Comments: 34
RichelleW [2018-08-20 15:13:25 +0000 UTC]
Ava was snapped back from her traitorous minds vision...
Ahh... very clever.
Meanwhile... it's hard to tell from this angle, but it doesn't look like the punch landed where I expected it to.
In fact, it looks like...
I'll hold that thought until I get a better angle.
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PhoenixCreed [2018-08-17 11:47:16 +0000 UTC]
Wow, great story idea!
Well played.
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grimjac In reply to PhoenixCreed [2018-08-18 13:26:24 +0000 UTC]
Faked me into next week.
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ninja99900 In reply to PhoenixCreed [2018-08-18 04:28:08 +0000 UTC]
was the only one that knew what was going on, so I had to hide her comment before I posted these!! She is quite the detective!!
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PhoenixCreed In reply to ninja99900 [2018-08-18 05:21:46 +0000 UTC]
Indeed she is. She's also damn brilliant when it come to stories.
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ninja99900 In reply to Shanna1600 [2018-08-18 18:50:25 +0000 UTC]
i think you killed !!!! or at least crushed him up a bit.
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ninja99900 In reply to alesiaboxing [2018-08-17 23:33:06 +0000 UTC]
I didn't want anyone to see where the shot actually landed just yet, so I had to obscure that area with the effect of an impact, until the next shot that revealed where it actually hit.
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ninja99900 In reply to alesiaboxing [2018-08-17 13:32:12 +0000 UTC]
More of a visual to show the tremendous impact of the hit
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Jose-Ramiro [2018-08-17 03:48:42 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, very cool.
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ninja99900 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2018-08-17 04:06:56 +0000 UTC]
Thx Jose, glad that you like it!
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SunlitPromise [2018-08-17 02:24:06 +0000 UTC]
Intriguing... I see what you did here. A daydream, a possible future, Ava's pondering, until that right hand snaps her painfully back to reality
I like it! Nice storytelling device. well done
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ninja99900 In reply to SunlitPromise [2018-08-17 02:48:38 +0000 UTC]
thanks, I appreciate that coming from an excellent writer like yourself. I thought I was going out on a limb with that during this fight, wanted to try something different and have everyone looking left while I went to the right.
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SunlitPromise In reply to ninja99900 [2018-08-17 04:57:00 +0000 UTC]
You're too kind!
Hah, yeah you pulled it off well and kept me guessing. I didn't think you'd end the fight that early but somehow you still fooled me. Now I'm curious to see the ACTUAL effects of that punch
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ninja99900 In reply to SunlitPromise [2018-08-17 05:05:08 +0000 UTC]
think of a few theories, post will be up tomorrow, its all ready to go! she might be psychic and end up knocked out anyway or.................?
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Shanna1600 [2018-08-17 01:10:32 +0000 UTC]
OUCH! That is a wicked shot by Nuka ... she really let Ava have it there!!!!
This round is definitely taking things to the next level, and I have to admit that Nuka is controlling most of the action in the ring this time around. Ava has some work to do if she wants to avoid taking another shot like that!!!
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Shanna1600 In reply to ninja99900 [2018-08-17 01:18:32 +0000 UTC]
*Wringing hands*
I know! Nuka is turning out to be a very talented fighter, and is quite a handful for Ava in that ring!!!!
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ninja99900 In reply to Shanna1600 [2018-08-17 01:19:32 +0000 UTC]
Yes, they are both good fighters, they just need polish to become great ones, these matches will help to polish them up!
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