mirrormaul [2008-07-25 19:56:09 +0000 UTC]
wow! this is awesome! very comprehensive, both subjective and objective- like you're both teaching and learning as you write- *applause!* Though as far aesthetics goes, you might consider line breaks (also for rhythm's sake)
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OceaNova-Techno In reply to mirrormaul [2008-07-26 04:59:12 +0000 UTC]
AH! Thank you Phil! I thought about line breaks, but I decided to leave it the way it was since it was written forever ago, ha ha!
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