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Jay-Miyuki [2018-07-13 15:59:19 +0000 UTC]

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The final result looks very nice! Posing is good, the prop placement is well, and overall, it is such a sweet gift! ^u^
Now, let me tell you what to improve on. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

You have been improving ever since your 1st SFM poster, and this one looks so well detailed and it is very pleasing to look at. But I do have to point out to you that I kind of see very noticeable errors, however. They aren't major errors, but it would be nice to see you improve on those nexttime. ^^
One of those errors are how the balloons are placed. Maybe it's just me, but the clipping where the balloons are placed really catches the eye quickly. Maybe placing them behind the table would have been better, and to replace the balloons' locations, adding some presents would have been a good filler. The balloons would have also been shown more clearly if they were placed where I suggested. But again, this is a minor problem. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I also have to point out that the finger posing is alright, but it doesn't really look like your hands are on the table. It kind of looks like they're floating. Again, this is just my point of view. Maybe try posing the fingers more to make it look more realistic. ^^ I did say prop placement was good, and it is, but the little toy right next to Brennan could be moved a bit. It is kind of blocking Reece (Skarlet), and it makes it harder to see her expressions and such. Maybe try shrinking it or make it as a background prop next time.
Moving on to lighting, it gets better after every poster, but other times, it looks very rushed and forced. I don't know if it is your editing, but it looks a bit too sharp. Maybe try toning the edits down, because it just makes your project look very forced, if you get what I'm saying. I have seen you say that editing brings the color out more, but without edits, it would kind of look the same. If you want more color, maybe try adding more colorful lights to the image. Orange or yellowish lighting would have given this poster more coloring, because sticking with 1 specific light makes it get boring fast. You want to catch people's eyes with the different and fun colors, maybe take that into consideration next time.
I also have to say that the lighting looks unbalanced at some points. I have this same problem sometimes, because lighting isn't the easiest, but in some parts of this, it's very bright, while in the corners, they look completely untouched. Adding scene lights would have given the poster that better appeal. But again, this is just me. Lighting could have been better in this scenario, but overall, this is a pretty solid poster. (^u^)b

Keep up your great work!


-Dylan (Ika-Miyuki)

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MercenaryMaster [2018-07-13 16:17:44 +0000 UTC]

FREAKING AWESOME

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BrennanXD [2018-07-12 04:17:47 +0000 UTC]

Aww! Thank you so much!! This is an amazing poster and is the sweetest present I could ever ask for. Thanks again! 

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JackTheKiD87 [2018-07-11 08:35:14 +0000 UTC]

Wos so cool noice poster ^^


i couldnt make one for her ;__;

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Jay-Miyuki [2018-07-11 05:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. :3
I am sure Bren will appreciate this.

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Bluelightning989 [2018-07-11 04:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Hey happy b-day!
           

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