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TheBattyCrow [2012-10-02 16:31:18 +0000 UTC]
I... did not expect this... Bernard.... why?
IDK, definitely, this was the most emotional part I've read from this, and I loved it^^ especially, the shadow kitty returning and... Marty's actually NICE to him.
This also made me sad. I feel kinda... empty inside... sort of like: now what? Will he get Bernard back? Will everything return to normal? ARGH!
A nice conclusion, I thought, though. And I know I mentioned before how much I like it in the flash player^^ It flows so nicely, and the layouts and characters were incredible!
Well done, well done^^
now, I order you to go and take a well-earned nap!!
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AlfaFilly [2012-09-30 00:21:48 +0000 UTC]
Pssssh, why must this be the eeeend. I do not know how to control these feels. It's like ToH all over again, but with sexy sassy Martys. 8'C
Maaaan, so I totally did not expect the ending to this at all. Then again I wasn't really sure what to expect from Marty in his crazy state (having him suddenly grow a heart and not destroy things would have been a bit strange for him so that seemed a far reach) but to have him not actually win at all was a crazy plot twist. Either way this tourney ends up, Helena still was the winner and Medium is still saved. I never thought of that in 10 million years with an OCT. At first I was a little iffy on that, but after rereading the part like 3 more times it almost seems like a perfect ending. Marty really went through a lot this time, and his selfish build-up ended up crashing down on him in the end. See what happens, Martykins? You need to learn to love people instead of yourself. >:C Or love yourself but... love people slightly more. pff
And of course the return of the paper at the end... well you heard my reaction to that. It was so perfect and fitting. It gave me warm fuzzy feelings inside. 8'I The loop around back to the flashback sequence and all was perfect for this round to lead to the conclusion. It was just so faaaab.
And as for your whole CM for this go around, it's been such a fantbulous journey. I know you struggled quite a bit through this, but you definitely learned along the way and it shows in this one. Some climactic issue may linger here and there, but from Round 1 to this it's like an extraordinary leap. I don't know whether to love Round 1 or this part the most now! 8'I I liked seeing Marty kinda develop through this in his own ways. It took him awhile to really learn his lesson and realize he's not the center of the universe, but when it all came down I think he did realize he was being an asshat. AND HE SHOULD FEEL ASHAAAAMED. Maybe in it's own way he had his version of a happy ending. Not the ending he wanted, but something that brings positives as a whole.
And of course, the Flash comics worked out really great I think for this. Especially for some of the storyboard-like scenes (like Bernard creating the chair and the change in Saiph's emotions). Some of the scenes were really fancy like Marty walking off into the degrading city and him transitioning from the golden building to original!Diabolus. Little things like that made it quite nifty
All in all this ending was really fantastic and as a whole this tourney was totally worth every bit, and I'm so ridiculously happy you made it to the end. It was so fun to read and I love Marty even more. Why must you allow me to favor such psychopathic douchebags? 8'C
Good luck in the final judging, but whatever happens, this was a great story
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NuclearLoop In reply to AlfaFilly [2012-09-30 04:56:15 +0000 UTC]
Sexy sassy Marty's indeed 8'C It doesn't even feel like it's the end but it iiiis 8'U
I'm glad you approve of the plot twist, I was hoping it would work out alright seeing there was no rules (well no rules in general) saying you had to show YOUR character winning CB Marty does not deserve such fine luxury. ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE, MARTY.
Ahaha, I was hoping people would remember dat paper >:U Even though I had quoted it in the first part pff
I learned through this entire venture, with sweat, blood and tears, but mostly blood. It got kinda of messy. And yeah I guess, I mean he got back to his story and everybody is alive again 8D He just has to be a better person this time >:U
Thanks! I was happy I went with the flash comic idea this go, it really worked out perfect for my plans and I'm glad people agree >:U
BECAUSE CREATING LIKABLE DOUCHEBAGS IS JUST WHAT I DO MAN.
Thanks dude, I appreciate all the support from start to finish ;A; *smothers with hugs*
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AlfaFilly In reply to NuclearLoop [2012-10-02 02:51:56 +0000 UTC]
Oh bby BU
That's one positive to having an OCT with no rules. There are no rules to screw so ANYTHING GOES! 8D It's definitely an original take on it, for sure. I know I was so surprised I was waiting for Marty to turn around and win some other way. So it was a twist for sure.
GOSH DANGIT LO, STOP DOING THAT AND MAKING ME FANGIRL OVER EVERYTHING, YOU'RE SO INSENSITIVE!! >8'CCC
It's no probs bro, no probs at all. It was a magical adventure. 8'I *dies from hugs*
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Cloudbat [2012-09-29 18:23:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh Marty...I love how things came full circle, it's so sadly beautiful. Oh Marty.
And Saiph ;o; Saiphy...
I love that paper, it's so cool.
<33333 Eeeeee
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NuclearLoop In reply to Cloudbat [2012-09-29 18:47:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh Marty indeed...
*me continues to smother Saiph in hugs*
Thanks :'D
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StupidShepherd [2012-09-29 17:55:52 +0000 UTC]
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFF Maaaaaaaaaaaaaan I wanted to comment on this yesterday but I forgot 8'U
I really liked this round in general but particularly this part and I thought it was nice that even though Mart didn't get a "happy" ending, his story didn't end on a sour not either. Personally, It would have been interesting to see what woulda happened if Mart would have won but, I think the ending you gave to this was very fitting and way well done. So good job man >:C (and pssssh i can see what you mean for "Time" really fitting well for this part now 8'U)
I know you put a shetton of effort into all these parts, and it really shows. The flash comic format thing you did was really fun and interesting and ttly fab for a finale >:U
good luck with judging man, you did not disappoint >8C
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NuclearLoop In reply to StupidShepherd [2012-09-29 18:48:32 +0000 UTC]
Man s'all good bro >:U
Thanks it really means a lot to me 8'C Yeah I listened to that song n Viva la Vida the most when scripting and drawing everything XD
I'm happy you enjoyed it so thanks man 8'C
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Shinkoryu14 [2012-09-29 03:03:21 +0000 UTC]
FFFFFFFFFFFF, all my feels.
ALL. MY. FEELS.
So this is awesome and you shush about getting second place, this is ffff, I have no words. Poor Saiph, he met with such a noble end and it was totally a fitting conclusion to his character arc. He finally found something that mattered more to him than himself. ;A;
I also thought it was pretty epic that Helena becomes like, the new ruler/guardian of Medium in Omer's place. She was totes boss telling Death his services were not needed. And of course she takes the easiest and most direct route to dealing with Marty, like any halfway intelligent person would. She has found genre savvy!
And then when the shadow cat showed back up at the end I just had to smile. Hopefully Marty will learn something from this experience and do better by Diabolus this time.
Your ending has filled me with emotions and I cannot properly express how happy I will be if you win. However things turn out in the judging CM will get an epic conclusion.
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