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Edit - Sharing how it looked in the 5 phases together from sketch to finish here - [link]


Drawing requested by ~ShiningLorenzo like . . . 3 months ago ><;
Criteria : Fan-art for Rainbow Factory/Awoken - Glaze, Joe and H8 Seed in White Jumpsuits, H8 Seed showing regret while the other two still showing a dark expression.

Sketch from 2 months ago -
Revised Sketch from half a month ago -

As can be seen, I changed a lot of stuff between the two sketches, and ugh, I hate how it's been 3 months, but even I gotta admit this drawing wouldn't have been at this quality had I finished it earlier. I learned a lot over these 3 months after all from cleaner lines, coloring/shading/lighting adjustments, filters, perspective and more.

It's probably impossible to tell, but the color of the 'POV Pony' is light purple.


My Little Pony : Friendship is Magic series belongs to Hasbro


v Would love a critique! Make sure to note however -
The 'vision' is how well I portrayed the criteria of the request.
The 'originality' is not based on being completely original with characters or ideas, but rather how the image is portrayed.
No comments about OC designs/colors as they are not mine, have been requested in the critiera, and are not my decision to change.

If you can't find any flaws you could constructively note, just comment instead. v
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Comments: 100

shenzi12345 [2013-06-01 12:53:26 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I love the background, and the song, if you haven't heard it here it is [link]
If you had heard it before you should love it
Do you love the background?
What do yo think?
It is good but tell me why the silver pony has those wings?, I know I seen the vedio before but wh y do people doing these?, oh this is my first time
Am GOINTO speak in my language describing this photo
S'ti Ko eht eosrep htiw neerg riah dna wolley ehs gnikerf em tou(it's ok the persone with green hair and yellow she freking me out)

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Nyaseiru In reply to shenzi12345 [2013-06-01 15:56:14 +0000 UTC]

It is quite a lovely song, and the story, and the visuals - these ponies are OCs of the respective musician, it is of their own design as to why they look as they are.

I cannot accept this critique as fair however, as you hadn't described anything as to why you make your rating, and have only commented about their OC designs. As well, this is an old drawing, I should have disabled critiques on older drawings so that's my fault. Thank you anyways for taking the time to critique 'though.

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TheStorm117 [2012-11-19 13:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Overall

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Originality

Technique

Impact


Awoken. a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/o/m… " alt=" " title="motherofgodfaceplz" /> Now for critique... I'm going to guess that you based this off of the PMV by Brony Dance Party. I can see some familiarity in both this and the video, such as colour and background. That said, the vision is clear, another pony being submitted into the Rainbow Factory, with Glaze and Joe looming over it. The expressions and POV's do wonders for this piece, with the view being dynamic and the expressions on Dance and Glaze being... Well, terrifying e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Noes!"/> The colouring and shading on this is quite good, it does add a lot more depth. I do like how you have Glaze and Dance standing in the shadows, while H8 is illuminated in the light of the spectra. Perhaps a nod at this epiphany? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Shrug"/> Impact overall: Quite dynamic, a very interesting POV, good expressions, and some really good shading and colouring. If anything can be improved on however, it would have to be the background, it lacks the detail that the rest of this picture carries. That aside, great piece a.deviantart.net/avatars/r/a/r… " alt=" " title="rainbowdashlaplz" />

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Nyaseiru In reply to TheStorm117 [2012-11-19 15:58:33 +0000 UTC]

Well actually no, it's my own interpretation of the songs, guess it was a bit of coincidence 'though.

Thanks for the critique, lovely analysis, yes the background is a bit lacking in detail, it was actually less blurrier but I wanted to put the foreground into 'focus' which means the distance is blurred in vision, of course that's really not much excuse for the lack of stuff in the background anyways, I'll see if I can improve on background work in future drawings.

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CurtisKaiju [2017-01-14 03:09:18 +0000 UTC]

Great pic!

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bronniesfolive [2016-01-27 06:54:57 +0000 UTC]

Nice work

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kittean [2015-09-08 21:43:01 +0000 UTC]

i use as background for computer plz

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TrippleRRuler2222 [2015-04-01 00:30:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm making a meme on glazes smile.....

"When ur trying to take a photo but ur mom wants a bigger smile"

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JetFox89 [2014-12-17 19:36:44 +0000 UTC]

You dont mind if i use this as a movie poster do you?

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Pristine1281 [2014-11-22 23:00:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh one more thing, what exactly is a filter? Β I hear about them, but don't know what they're for.

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Pristine1281 [2014-11-22 22:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Well damn!!!! Β This perspective is awesome. Β It makes the looker feel like he or she is the pony (or victim). Β That is pretty scary!!! Β I did watch the Awaken video and honestly it's awesome, I just can watch the park where the actual victim is killed.

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MasterDerek-118 [2014-06-24 20:38:38 +0000 UTC]

watersideinfo.com/wp-content/u…

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VinylScratch111 [2014-04-02 00:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Question: WHY DOES EVERYONE MAKE WOODEN TOASTER A GIRL?! HE'S A DUUUUUUDEE!!!

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Nyaseiru In reply to VinylScratch111 [2014-04-02 00:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Because his OC is a female?
He stated that he didn't like stallion's "blocky" snout designs as the reason why

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VinylScratch111 In reply to Nyaseiru [2014-04-02 01:48:04 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmmmm......Still, he doesn't need eyelashes (in my opinion).

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icebubbles18 [2014-03-12 22:39:42 +0000 UTC]

This is really good...no... not really good...suspense................. the best friggon woodentoaster/brony dance party (whatever) thing i have seen in forever. Great job

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StormAlchemist15 [2014-02-20 04:05:32 +0000 UTC]

All of the failures fuel the success of the bloody and visceral weather game of chess.

Because you disappoint us you'll pay the price. Now, accept your fate and die in the Pegasus Device.

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Suika999 In reply to StormAlchemist15 [2017-02-01 08:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I love Pegasus Device, both the story and song. In fact, I like the Pegasus Device story more than Rainbow Factory

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Eugiius [2014-02-18 02:13:03 +0000 UTC]

In the rainbow factory, where all your fears and horrors come true....

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naomionda123cool [2014-02-08 00:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Awesome~!

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MetalBladePegasus [2014-01-30 22:59:39 +0000 UTC]

Awoken in the Rainbow Factory...Awesome!!!

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gamergir8 [2014-01-24 22:04:16 +0000 UTC]

can i use this in a video? I'll give you full credit in the description!


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Nyaseiru In reply to gamergir8 [2014-01-25 04:29:08 +0000 UTC]

Ye sure, just so long as credit is provided it's fine

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Proteans In reply to Nyaseiru [2014-09-25 20:03:33 +0000 UTC]

can i use it?

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Nyaseiru In reply to Proteans [2014-09-25 20:04:06 +0000 UTC]

for?

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Proteans In reply to Nyaseiru [2014-09-26 16:00:23 +0000 UTC]

a video :3

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Nyaseiru In reply to Proteans [2014-09-26 22:54:19 +0000 UTC]

If you credit me and link the artwork in the description, sure :3

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Proteans In reply to Nyaseiru [2014-09-28 17:00:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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gamergir8 In reply to Nyaseiru [2014-01-25 18:30:30 +0000 UTC]

used: www.youtube.com/watch?v=vRebLp…

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mydevianartstuff91 [2014-01-24 08:03:57 +0000 UTC]

also, SOMEPONY HELP ME!!!!!wait, I can fly since im a pegasi.

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mydevianartstuff91 [2014-01-24 08:01:01 +0000 UTC]

I subscribed to brontdanceparty, woodentoaster, and H8seed

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violetshrub [2014-01-21 21:51:38 +0000 UTC]

love it

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Portal15Art [2013-11-20 20:49:42 +0000 UTC]

Incredible !! A great song and a great imagen !! This is EPIC !!! Good work !!

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Skullkittenz21 [2013-11-17 11:39:52 +0000 UTC]

Aw, AWOKEN WAS EPIC!

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dinda221 [2013-11-16 13:46:58 +0000 UTC]

this is so awesome! hey shou can you please make moar rainbow factory? plzzzzzzzz i really like ur arts!

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Nyaseiru In reply to dinda221 [2013-11-16 14:05:30 +0000 UTC]

If I ever get around to it x3; though no promises

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dinda221 In reply to Nyaseiru [2013-11-16 14:08:12 +0000 UTC]

ok well i really want u to make moar cuz u r awesome

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AlphaEX1 [2013-09-25 18:10:11 +0000 UTC]

hmmm one thing i dont get that u have to be a pegesus to work at the rainbow factory.... but BronyDanceParty isent a pegesus.... WTF? O_o

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horsesrock847 [2013-09-25 00:39:35 +0000 UTC]

nice!

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brook2003roxMC [2013-08-17 19:51:24 +0000 UTC]

hey guys this is from the game on roblox cupcakes anr rainbow factory did coco ask promo?

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PilotSolaris In reply to brook2003roxMC [2013-09-17 02:01:41 +0000 UTC]

NYET! IS NOT FROM STUPID BABY ROBLOX GAME! Is from song! Look!:Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=YRx_iX…

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brook2003roxMC In reply to PilotSolaris [2013-09-17 02:39:57 +0000 UTC]

NYET QUIT BEING A DOOCHE MINECRAFT IS 2O% COOLER ANYWAYS

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PilotSolaris In reply to brook2003roxMC [2013-09-17 15:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Da! Minecraft is better game!

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brook2003roxMC In reply to PilotSolaris [2013-09-18 00:51:26 +0000 UTC]

hell ya it is

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flakyfan19 [2013-07-16 13:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Brave charger(my OC):NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! please I'm a pegasus! don't kill me

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Defender-of-people [2013-07-09 18:23:42 +0000 UTC]

That POV.... wow....
YOU ARE GOING SOMEWHERE WITH THIS!

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SpectrumSpoof [2013-06-27 14:38:20 +0000 UTC]

This is going in my favorites FOR SURE!!!

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TrianqleDude [2013-06-25 23:29:08 +0000 UTC]

I wish you could draw me.... Can you?

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Nyaseiru In reply to TrianqleDude [2013-06-25 23:33:20 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I don't take requests considering I'll be doing commissions later

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AwokenX [2013-06-21 14:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Gawd, I love this song so much, I think, I'll call it my favorite at the moment. It has such a profound story and the sound as well~ *-*

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