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Published: 2005-08-23 11:33:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description Right guys, if youve been following my work so far you may have noticed that they are all going towards my art project...
With this piece im not sure whether to put it into my work, could you please comment on this piece, whether its critisims or not. Even ideas for improvements would be useful.
This would really help me, thanks.
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DamonVonBohn [2005-08-23 17:43:39 +0000 UTC]

It looks very interesting, actually. But it feels as though the closer coral, the bright pink ones, should be a bit fatter since they are closer to the viewer. (and the end should either be on top of the shark, or cut shorter so it doesn't overlap the shark)

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