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Claire-Cooper [2018-12-17 18:46:29 +0000 UTC]
You based Jaqueline off of that um Japenese horror story I can't remember what it was called but that was something she'd say to you and depending on your answer she'd either haunt you or kill you I believe.
"Do you think my smile is pretty." Or something along those lines, either way interesting characters.
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Seramic97 In reply to Claire-Cooper [2019-01-07 20:37:25 +0000 UTC]
I've been wondering about how you portrayed magic in this story. It just that it look like everyone still knows that magic exist and only a few of them knows how to use it. Like the only thing that might qualify magic in the show was Dust. Like how Ozpin turn Qrow and Raven into birds it that still in your story or are they like Skin changers?
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NickShepard117 In reply to Claire-Cooper [2018-12-17 19:11:00 +0000 UTC]
Yup
“Kuchisake Onna”
I based her body off of that, and her personality off of Jack the Ripper
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Claire-Cooper In reply to NickShepard117 [2018-12-17 19:24:19 +0000 UTC]
Yeah that was it ^^
And Jack the Ripper, nice I did enjoy that story dark but intriguing.
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NickShepard117 In reply to Claire-Cooper [2018-12-19 05:04:53 +0000 UTC]
I was once told by my sister that the myth of Jack the Ripper might be that it was actually a woman that did the murders
So I used that thread of thinking, mixed in the Japanese urban legend, added a dash of corrupted Madien and BOOM!
The Summer Banshee, Jacqueline “Jackie” the Ripper
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Claire-Cooper In reply to NickShepard117 [2018-12-19 05:37:46 +0000 UTC]
A woman that did the murders. Damn that actually would be more interesting if that's true.
Whether it is or not though is up in the air and I would love to read it again now looking at it as Jackie or Jacquelyn the Ripper lol
But still that's interesting thank you I now find myself curious on it even more.
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54godamora [2018-01-20 23:22:15 +0000 UTC]
strange. i figured you would all look more intimidating. you seem like ordinary people minus the corrupted eyes
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NickShepard117 In reply to 54godamora [2018-01-21 00:34:00 +0000 UTC]
When you see them in combat, their actions speak louder than looks
Especially when Jackie opens her mouth all the way to reveal a row of sharp teeth
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54godamora In reply to NickShepard117 [2018-01-21 00:37:55 +0000 UTC]
i know that. i read the massacre of that base.
and jackie remains my waifu of this story, her evil side be damned! pardon my french.
also i have a question for them: i would like to spar one on one with each of them. we can take it to a note if you want. why? simple, i want to see how they fair against someone who's their equal
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MartyrFan [2018-01-01 21:24:54 +0000 UTC]
I keep getting the Knights mixed up in my head, along with the Banshee and the Harpy. This should help to keep them separate in my head. Nice work, BTW.
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Seramic97 In reply to MartyrFan [2018-01-17 14:54:18 +0000 UTC]
It would it be scary if Hades was a alive Cinder would've become a Nazgul too.
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MartyrFan In reply to Seramic97 [2018-01-17 16:03:32 +0000 UTC]
The Nazgul would have a complete set of Maidens then: Spring, Summer, Fall, and Winter. That is scary.
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NickShepard117 In reply to MartyrFan [2018-01-02 05:08:23 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I imagine others got mixed up prior to the release of this picture
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Halkras12 [2017-12-09 20:41:50 +0000 UTC]
talion laughs them all with nazgul ring
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TheLazilyInspiredOne [2017-07-31 15:13:10 +0000 UTC]
For a second there, I thought Rourke was looking at Jackie as if to say, "The sh*t I have to put up with..."
On another note, I'm really digging Radcliffe's armor's design and color scheme.
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NickShepard117 In reply to TheLazilyInspiredOne [2017-07-31 15:16:52 +0000 UTC]
Rourke is thinking of that, but more toward Jackie and Zyra
But he gets along well with Jadis and Radcliffe
And Radcliffe's armor is from the villain he is replacing in the Tolkien-verse, his name was Agandaur
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TheLazilyInspiredOne In reply to NickShepard117 [2017-07-31 17:04:01 +0000 UTC]
I have! I've actually been following your fanverse since the end of Volume 3 and began with Rise of a Star Knight. It's definitely been a great fic for me.
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flash600 [2017-07-28 01:30:32 +0000 UTC]
Now when I think about it Jackie is basically an evil Ruby. They're both Childish, have unusual weapons, and are the youngest of their respective groups. They even kind of look like each other.
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NickShepard117 In reply to flash600 [2017-07-28 01:31:30 +0000 UTC]
I based Jackie off Jack the Ripper, but yeah, she has all those qualities too
That's what makes her SO dangerous
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flash600 In reply to NickShepard117 [2017-07-28 01:33:34 +0000 UTC]
I just thought it was a funny coincidence
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Seramic97 [2017-07-17 23:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Will chapter 9 be coming tomorrow? If so are the fellowship be walking, flying or driving to Mordor?
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NickShepard117 In reply to Seramic97 [2017-07-18 00:08:50 +0000 UTC]
I'm hoping for tomorrow
They start by driving, but are forced to walk the rest of the way
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flash600 [2017-07-15 03:38:13 +0000 UTC]
For some weird reason, I find myself shipping Zyra and Radcliffe
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NickShepard117 In reply to flash600 [2017-07-15 03:41:22 +0000 UTC]
Don't bother, to Radcliffe, "Romance is for children... I am a Warriro."
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flash600 [2017-07-15 03:35:56 +0000 UTC]
That is really Badass, I'm sensing many epic battles coming.
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NickShepard117 In reply to flash600 [2017-07-15 04:26:06 +0000 UTC]
Indeed there will be... some more horrific than others, I'm afraid.
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NickShepard117 In reply to KaiserYoshikage [2017-07-15 03:05:03 +0000 UTC]
Utterly... and truly...
The only hope Remnant has now... lies in eight hunters from Beacon Academy.
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