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Published: 2009-08-07 21:28:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 13808; Favourites: 329; Downloads: 0
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remake of the Evil king of Amaldanhere's the link to the previous version
there's a big portion of his story on the link provided so that won't take much space of the little box here
for some reason i believe im lacking something, i am however pleased how this character turned out, i finally broke the chains t the dark crystal plate he was wearing and developed something of my own
i need to work more on the backgrounds im giving my characters because i think it's such a nice adition as well as the character itself as a background as =saejinoh suggested on the august edition of imageFX
let's hope you guys are as happy with how this turned out as i am
also i do request critiques so if you feel comfortable to criticize, do so because it's a major help in improving my art
~cheers
p.s. also happy birthday dA
[EDIT] added the cape belts
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this pic has is a great improvement of the old one =3
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thank you
i hope to make an even bigger improvement next time i illustrate this character
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then I guess I have to stalk you with the deviantwatch in order to see it
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ahah thank you for that
don't really know when it will be done since i have a lot of projects in hand, but when i do ill try and make it far better than this one
and it's hard since i consider this to be still one of the best paintings I've done
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you're very welcome =3
take all the time you need
I also think, that its going to be hard to top it, cause its a really great picture and I don't know what you can make better
but I think, that even a little improvement is a success
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i think so too
but as long as i can improve on something like you said its already a success
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thats right =3
*prepares everything to stalk you're improvement* xD
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thank you
btw i will probably spam your profile page this weekend since i have 172 people to thank for the watch and faves so be expecting a spammer
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lol
I'll prepare myself xD
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thank you
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your welcome!
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ill be 20on march
how do you feel now
still good for a 20 year old?
im gettig old TT_TT
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Hey Man that's awesome! You're still young. And you're really good for a soon to be 20 yr old.
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finally
i say this because you mentioned the style not the content
for that i thank you
secondly i have my influences from it and like so im tryig to keep away from it
also i thank you for not flaming some people have
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it's pretty cool, but like you said too, try to keep away from that style and content too, because a lot of elements are from la2 armors
i played a lot la2 like 2-3 years and i never thought drawing something from it lol )
but anyways cool drawing
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what kind of elements?
(just realized this wasn't jamahadr)
which makes it different
some if not a great portion of the armor was designed by me
i may have used some elements but they we're modified nevertheless
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Wow - Amazing colors! I really love the way you set up the background.. I mentioned you do wonderful close up portraits.. so it is awesome to be able to see pieces of both distance & close-up working in harmony.
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yes you did
glad you think so
thank you
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Excellent Work!
I like too much the painting and the dynamic style!
Keep up in the good work, my friend!
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the gold embellishments against the black armor always makes a cool impact. I like the white parts in his hair that give him a more unique and classy look. Well done buddy.
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eheh thank you
one thing i mised was the crown but i didnt want to over do it
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I like him 
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no nothing like that he's just a human
Raziel you say
no pics of him in your gallery
coincidence the main villain in my book is also called Raziel
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yeah I moved accounts and never actually had a picture of him (never had the motivation to XD) And another coincidence, the main villain in my novel is named Raziel (he's a normal human but can use the elements). I'll have to post that story in my gallery soon. It would be very scary if they were somewhat similar just not by name o.O unintentional of course
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well you go first tell me whats he's like mentally
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He's kinda on the crazy side. He uses catch phrases when using his powers (Flame Thrower, Rockslide, etc). He is the leader of a group called the Devil's Advocates (kids/adults that use their powers for evil purposes). He killed his father to obtain all of his powers, but since his twin brother Jaren is alive, some of their father's powers transferred to him. Raziel was not happy so he has tried killing Jaren to obtain the powers that he believes he should only have. Um...the book is all about people with powers and the main character, Rocky (that's my nickname; the story takes place in my hometown with my friends in the book) was targeted by Raziel so that he could have Rocky on his side (Rocky is a special case in which I call an In Between (group of people; Good, Evil, Normal, In Betweens); could be Good or Evil)
I think that's about it. Of course he looks nothing like your character so that's good XD
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they're way different then
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okay that's good XD I would've felt bad. But since I came up with mine in August 2008 and yours is probably older than mine then its all good
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ahah yeah
i came up with myne November 2005 when i went to high school
good days
miss them badly
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haha, awesome, awesome. Yeah my story is based in my high school years (was a Freshman in 2004) So I was about 14. I just turned 18 when I started the story in August (or at least the idea). But this was the first time I've seen this image and I thought, 'hey Raziel sounds like a good evil name so I'll use that'. So yeah, well its a great character and I like him a lot
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wait
just realized
did you take Raziel's name?
the name and the idea has been copywritten by me
despite the fact that there is another raziel on soul reaver
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No I just thought of him. I've never heard of soul reaver or of you
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then why did you say
"But this was the first time I've seen this image and I thought, 'hey Raziel sounds like a good evil name so I'll use that"
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lol, I meant that it was the first time I saw this image XD I should've put "so when I was thinking of character names in my book last year I thought of Raziel" XD Sometimes I forget to be more explanatory
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ah you probably should
you might mislead someone into error with some affirmations
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mine is something that i have always cooked up and know that i have the know how its easier for me to make it better
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