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Published: 2007-09-10 17:59:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1375; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 44
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I'm pretty happy with this page, so it's not going into scraps, but please feel free to critique for any errors I'm making.Related content
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I like this sort of thing, it looks like secret illustrations from old books. I'm wondering what you're using though, it looks blacker and thicker than pencil?
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It's a marker brush pen! 
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I like this expressive line work a lot more. i hope it's ok to say that. Keep it up.
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I love your faces . . . they're soft and full, which isn't something I see enough of. I also really enjoy the combination of realism and cartoon in the first panel.
Still don't quite know how to critique you, but I'm really enjoying the frequent updates!
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Haha, seriously, don't worry about critique. Just mention something that bothers you if it keeps coming up, like if my compositions are unbalanced or if my noses really bug you? Actually, if you have any tips for drawing noses, I have a fairly difficult time with thin ones--my own is wide with round nostrils, so super easy to draw, but I'm never really sure how to handle thin British-aristocrat noses.
But don't stress!
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it's sweet ! angels' mom just look great !
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