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Published: 2009-07-25 21:39:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 3333; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 0
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the name is similar but ill delete the previous one i think and copy paste the description for this one but in the meantime...well now we can't have two can we?
ill make a poll in a few secs to see which one of the 2 versions do you like best
although my mind is set on one of them that i will keep secret until i color it
~cheers
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This is a great classic b&w sketch... the character has amazing attire as well as an intriguing expression
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thank you
do i do prefer the way i ended up doing the painting
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d00d3...im really diggin your linework recently....
more then your paints to be honest....(sorry)...
youre differing line-weights are sw33t....
and your shading looks awesome....
really great work buddy...XD...
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ahah no worries
thank buddy
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I really like how crisp the lineart is here. I think I like the legs of the previous one better
P.S. the armor's, like in the previous one,
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the armor ir the previous one just slightly more detailed
and the main purpose here was finding a good position for the legs so the character wouldnt look too stiff
thank you
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it's never to late and i agree with the hip deal
it's something ill have to work out on the painting stage like you say ill try t minimize that feminine touch
sorry fr taking so long replying on the Γron comment i need to review every thing so i wont miss out
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eheh thanks buddy
theres a colored piece on its way to dA
finally
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gosto muito mais desta que a anterior como sabes mas apenas quero te "alertar" para a forma como vais pintar a zona da anca, pois poderΓ‘ acentuar muito a curva e influenciar o corpo, em termos de linha e forma embora que se saiba que Γ© uma armadura.
nΓ£o hΓ‘ muito a dizer porque jΓ‘ sabes o que eu penso ^^
despacha o eron que eu quero que pintes este
amoteee <33
le o cdg do emotion azul
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oh nu
sad fuufis facee nuuuuuuu .A.
hmm
quando chegar a altura de pintar vai's me avisar again e provavelmente cairei no erro once again
sinhe falta a pada e a BG k vai demorar mttttttttttttttttttt tempoooo TT.TT
evuru code
amoteee <33333
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nu nu :>
oki eu aviso como sempre XD
e ainda bem, foça te ninin
>v> <3
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avisas sempre
se n avisas eu espremo pa dizeres o k ta maw :3
<33
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I love the details on the armour, and the shading is great. Well drawn.
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You're most welcome ^^
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must say, I like clarity on this one better. It gives a more tempered feel. More refined, I like the sketchiness though.
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the sketchiness was something i was trying to keep out
do something more clean like the lines in Γron
thanks mate
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no problem.
I actually like sketches, I like clean pictures too but they tend to lack the life of those that is sketched. They seem to automated.
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hmm
then we share the same opinion there
but sometimes it's what the viewers seem to like best
but as i say over and over
im not here for the public im here for me
call me selfish but im here to improve at my own pace and if i can work where i want doing what i like even better
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well considering your putting stuff for the world to see and criticize it really does not matter what you post. I just hope it isnt hard to watch. ^^
not about being selfish.
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ok you got me confused there
i encourage criticism in fact its one of the ways to help me improve
if i can give as i receive even better because i'd be helping others as well
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what I mean is flames, or direct insults on your abilities with nop redeeming qualities. Those that put down others for the reason of just putting them down. Those who do not offer ways to improve.
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wasn't it out of context in your sentence?
ok its late you gotta give me discount
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I guess it was, but I hoped you knew what I meant. I like constructive criticism on my forays into the literature world.
Currently I am still writing the first chapter for a Naruto Fanfic and wonder when it will end. The first chapter btw. It is already past 15k words. hopefully It wont be way past 20k words before the initial chapter is done. I might need to make it 2 or even 3 chapters depending on the length.
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crap thats impressive
per chapter i have around 6 pages thats te average i guess
which goes something like way less words
but i dont really think that a good book should have lots and lots of words and descriptions and that much blah blah, not saying your is of course havent read it cant judge it.
to me a goo book must have solid content even if it is small as long as it has content and it captivates the reader its a plus
im going for that in my book but i think that 6 a4 pages is small for a chapter
i have chapters of course with 13 or 16 a4 pages going around 8k words but i think its way to small
but since i need to review it all and add stuff it may enlarge a bit more
what i regret about your work is being a fan fic
because you wont be able to publish it without paying royalties and copyright material
lets just hope we both get successful
good luck
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hehe. I just do it because its a way to pass the time. If I wanted to publish a book I could. However that would be "work" and require my dedication. I am a Business Major and I hope to one day become a CFO (Chief Financial Officer)
You want to read with what I am working on? I would recommend a good vocabulary and a dictionary.
My work has been described as superfluous.
I do like the larger, more obscure words in the English dictionary
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ah i see
wow but if you would publish you couldnt do that otherwise people wouldnt be able to read it
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well, depends on trust and having proof that the work is yours since its inception in case you need to sue.
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if i ever lost my work or have it copied and publish it
i have the original manuscripts dated and the first basic sketches for the storyline
and i also have a huge collection of illustrations to back it up
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well there you go. O.o
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why the surprised face
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