KuroAndShiro [2017-11-04 04:09:29 +0000 UTC]
You done a pretty good job on this but I'll give some advice here
Lupo's left arm is too short, his hat looks like it's floating when I see your sketch. It needs to be touched on his head to look like he's wearing itΒ
Hiroko looks rather a muscle guy and her sword is too small and short (I'm updating a new one for her) her left hand is also smaller than Lupo's. You need to fix her top chest smaller abit and her hips needs to be little bigger like extra thic if you want to
in other words you did well om this oneΒ
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Willfire-Z-Tiger In reply to numberguy128 [2018-09-17 19:41:06 +0000 UTC]
I'd like to add that the painting looks off. I'm not sure why. It looks like it was made in the 2000's. The grass looks good.Β The sky is fine. It's just that the characters coloring seems a bit weird. I don't know but hey it was made 1 year ago.
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numberguy128 In reply to Willfire-Z-Tiger [2018-09-17 22:20:00 +0000 UTC]
I would say that I'm not that at coloring stuff like this tho. And I appreciate you for sharing your thoughts and/or criticism about it, thanks
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