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Published: 2010-04-24 04:06:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 2473; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 80
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Yay! First time I've entered a contest in SO long...just haven't had time, you know?Anyway, this is for [link] contest. I can just see these three girls going shopping as a team in spring. I think the two outside girls look a tad awkward, but I absolutely adore how Miyoshi came out. I wanted it to look like she's really dragging them (because she would) but eh. *shrug*
I really like this series.
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Don't worry, the poses ae perfect. The eyes of the left girl are maybe a bit weird, but nothing really serious
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Thank you! 
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good friends
fun days
origonal work or show imspired?
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Show inspired. It was for a contest.
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Well, it's not really a "show" so much as a Manga called "Bakuman". Check it out on OneManga.
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Oh cute x3
But i think the girl on the right looks like she's... ermm... doing something weird >_>
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Yeah...she does look like she's being over dramatic, and she isn't really like that, so it bugs me. *sigh* Ah well. Thanks.
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well, great job anyways, the folds and such are just awesome x3
The lines are too x333
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I wish I could to hands and feet and anatomy in general as well as you! ;_______;/
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I'm working on it... slowly...
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This is absolutely adorable...I love the sense of friendship.
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This is really cute! I love their poses and the fact that they look so lively
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LOL! I appreciate that! Thank you.
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Thanks! Now if I could only get them to look a little more natural...
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Ooh, this is lovely! I really like the feel of movement in the figures, and how they're interacting as though walking through a real street and real wind. The angled hat and the billowing hair of the one on the right are a nice touch and as usual I really like the clothing details and the creases you created. =^__^=
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Well that's thorough.
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I think it looks pretty good. I don't recognize the characters or the series, but I can tell there's a lot of energy and emotion in this pic.
One thing though, relating to the girl in the hat. The far hand is at a somewhat peculiar angle. It think if you straightened it or the fingers spread out a little less, it'd work perfect. The way it is now, it gives the girl a curious perspective. Not a bad one by any means, but it's a little hard to tell if if she's walking with them or being dragged along and liking it.
Other than that, it's great. I'd give it a win in my book.
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Hmm...you have a good point...Hmm...
Thank you so much!
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Other than that, absolutely lovely 
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Hattori. *snickers* I absolutely adore him, when I don't want to smack him.
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um... you may want to fix Aoki's right hand... it looks a bit wrong atm, as if she's groping herself
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...that was totally NOT my intention...
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I believe you 
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I've done that before too ([link] ) I was all proud of it, and my colleague was like - why is he groping himself?... so I can't judge, just trying to help out
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