this bluish glow rather than the more yellow sunlight on the lily pads near the right of the image. i think that was really great, it helps give the lily an ethereal glow which contributes to the almost 'super natural' look of the image over all.
if i had anything negative to say, let's see. it would be that the wind perhaps picked up and flipped up a lot of the pads? i don't know if they were blown that way and used to it, so are always curled up - or if you waited for the wind to do that. it might be intentional, it definitely 'adds' to the pic. but i kind of miss seeing pads myself in real life, and would have loved to see some more of the smooth shiny tops of them.
really, that's the only thing i could say. the way that part of the pic is shaded and part isn't, is wonderful. placement of the focus of the lily is perfect. and the curled pads allow us to see that softer edging, if it was a filter or not.
great share!
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Shadowlover6 In reply to NICELabs [2015-07-20 00:41:45 +0000 UTC]
Oh you are fine, I looked over your gallery. I love it all haha
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madaigual [2015-10-21 22:40:48 +0000 UTC]
Thought I’d pass by and see what I’ve missed these past 3 months. Lo and behold I’m transfixed by the very first one I look at…. Never has my gast been so flabbered!
32-hours-per-day NICELabs, worker, carer, stalwart, encyclopaedic knowledge of all, accomplished writer, illustrator, modeller, musician, Sci-Fi sensei, video game master, wit supreme, cinephile extraordinaire, the list goes on forever… And yet he still manages to stop and smell the roses. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again:
You put us mere mortals to shame.
All of the comments below extol this unquestionably beautiful photo but what I see is the synthesis of a languid lily and an unbelievably dynamic Renaissance Man… And it makes it even more beautiful... Deviantart's first transcendental deviation
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KristinF [2015-07-21 20:26:13 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely stunning, beautiful!
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Curia-DD [2015-07-19 02:59:04 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful!
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