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fffff doing both of the pace panels took less time then doing one of the other two , space is surprisingly easy to do.D: Chekov's accent sounds more french then russian , I fail ),:
I also apologize for the lack of sound effects , I dont know how to do these );
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you draw so pretty @_@
as for the russian accent, i think it needs more "ee" sounds. Like, "Eet ees good to see you again, Meester Spock. Wery good to see you."
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Aw, lookit spock back there, all cool as a cucumber in his little captain's chair~
And I knew EXACTLY who Pavel was the minute I saw him! Good job.
Don't worry about the accent-- they're annoying, and I'm not overly worried about it.
Also, the space and ships are BEAUTIFUL. <3 ;v;
Go for greyscale if you need, but no giving up!
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cucumber... what xD
heh everyone is easier to draw the Spock ... seriously he's been the only one Ive been really failing at D: and's he's one of my fave characters fffffff D8<
b-but the deadline is so close D,: I feel like I wont make it in time ;A;
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You have ten days! You can make it! I have faith! D: <3
And it's just a saying. xD
AND I think you draw Spock fine. 
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10 days , my god D: that means I have to do like one page a day @_@;
lol I will not want to see comics any time soon after this contest xD;
say, I've been thinking... when the contest is done, I'm sure alot will miss it =0
how about haveing like a monthly mission up for anyone who wants to do a short comic for it
there would be no deadline and such , just a random mission. either own character or the original TV series characters could be used. How does that sound?
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xD Probably not. 
Of course you still have to draw stuff occasionally, but comics are optional. x)
That sounds kind of cool! If I ever get ahold of the group Captain again, I'll see what she thinks.
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The ship and the background are nicely painted~
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You're cool. Space is a vacuum it needs no sound effects. Good on 'ya on the ships though. I can't draw ships for crap T_T.
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Maybe a good way for accents is to check how words in that language are written or how they are said, so you only have to change them slighty so the reader makes them sound like that. Be careful to not get too repetitive with the panel's structure.
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I will try , it's just hard to have the panels look that diffrent when there isn't much going on.
deformed panels fit better to action packed scenes.
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I LOVE the glowy effect! I bow your your skillz.
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heh , thanks xD to bad the story is being kind of slow
I'm starting to fear that I wont make it in time for the deadline ):
I will have to switch over to greyscale coloring for the following pages
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I think you said something about 15-20 pages...at this rate...yeah, you'd better switch to greyscale.
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It dose sound french 
This is Marlin, Captain Pavel Chekov hailing Velis,
Ah, greetings Mr Spock, Itβs good to see you.
other than that its great, you got some very nice ship angles, nicely drawn, your class of ship is so much prettyer than mine >_>
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it's hard enough to do the dialogs and now I have have to worry about pacing too xD; ? my god I'm starting to doubt that I will make it through the next round
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you only havw to worry about the pacing of his words if you keep giving pavel dialog lol
i dont think you'll have to worry much about making it through, im pretty sure you will XD
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good that he will be only around for the next two pages and then the Marlin is off chaseing after that ion particle trail left by the probe 8D
I'm not so sure about that if I keep giveing off incomplete comics xD;
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Well after this one, you could try and limit yourself to 10pages or less, so its a bit less of a rush XD
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oops, "greetings" should'nt have an "s" at the end lol
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