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...and was his last.Draft 2
If anyone has an appropriate title please let me know.
Starting top left and going clockwise:
1) Universal Enemy (Konoha burning)
2) Meeting the locals (Death of a Stormtrooper)
3) Rage (Crash on Tatooine)
4) Apprentice vs. Shinobi (meeting a real demon)
5) "Sith," the shinobi hissed, "I'll show you real power!!" He ended in a gutteral roar. (showdown between Apprentice vs. Naruto)
6) The Survivor
I was somewhat inspired after the first draft (and I really hated Naruto's face), and so pulled reference:
Art of Assassin's Creed
The Art and Making of Star Wars: The Force Unleashed
Art of Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith
Uzumaki: The Art of Naruto
Question for Ninja-Majic: Would you be planning for Naruto to meet up and 'convert' Vader's Apprentice??
((or are you ignoring the whole Force Unleashed saga?))
They'd be roughly the same age...ish (or would Naruto be a bit older?). And it'd be kind of a cool twist, to have a fully trained sith as a partner (but that's up to you...just a thought).
I was also confuzzled, because he wrote that Naruto didn't learn any of the fourth's techniques...but I plead artistic license.
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The title is still up for grabs: Any suggestions???
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I had to freakin' scan the sketch about ten times, what you see is a compilation of 3 seperate scans. Some parts were cut of a such because of the scan so it's not all congruent. Anyways, this is just to give you an idea.
Oh crap...I let my imagination run away with me again.
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this is great have to ask is this on a fanfic please tell me
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this is greatly done, but what is the fanfiction used for this? it seems it would be a great story if the art is this good
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Came looking from the fanfic, gotta say well done.
It hit me when fist looking at it and it may seem a bit corny or lame but this thing to me just screams, "Maelstrom Unleashed"
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Got a colored version? This a pretty good pic.
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The 'Centerepiece' Naruto's expression isn't as... intence as the first draft. Some thing I quite liked. This is still an amazing piece of artwork. Can't wait for the finished version!
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Really nice, I love the pencil work with all the different shadings. You also put a hole lot of emotion into it. I can almost feel Naruto's rage and pain at all that's happened. Maybe I'll try and draw somthing like that too...
Per chance, are you planning on drawing Naruto in the Mandalorian armor he buys?
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Is that a lightsaber pike Naruto's wielding against Starkiller in the bottom right?
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no, not really, it was just a regular bo or (maybe)a vibro spear (or something), but it could be, it's just the draft part.
If I did the scene separately, would you request that it be one? I could easily modify it, i would just need some reference.
...and is the apprentice's name really Starkiller? I just know him as the apprentice
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Well, "the Apprentice" what he's often referred to as in the novel of TFU and the Soul Calibur IV game.
Yeah, do you do requests, or commissions? I have a ton of anime characters I'd like to see Starkiller/The Apprentice facing besides Naruto.
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My Commissions are Requests (they really make no difference to me), though you'd have to wait. I have to finish a few requests still.
But to answer your question, generally yes. I enjoy interesting ideas and mostly those come from crossovers.
so...send a list in we'll go from there.
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Okie-doke, I'll drop you a note soon.
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but don't get me wrong, you can pencil drawing skills are beyond sickness!!!!
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naruto witha lightsaber. interesting concept, but really be real now.
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Lol, no worries. It was a request for a fanfiction from an author. Perhaps I should put up a link so you could read it and atleast have a reference for most of the scenses I sketched?
(it's actually well done...in a plausible scenario if youo take the entire scope of the universe into perspective(plus a little imagination never hurt anyone))
I do appreciate your comment, and from a strictly Naruto Manga POV it isn't plausible.
...but it's fun ^_^
thank you for your honesty, I appreciate it
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ok then thanx 
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Now that is cool. Oh in regards to your questions I do have it planned for Naruto to meet up with Vader's apprentice. As for converting him, I am not sure yet. But I am getting ideas. I am going to have the apprentice and Naruto be about the same age. Oh and when did I write that Naruto did not learn any of the fourth's techniques? Because he did, so it must be a typo or something. So tell me where and I'll change that. I like this draft even more than the first one. You do excellent work. I like the scenes you have chosen. As for the title, Naruto has no particular hatred towards Vader, Naruto loathes all imperials. Though Palpatine by far the most.
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Hiya, sorry about the long silence. Any last minute changes before I go full tilt?
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Not really
Just remember Naruto needs to look dangerous. Like a Maelstrom barely contained. Don't make him look crazy, but he has an edge to him. Also the battle is taking place on Kashyyyk. And the battle is going to be very 3 dimensional, so depending what part of the battle you're drawing you may want to draw them at different altitudes. Also they are going to be making use of their environment in their fighting. Naruto will be using a lot of wind and fire type attacks, and Starkiller will be using a lot of Force Telekinesis and Force Lightning. Both will be using highly kinetic movements, acrobatics, weapon fighting, etc.
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This is a definite improvement over the last one! I totally love it!
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BTW, your team request drafts are up next
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Really? I was almost completely convinced that you'd abandoned those. What a pleasant surprise! Now I'm really eager to see them.
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Naw, I'm just really, really...really slow.
...and you have to admit, the shippuden canon doesn't lend itself up for...inspiration.
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..i know i said this once,
but you are awesome
I love the design of the light saber it looks really original, it is part tonfa right?
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Yes, it is part tonfa, I borrowed the design from the force unleashed art work.
And thank you
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your always welcome
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