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woodwirth [2017-08-31 17:11:44 +0000 UTC]
oh i forgot to include in my critique that the inclusion of a shadow looks amaze
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nijimillions In reply to woodwirth [2017-08-31 19:30:27 +0000 UTC]
AHHH TYSM FOR THE CRITIQUE MAN!! I APPRECIATE IT SO MUCH!!!
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woodwirth In reply to nijimillions [2017-08-31 20:21:05 +0000 UTC]
NP!
everything is AMAZING I cant even boi
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thatgenericbat [2017-08-18 18:29:33 +0000 UTC]
this is great!
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lincoln-tiel [2017-08-18 16:44:33 +0000 UTC]
this is cool!! the character anatomy is done very well and i love love the expression, only complaint i would have is that the perspective of the gun is very flat. it would be nice if it had more depth, maybe slightly facing towards the camera?
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nijimillions In reply to lincoln-tiel [2017-08-18 16:53:14 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much omg!!
and i agree!! while i did want it to be in profile view, i couldve definitely had him holding it at more of an angle, or had it cocked or smth.. ty for the advice!! :>
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lincoln-tiel In reply to nijimillions [2017-08-18 17:02:51 +0000 UTC]
of course!
yeah you worded it better than i did! youre so welcome
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FEL0NY-CHARGE [2017-08-18 16:02:06 +0000 UTC]
HOH DAMN I LOVE THISΒ
Love the expression tooΒ
This is awesome gj <3
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nijimillions In reply to FEL0NY-CHARGE [2017-09-06 21:49:31 +0000 UTC]
omg im so sorry i just realized i never replied to this!! tysm!!
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mediication In reply to FEL0NY-CHARGE [2017-08-18 16:15:02 +0000 UTC]
yoo this is great! especially the anatomy! and I love how you colored the lines!Β
ALSO THIS SONG IS LITΒ
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CASIN0S [2017-08-18 15:43:33 +0000 UTC]
EYO THIS IS FUCKIN NICE
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Synthwave-Shark [2017-08-18 15:42:35 +0000 UTC]
This is looking rather snazzy I must say. Character looks cool and I quite like your inclusion of a white outline for most of this, it's pretty neat! I think the only things that kinda throw me off here is the iris colour is to light so it's hard to actually see the eye and gives off that the character is wearing sunglasses. Plus I think the line work on the glock could be smoothed just a bit more. Still as it stands this is rather awesome and I quite like the concept. So hey well done!! ^^
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nijimillions In reply to Synthwave-Shark [2017-08-18 16:04:01 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much omg!! i rlly appreciate it. also yeah, i agree w you on the linework of the glock!! i feel like the glock isnt as much the problem as it is the hand holding itΒ
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Synthwave-Shark In reply to nijimillions [2017-08-19 02:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Aw, well your very welcome! Ah ok. Hehe I'm going to be captain opposite here but I think the hand looks good. ^^ So umm. XDD
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nijimillions In reply to Synthwave-Shark [2017-08-19 02:41:27 +0000 UTC]
oh shit, well, ty!! ur right about the glock tho omg, there are a few places i couldve cleaned up more... im p sure i was actually gonna go back over that originally actually!!
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Synthwave-Shark In reply to nijimillions [2017-08-19 02:57:17 +0000 UTC]
You are quite welcome indeed!! Ah ok, I think if you where to touch up the middle line then you'd be golden! Oh ok hehe well no worries though.
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