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Published: 2007-01-14 20:06:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description My hands melt into mossy walls,
And eyes close
As spray kisses their lashes.

Invisible toes curl,
Meticulously learning each smooth stone by touch,
Hidden by the gleeful foaming of the falls.

Edging deeper.

The water's seductive warmth creeps up my legs,
Deceptive with promises of icy cool.

(How far can I go...)

I breathe gasping
The air alive with water
Delighting in suffocation by nature.

Drenched hair curls giddily round my face,
Echoing the tangles of life
Hosting gentle fingers.

(I fancy small insects creeping past my skin;
Wondering 'what God intrudes thus?'
In their eternally dampened Eden)

Utter traquillity bubbles around me,
The rocks holding me safely
Part of the waterfall tumbling to swirl 'round my legs.

- One more step...
I dissolve, becoming wholly water.
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Comments: 6

MagicMyshu [2007-01-16 19:10:31 +0000 UTC]

awww nice I like this

Human body is about 70% water
as far as we know planets need water to sustain life

Water is a lot more precious than gold yet market forces cite gold as more valuabe than water - is that not idiotic?

what a backwards world

If we could see the truth we'd all be rich and we'd take better care of Earth - (our riches)

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thepuzzle In reply to MagicMyshu [2007-01-20 11:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, i wish the world would turn pagan and then we would appreciate nature for the life and spirit it gives us.

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Nycterisdream In reply to MagicMyshu [2007-01-17 09:43:03 +0000 UTC]

I know... its kinda like my personal religion. Elements...

The idea that we are a huge percentage water was the thinking behind becoming wholly water, as well as - how close you sometimes feel to being able to dissolve.

Thank you though, appreciate the comments

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thepuzzle In reply to Nycterisdream [2007-01-20 11:53:21 +0000 UTC]

Whaaaaatt? prose? i put it in prose? goh sorry about that lol

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Nycterisdream In reply to thepuzzle [2007-01-21 14:21:21 +0000 UTC]

HAHA FOOOOOOL!!! I dont care P

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thepuzzle In reply to Nycterisdream [2007-01-21 21:51:45 +0000 UTC]

WEEEEEEEeeeee *splat* okie dokie

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