Comments: 20
BlazeChain [2005-08-03 13:09:23 +0000 UTC]
hmmm, pretty good, although i dont like the elctric effect on the brushing, i feel its out of place...
good job though!
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havocs-edge [2005-08-02 05:31:53 +0000 UTC]
the focal point is way too centralized. maybe place it off slightly higher or to the side to get the desired effect you are going for. also, what you might want to start trying is making a triangular pattern in your art work. this doesnt necessarily mean actually make a triangular, you can also make 3 focal points in the piece. its a technique that many artists use in their artwork to force the viewers eye to move around the artwork and take everything in, not focus on one area. some of the edges seem a bit jagged and unrefined. soften them a bit and this would look a little more organic.
this is a very cool concept, i love the little details like those strange swirling things in the lower left and the shading and lighting is very nicely done.
keep going with this, i think you got something interesting going on.
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claremanson [2005-07-29 08:56:25 +0000 UTC]
wonderful shape, light and colour, this is really good.
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ozpopo [2005-07-27 17:07:53 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is gorgeous. The powerful movement, intricate detail, and delicious colour. Definitely a fav.
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Not-a-kitty In reply to ozpopo [2005-07-27 22:50:54 +0000 UTC]
Its great to hear.
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softcell72 [2005-07-26 20:33:09 +0000 UTC]
It's great I love abstract pieces
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Not-a-kitty In reply to softcell72 [2005-07-27 14:53:41 +0000 UTC]
Its my favourite style (well, really the only one that I'm good at).Though, I'm trying to brach out a little, not too much progress yet.
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thedobofdob [2005-07-14 07:34:12 +0000 UTC]
like the way you distorted the render, gj
a few suggestions though,
use more than one colour
make the focal point not in the center
sharpen the brushing
~Zeal
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Not-a-kitty In reply to nerdyglam [2005-07-14 03:30:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the tip. I'll keep that in mind.
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Not-a-kitty [2005-07-14 01:17:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comments, and the +fav, aaron.
I'll be sure to keep in mind the central definition, and work on my brushing a little more. Thanks.
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aaronravensoul [2005-07-14 01:07:07 +0000 UTC]
This is really beautiful ^_^
Enjoy your time on DA, after a while, people start to pick up on your stuff, then it starts getting fun.
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