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Published: 2006-07-04 16:40:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 2775; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 41
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I had been asked if I minded someone writing a fanfic based on this and I gave my permission and requested a link when it was done. And it's done! Here it is: by "What should have happened" [link] . I'm SO happy now.


This is going by the ANIME's ending not the MANGA's since I haven't gotten the last book yet so bear with me. I didn't like that they ended it so that there can't be a sequel so I had to change that. Below is the whole conversion so please read it all. And those with hentai minds...well the one talking about the "feeling" Rosette gets is Saint Peter so it HAS to be clean but what they find out after a long, hard battle is a different story Oh and unless you have a fast connection you might not want to full view - it's a huge file.


Rosette: If Chrono's not allowed in, I'M not going in!
Chrono: It's okay Rosette, I can stay out here. I don't mind. As long as you get in, I'll be happy.
Rosette: NO!
Chrono: But Rosette!
Rosette: NO!
Saint Peter: Oh no, no Rosette that's not the problem. Chrono WILL be allowed in, he changed his ways and did a lot of good and earned a place in heaven alongside you. It's just that.....you two are here way before your time.
Rosette: huh?
Saint Peter: *reading book* Yes, you're not supposed to be here yet. We'll have to send you back.
Chrono: Um.... you can do that?
Saint Peter: Oh yes, we'll just restore you back to your lives as you were when you left them....with a couple changes of course.
Rosette: *suspicious* What changes would those be hmmmm?
Saint Peter: Well let me see. Chrono's horns for one. Since he chose to be with you instead of using them to restore his power, we'll reattach them with one little... alteration - whenever he uses his power they will give you back some of your lifeforce that he used. His power will be the same as it used to be and you will still have to unseal him using the pocketwatch but your soul will be "refilled" every time he unseals. Plus when you have your full soul back, it will stop.
Rosette: And what's the catch?
Saint Peter: There is no catch.
Rosette: There's always a catch.
Saint Peter: Not for this there isn't. The only thing is after you are done and seal his powers back up, he will be VERY tired. He will likely fall right asleep as soon as the pocketwatch is closed so be careful to get to a safe and quiet place as soon as you can. Oh and make sure he eats a lot when he finally wakes up, food will be how he replaces the energy he uses so expect him to be very hungry. Long battles will exhaust him so don't get scared when he sleeps for a very long time, just stay close by and he'll be fine.
Rosette: That's it?
Saint Peter: Yes.
Chrono: um..I have a question. Will it still hurt Rosette when I'm unsealed?
Saint Peter: Oh! I almost forgot that. No, it will not hurt her. Actually it will feel nice, like drinking a cup of hot chocolate.
Chrono: That's all? It really won't hurt?
Saint Peter: Yes. And *looks back in book* since it looks like you're not supposed to be back for quite a while, please be careful with your lives -if one of you dies so will the other. It's part of the change to Chrono's horns and of course you will have to finish your jobs at the Magdalan Order but after that you can do as you please.
Rosette: And how long will that be?
Saint Peter: You will know when that time comes. Just live your lives to the fullest. Now I'll call for an angel to escort you both back to Earth. Please unseal Chrono so he may carry you Rosette.
Rosette: *unsealing* Ohhh... that does feel nice...
Chrono: mmmm...yes it does...
END.


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Comments: 71

notoes In reply to ??? [2010-04-13 21:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Felixuta In reply to notoes [2010-04-14 05:14:23 +0000 UTC]

Your to welcome dear!

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Kierax [2009-02-18 20:44:23 +0000 UTC]

I'll admit. That's an interesting way to end it. Very creative.

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notoes In reply to Kierax [2009-02-19 21:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I didn't really care for the anime ending or the manga ending since they both ended with them dying instead of "riding off into the sunset" so I wanted to do a little "after the ending,end it in a slightly better way" and this is what I came up with

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Kierax In reply to notoes [2009-02-20 02:37:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I agree. But personally, I like the manga better. Better ending.

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notoes In reply to Kierax [2009-02-24 14:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Between the two, it is a better ending since they had to end it like that instead of leaving it more open ended.

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Kierax In reply to notoes [2009-02-24 21:43:27 +0000 UTC]

right. I agree. I really don't like the anime at all, it took too much out of the manga..and changed too much.

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Naesnark [2008-02-06 17:23:23 +0000 UTC]

GOSH! I would LOVE to see something like this in the anime (I hate the manga ending)!!! I LOVE IT!! I feel inspired.

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notoes In reply to Naesnark [2008-02-06 21:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I wish you many many inspired thoughts - if they bring about more CC fanart that is

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Naesnark In reply to notoes [2008-02-07 14:59:05 +0000 UTC]

CC *melts* I made a wallpaper, but I don't submit my drawing 'cause I think they're not good enough (but the wallpaper is awsome, take a peek^^)

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notoes In reply to Naesnark [2008-02-09 02:55:20 +0000 UTC]

We're not an art school here so there's no reason not to put them up.

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Naesnark In reply to notoes [2008-02-09 11:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but... I don't like showing my drawings when I don't think they're good enough...

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FFXFan13 [2007-08-07 20:28:39 +0000 UTC]

would you mind if i try to base some fanfiction on this?

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notoes In reply to FFXFan13 [2007-08-09 13:33:48 +0000 UTC]

.....no .....I don't mind at all... I would love to see something based on it Just if you do write it I would like a link to it.

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FFXFan13 In reply to notoes [2007-08-09 14:16:37 +0000 UTC]

You can count on it.

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loveludvig [2007-05-02 13:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Chrono is a nice guy. So he decive not to go to Hell.
But if Rosette is with him...^-^

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notoes In reply to loveludvig [2007-05-02 14:34:40 +0000 UTC]

Yes he is

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shadow1227 [2007-01-26 08:39:19 +0000 UTC]

That would explain a lot for the end of the anime!

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misogirl [2007-01-07 04:21:12 +0000 UTC]

... isn't that a little to convenient?

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notoes In reply to misogirl [2007-01-08 20:24:50 +0000 UTC]

Well considering its a relatively short anime/manga, I wanted to give them a way to "continue" the series since it ended way too soon for something that good.

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misogirl In reply to notoes [2007-01-09 03:08:28 +0000 UTC]

What did you want? 62 empitsodes/volumes?! Hey!! That's a good idea!

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notoes In reply to misogirl [2007-01-10 15:25:27 +0000 UTC]

Yup! Considering that Inuyasha is still running at over 40 dvd volumes and I loved Saiyuki (with 19 dvds and a movie) and Yu Yu Hakusho (with 32 dvd and two movies), you get the idea that I really like long series with good storylines. Even if they just had left it with both Rosette and Chrono alive would have been fine but they killed them off and I don't like that.

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misogirl In reply to notoes [2007-01-11 03:47:35 +0000 UTC]

Well... tte did have a short life to begin with.

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notoes In reply to misogirl [2007-01-13 00:58:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah but in the end Chrono got his horns back so they could have come up with some way of "backfeeding" her life a bit because of that. Or at least that's what my imagination says could have happened.

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misogirl In reply to notoes [2007-01-14 00:55:03 +0000 UTC]

I think (incert ceator's name here) not the epic story writer... or just lazy...

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Angelbreed2121 [2007-01-06 20:09:52 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha, i'm kind of having 'thoughts' right now.

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notoes In reply to Angelbreed2121 [2007-01-08 20:22:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad I could give out some "good" thoughts.

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Angelbreed2121 In reply to notoes [2007-01-08 22:31:23 +0000 UTC]

lol, your evil, but that's a good thing though

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notoes In reply to Angelbreed2121 [2007-01-10 15:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you, I try.

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Angelbreed2121 In reply to notoes [2007-01-11 01:59:21 +0000 UTC]

lol, me too, I'm a bit ..ahem... devilish.. hehehe, u can tell right?

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notoes In reply to Angelbreed2121 [2007-01-13 00:59:17 +0000 UTC]

Not a thing wrong with that

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Angelbreed2121 In reply to notoes [2007-01-13 02:29:28 +0000 UTC]

no not at all, I love being ahem... DEVILISH!!!!!!

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NaruHina500 [2006-12-26 08:31:55 +0000 UTC]

This one and your second ending should have been the ending!

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notoes In reply to NaruHina500 [2006-12-27 00:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I keep hoping that someone in the top will see/hear of people wanting more or an ending like mine and will bring us the miracle of a way back from the ending they gave us. Hey I can hope can't I?

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Aria1120 [2006-10-29 00:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Nice! My votes on this ending XD

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notoes In reply to Aria1120 [2006-10-30 00:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, if you like that one did you see the second one? It goes with the same thoughtline and I also have a third that I'm currently working on (if I ever get the motivation to finish it).

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Eiashian [2006-08-20 05:03:50 +0000 UTC]

Omg this is how it should have ended!! That would be so awesome XDDD. You should write a full fanfic about this, if nothing else than to make us people who cried for like a solid hour after the end happy XD. Really, I think I would have been pretty sadistic about changing the end, or ridiculasly romantic . I love mushy stuffs, and Chrono and Rosette are like my fav couple. Oh but if anyone's not read manga, please do... it's much better T.T.

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notoes In reply to Eiashian [2006-08-20 13:40:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you but I'm not really a writer, I do fanart and beta-read mostly. I do have a second scene that goes with this one up by now but I don't have a direct link to it handy (just look at my last deviantion).

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chocolate-kiosk [2006-07-19 06:53:29 +0000 UTC]

^_______^ aah, thats so anusing, and really good too!!! looks awshum

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notoes In reply to chocolate-kiosk [2006-07-19 13:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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chocolate-kiosk In reply to notoes [2006-07-20 07:22:43 +0000 UTC]

no problemo!

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Amjam [2006-07-19 00:09:32 +0000 UTC]

I really think that Chrno's the nice one and should be allowed in... I thought Rosette was more prone to rejection. XD

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notoes In reply to Amjam [2006-07-19 13:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Rosette and Chrono's reasoning is that she's human and he's a devil so they figure that on principle alone he wouldn't be allowed in but to me it's what they do that gets them up there.

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Amjam In reply to notoes [2006-07-19 15:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Except Chrono's really nice and fights to help Rosette and he only has one arm, one eye (Take pity on the poor guy) and nothing but love for Mary/Rosette, whereas Rosette lives to the ripe old age (*cough*) of 26 and spends most of those years shooting people.... But I won't argue with hot chocolatey feelings.

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Listy [2006-07-12 18:06:29 +0000 UTC]

LOL! You did a very good job on that! I like it!

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notoes In reply to Listy [2006-07-12 18:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm kinda proud of it.

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Listy In reply to notoes [2006-07-12 20:22:08 +0000 UTC]

You should be!

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Klamsi [2006-07-07 14:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Aaaw, this is how it should have ended. This anime still holds my "crying-at-the-end-record"...I really cried my eyes off. Chrno Crusade is such an outstanding anime. I love it, especially Ishida AkiraΒ΄s great work as ChrnoΒ΄s seiyuu
However, I donΒ΄t know how the manga ends. Is there really a chance for a better ending? Then I have to read that. Chrno Crusade left me with such a dark feeling
Yod did great job, this is a very nice picture and a very nice alternative end. I like it

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notoes In reply to Klamsi [2006-07-07 19:58:03 +0000 UTC]

*blink blink* Usually I'm the one going into depth on what I like about a pic, it's nice to see someone else do it for a change on one of mine Well I did have forwarning on the anime ending from Urd-chan (she just told me to keep tissues handy) but I haven't gotten the last two volumes of the manga yet so I think I heard that it ended similarly but they went into more depth but don't quote me. I want to "support" them so that maybe they'll come back and use my idea of an alternative and bring in a second season (we can hope but I'm not holding my breath).

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Klamsi In reply to notoes [2006-07-14 05:58:51 +0000 UTC]

Wel, this pic has a message. I had much more to say about it but I didnΒ΄t had enough time
A second season would be awesome but I guess this will not happen...

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