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okamioujou In reply to JMCaptein [2010-05-23 22:16:26 +0000 UTC]

> is your story done yet by chance, or online at all?

Sadly, not yet. I'm busy writing my MA thesis and trying to complete fics for kink_meme and lgbt_fest; this one is third in the queue. I will post it in once it's complete. The first chapter is half-way done and will be up in about 3-4 weeks. ^^'

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JMCaptein In reply to okamioujou [2010-05-24 03:23:30 +0000 UTC]

well i wish you all the luck/best and i'll look forward to it

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okamioujou In reply to Tatsumi-20XX [2010-05-23 22:00:12 +0000 UTC]

That would be amazing!

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Tatsumi-20XX In reply to okamioujou [2010-05-24 00:35:19 +0000 UTC]

It Will HAPPEN! D:!!!

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okamioujou In reply to SilentOmega12e [2010-05-19 18:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the comment!

>We need more tony/jarvis!

That's what is for! And yup, I'll be posting a lot more of fanarts/fics/commentaries after I'm done with my academic workload.

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okamioujou In reply to LadyBerZerK [2010-05-16 13:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the comment!

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LadyBerZerK In reply to okamioujou [2010-05-16 21:10:57 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome!

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okamioujou In reply to Jokerfest [2010-05-10 20:55:50 +0000 UTC]

*pats herself on the back, hesitantly*

I've seen some great artists do their lineart/colouring so well that the picture can be seen in 100% and no mistakes can be seen. I want to learn to do pictures like that : (Maybe it's impossible for me). I'm slooowly getting there; this is the picture I'm colouring right now:
[link]
It's the actual size and I didn't make as many mistakes as usually, so it can be seen in the real size and not make people cry... It's in early stages of colouring, though, so I guess there are still many opportunities for me to mess it up

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Jokerfest In reply to okamioujou [2010-05-11 03:30:52 +0000 UTC]

Incredible, i like how you faded the 2 on Jarvis, and the detail that you put into their faces. I wonder if you based Jarvis' design on Paul Bettany? I noticed that he was pale blond, similar to the actor himself and just wondered. And yeah, no worries, one day your lineart will be at the level that you want it to be. Every art form requires practice, practice, practice. I'm a writer and occasionally I do write something that I find terrible but everyone seems to like. One day, me and my friends/critics may both look at the work and agree but until then the only thing to do is work on it! So lots of luck your way and I really hope to see that fanfiction.

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okamioujou In reply to Jokerfest [2010-05-16 13:52:03 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for such a late reply! My internet connection was down because of the storms.

> I wonder if you based Jarvis' design on Paul Bettany?

Actually, I imagined Jarvis as tale, pale blond with bright blue eyes even before I knew that Paul Bettany voiced him. I don't know why... Maybe I perceived him as tall, because his voice has authority and he always looks 'down' at others because the surveillance cameras are usually placed near the ceiling. Pale, because in a way all the time "inside" - either in the computer's mainframe, or in the armour (and an android wouldn't tan, anyway!) I imagined him with platinum blonde hair, because it would remind remind me of metals and wires. And bright blue eyes - of the glow of the arc reactor and electricity.

But after watching some movies with Paul Bettany and reading his interviews, I must say he really reflects my inner image of Jarvis really well. Not only his looks, but also the way he speaks, his witty comments and sarcasm really remind me of Jarvis. I read that Favreau worked with Bettany before Iron Man and that's why he asked Paul to voice Jarvis. I wonder if Jarvis's part was written especially for Paul - there was no Jarvis the AI in the comics.

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Jokerfest In reply to okamioujou [2010-05-17 08:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Aha, well then that is a pretty cool coincidence! And the thought process behind that, well...it's probably never work out that nicely for me But yes, I love movies with Paul Bettany, he's the perfect voice for the snide, yet charming butler

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okamioujou In reply to Gudinden [2010-05-10 06:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment!

Yes, Jarvis is Tony's computer system (or, more precisely, an Artificial Intelligence). In the novels (which are based on the movies' original screenplay, but longer) Jarvis is described as developing a sentience, becoming more of Tony's friend than assistant and being able to upload himself on many vehicles/devices and to control them. If the can pilot the Iron Man armour, he could also theoretically control an android body.
But no, an android Jarvis does not appear in the movies/novels at this point. It's just how the fans imagine him (check out my Favourites to see more android!Jarvis fanarts. Or this: [link] lovely comic).

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okamioujou In reply to LadyBerZerK [2010-04-27 16:38:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment!

> I must say I'm now really excited for this fan fic of yours! I hope you finish it soon!

I'm writing a few, but this one will not be the first to be finished. ^^ It's like 4th in turn. It won't be anything special... English is not my native language, and my English lacks enough finesse for me to be a good writer. Still, I hope to inspire other people to write.

> ps I have like 4 pages worth of tony/Jarvis goodness!! lol I just gotta find time to post them!

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LadyBerZerK In reply to okamioujou [2010-05-17 01:42:45 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome as always!

I still cant wait to see it though! I'm sure your a better writer then me anyway! and any contributes to the Tony and Jarvis take over is good right?

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okamioujou In reply to inskate777 [2010-04-24 16:19:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment!

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okamioujou In reply to sollertia-studios [2010-04-24 16:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

>I've loved this from the original sketch, doncha know.

I had to re-draw a few things! It's always funny to look at your own pics a few weeks later and realize that you messed up some of the details...

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sollertia-studios In reply to okamioujou [2010-04-24 16:27:38 +0000 UTC]

OH GOD I KNOW THAT FEELING. D: Agony.

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okamioujou In reply to capaow [2010-04-24 16:17:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

>I am looking forward to the fic.
I'm writing some now!

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okamioujou In reply to newwrldgrl [2010-04-24 16:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you I don't think I'm hard on myself - I simply believe (hope...) I can do a bit better if I try hard enough!

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okamioujou In reply to four-leaf-charm [2010-04-24 16:16:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

>>_> I hear you. I really want to write a story about them as well,

I'm mostly stuck because I write 5 things at once >.> And this particular story takes place in the Avengers movieverse, which is sort of challenging, as the movie is not out yet >.> I have such trouble writing Thor. I want to chuck him out of the team simply because I have no idea what to do with the guy.
My biggest problem is that I'm not a native speaker and I struggle with English grammar sometimes. Even with help from my beta I'm a bit anxious that despite good ideas my fanfics will be unreadable. But well, if that happens, I'll turn them into comics.

> but alas, writing solo is always tough for me.

Always willing to help, share ideas, provide plot bunnies or quote the whole novels for inspiration!

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okamioujou In reply to Alice91 [2010-04-24 16:08:31 +0000 UTC]

Dzięki! Z chęcią coś narysuję w wolnym czasie Jakieś pomysły?

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Alice91 In reply to okamioujou [2010-04-24 16:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Jasne! Hmm... *my?li* Tony i moja posta??! O_o <333

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