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Published: 2012-02-04 10:03:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1269; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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Updated : 05/09/2012
Added the screen tone! This bedroom scene was my first attempt at toning windows at night... the reflection was hard to do. Hopefully I'll improve!
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Oh God. That suicide consultant did help her kill herself!
I could see this now! The SC telling her that she is invaluable
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Did you redraw the second and third panels? They look way better than what I remember O:
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Actually I didn't, I just added tone on them.
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Oh, I did erase some lines I had on his nose, though. Sometimes little changes make big differences.
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Now that you mentioned it, yeah I see that O: And that's true
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A valuable asset to society? What are the questions some sort of code?
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All will be revealed... later on
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Ha! Yes, I know what the poster is.
Yeah, I'm a bit worried about what Yuki said to that as well, lol. If his "Durrrrr, I 'unno...." answers got "YOU'RE SO VALUABLE AND AWESOME WE LOVE YOU" then I really hate to think of what they told Yuki.
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Exactly, why did his answers get a positive response? And yay, the bowling manga has not been forgotten XD
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I know that's kinda the point, that he got that response. But it's funny to imagine what the hell she said.
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Yeah, the SC is practically robotic. And where is the English mistake? Because I am tired too and I don't see one (but if there is one, I want to fix it!)
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Working on it! Probably will have the next page up very soon.
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Haha to the poster!
The only critique that I have is the cell phone. I love how it's inked but it looks too square-ish (rectangular-ish?) in the middle panels. Obviously in the previous pages the cell phones have had a square-ish aspect but for some reason here it's really...more noticeable? Maybe it's just me. >_>;;
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Before I do any tone or major changes (because I'm going to experiment and do corrections and tone digitally this time) I'll print it out first and see how it looks. If it looks bad small, I'll redo it. A lot of times things look less goofy when shrunk down, since mistakes are less obvious.
I will have to do a lot of touch ups on the phones, since I think I changed the design a little as I was drawing, and I still have to go in and digitally change the numbers and font to look more like cell phone buttons and screens. So I might go in and fix any boxiness then, if it looks bad in a smaller size. Thanks for the note 
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