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Oilux — May you rest in peace
Published: 2012-12-16 21:16:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1074; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 4
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Description You're gone now and away,
sleeping silently somewhere else
never speaking and always silent.

If we had talked more,
would you still be here
lying next to me in bed?

To bring you back,
I would walk five thousand miles
just like in that song that you love.

But you'll never hear music again
and we'll all be here still
just moving here through life.

And no one gets to see your smile
while your families mourns their loss
and all we have are memories.

To bring you back
I would happily take your place
in the land of the never living.

Because you're being missed,
and no one knows,
what they're going to do without you.

Sleeping silent mourning
the sun never seen again
resting eternally.
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Comments: 24

123-WolfGirl [2013-05-26 14:07:58 +0000 UTC]

I cied while reading this, and I'm sorry about your friend. It made me think about my cousin and one of my really good friends, I wished I could've said something to change their fate.....

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Oilux In reply to 123-WolfGirl [2013-05-26 22:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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123-WolfGirl In reply to Oilux [2013-05-26 23:25:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, I thought a lot when I read it. It was an amazing poem, it had much emotion behind it.

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racerman56 [2013-05-14 22:59:28 +0000 UTC]

This brings tears to my eyes, I have lost too many friends and family in the last couple of years.

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Oilux In reply to racerman56 [2013-05-16 05:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Losing people is the worst

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KNC1997 [2013-01-26 00:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Just now reading your poems.. I have 11 in my Deviantwatch messages I kept to read eventually this is the first one x]

I am so so sorry for your lost. Q-Q

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smilingpeeps [2012-12-23 07:26:55 +0000 UTC]

beautifully heartbreaking work. may your friend rest in peace.

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Oilux In reply to smilingpeeps [2012-12-28 04:45:26 +0000 UTC]

I really hope that she does.

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Moaheya [2012-12-17 02:27:28 +0000 UTC]

If a picture is worth a thousand words, then an emotion is worth a million, but all the words in the world don't quite cut it when writing about loss that's close to the heart, do they.
Well done. I love your work.

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Oilux In reply to Moaheya [2012-12-19 00:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. This comment made my day.

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Moaheya In reply to Oilux [2012-12-19 01:53:06 +0000 UTC]

You're very, very welcome

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SakyoDawnii [2012-12-17 02:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Sorry about your friend~ May she rest in peace <3

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Oilux In reply to SakyoDawnii [2012-12-19 00:31:27 +0000 UTC]

I hope that she will. At least she's in a better place now.

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SonicAngel15 [2012-12-16 23:51:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm very sorry for your loss, but know that your friend is in Heaven with the Lord.

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Oilux In reply to SonicAngel15 [2012-12-19 00:32:11 +0000 UTC]

I just hope she's happy there.

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KuraiTenshiV [2012-12-16 22:57:19 +0000 UTC]

Its beautiful. And im very sorry for your loss, i understand the empty

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Oilux In reply to KuraiTenshiV [2012-12-19 00:32:19 +0000 UTC]

I just miss her so much

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KuraiTenshiV In reply to Oilux [2012-12-19 00:37:18 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling I'm so sorry

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Oilux In reply to KuraiTenshiV [2012-12-19 00:39:17 +0000 UTC]

It's okay. It's not the first time I've lost someone, so at least I know that it will get better.

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KuraiTenshiV In reply to Oilux [2012-12-19 00:41:50 +0000 UTC]

Yea time is all which really blows

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Oilux In reply to KuraiTenshiV [2012-12-19 00:43:10 +0000 UTC]

Time is the essence of reality, but in all truth it really does just suck.

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KuraiTenshiV In reply to Oilux [2012-12-19 01:52:38 +0000 UTC]

:: nods ::

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Amebr [2012-12-16 21:34:32 +0000 UTC]

Lovely peice of writing. I'm sorry to hear about your friend.

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Oilux In reply to Amebr [2012-12-19 00:32:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and I just hope she is in a better place.

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