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Ixmay [2013-04-13 02:50:33 +0000 UTC]
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Please, I hope I don't offend anyone with my critique!! And so, first off, I'd like to commend you on this wonderful poster that speaks very powerful to all those who recognize the Pokemon series!! The powerful words, images and insinuations in this piece speaks for itself, that 'If you don't struggle, you don't improve'.
Personally, I have not seen a Motivational quite like this, so I speak for myself when I commend you on the originality and ingenuity of this piece. Though, I'd like to suggest that you use more means to display these Pokemon, other than merely taking them off the Pokemon Wiki and editing them. And also, the background color, blue, strikes me as an odd choice, seeing as the Gyarados is also blue and so, the background does not completely provide a contrast to the images. But, we'll manage!
Still, I have to commend you for your imagination in creating this piece! The font of this piece, I have to add, compliments this piece perfectly, seeing as Pokemon is a game and you have used a gaming styled font. But the thing that, again, impacted many of us the most in this piece is the message.
The message that if you don't struggle, you won't grow just hits many of us right in there! And again, coupled by the fact that you used THE Magikarp as an example, you've connected with so many people through the use of Pokemon.
So, bravo on this pure genius piece! Overall, it really is a wonderful piece and words to remember in the struggles of life! Good job!!
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Ommin202 In reply to Ixmay [2013-04-13 04:25:37 +0000 UTC]
Not offended at all, in fact I'm very pleased! I absolutely love everyone who has favourited or liked this piece; it is such a powerful and simple message I just want more people to hear it.
I've put out an open call for anyone who wants to redraw the sprites, in their own style or just a different pixel version than the basic game, and I'd be happy to change it or post a new one. Drawing is just out of my league, I'm a designer. The blue background is exactly one of the colors of Gyarados, on purpose: less colors for better printing. And less colors overall (blue and orange are complements so adding in a third color would throw things out of whack a bit.)
Thank you very much for the critique, and the things you said in it! To quote you, they are words to remember in the struggles of life. I'm just excited so many people can see those words and hopefully it will help them!
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Deeubnub In reply to Ommin202 [2013-04-13 21:10:47 +0000 UTC]
Lol thanks, keep up the great work!
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nuyoukai [2019-07-09 18:52:52 +0000 UTC]
I really like the message this sends out! Would it be okay if I made a print out of this myself for personal use? I didn't see an option for prints anywhere, probably due to the copyright laws you mentioned.
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kitkat1242 [2017-09-28 12:33:16 +0000 UTC]
Hey dude would it be ok if I use this to inspire my bookmark? If you agree to me selling them of course I'll send you some commission xxΒ
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Shadow-Yu [2016-06-21 21:43:52 +0000 UTC]
All I ever did was let magikarp leech exp by putting him first then switching out with other pokemon meow.
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Literri [2014-04-23 21:26:54 +0000 UTC]
I honestly find this so amazing; what a wonderful analogy
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OrpheusEx [2014-01-26 17:35:12 +0000 UTC]
This or Pokemon steroids.
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AirSharkSquad [2013-11-02 02:15:04 +0000 UTC]
I meant to say, Like Nintendo, Wii U sales don't improve if they don't struggle. Sometimes, you just got to struggle in order to improve the sales of your new console.
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AirSharkSquad [2013-11-02 02:13:10 +0000 UTC]
Like Nintendo, they can't improve if they don't struggle.
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Twitchy-Tremor [2013-11-01 03:52:26 +0000 UTC]
This is the most clever, cute and well touching thing I've seen expesualy of pokemon related that I've seen in a while. I love it and wish I had more things to express just how much but all I have is awe so that'll have to do. I hope there will be a print of this someday.
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majormana [2013-10-05 15:33:17 +0000 UTC]
So trrue. Their is always room to get better no ones perfect you can always improve and sometimes their will be struggle to improve what you are pratcing though will forever big me that gyardos is water/flying type not water/dragon type.
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Z3LO [2013-08-10 16:39:06 +0000 UTC]
better use my rare candyΒ
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PizzaNinja7 [2013-07-02 03:46:47 +0000 UTC]
This is so awesome, I love it. I just started my soul silver agian and this is my first game where I have a magikarp in my team! It barely learned tackle a few days ago. Keep fighting on, you're almost there!
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DaCuteSnowbunny [2013-06-16 10:20:56 +0000 UTC]
Lol, this is so funny. xD Everyone always looks down on the Magikarp... until it evolves. xD
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Azza9 [2013-06-12 07:25:57 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... No one ever used struggle to train a Magicarp (well i didn't). Most used ExpAll or ExpShare in later generations that or rare candy (cheated in or otherwise).
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Ommin202 In reply to Azza9 [2013-06-12 15:06:53 +0000 UTC]
I used struggle, that's why I put it there xP
8 year old me didn't know there was a better way lol
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Azza9 In reply to Ommin202 [2013-06-13 00:55:27 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but you have to admit it dilutes the message a little. (I mean you still have that "even the most useless can become strong")
Well at least ExpShare can be spun in to a great message.
Rare candies though; "Remember there is a shortcut for everything!"
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MandoJetii [2013-05-22 15:37:06 +0000 UTC]
I remember how long it took me to evolve Gyarados on PokΓ©mon World Online... He became my favorite water type afterward xD.
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Ommin202 In reply to MandoJetii [2013-05-22 16:10:25 +0000 UTC]
He's pretty dang awesome!
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SwedishX25 [2013-05-19 16:08:43 +0000 UTC]
No more shirts?! I didn't get a chance to buy one!
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shibaumino [2013-05-15 21:00:01 +0000 UTC]
This is probably my favorite you have done:3
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Feare909 [2013-04-22 19:29:54 +0000 UTC]
It's always interesting to look up the origins of some pokemon. Magikarp, for example, is based on an allegory of a common, ordinary carp who became a sea dragon after striving to jump over an area of waterfalls called the Dragon's Gate.
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vehemence-41 [2013-04-22 11:47:58 +0000 UTC]
This trully inspiring, and a little bit nerdy.
Just what I needed, thank you.
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Ommin202 In reply to vehemence-41 [2013-04-22 14:45:35 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome, I love to inspire.
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pokemoncha [2013-04-17 14:51:51 +0000 UTC]
hnnn gonna beg my parents to get me a shirt, starting... NOW!
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NocturnalFoxx [2013-04-17 12:31:33 +0000 UTC]
This one is my favorite, and so true! β₯β₯β₯
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LauraDragongirl [2013-04-15 19:31:40 +0000 UTC]
I could not believe it when my magikarp evolved - it and gyarados are so different! The life lesson is real and nice ^-^
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Ommin202 In reply to LauraDragongirl [2013-04-15 20:36:50 +0000 UTC]
Such a huge difference? I barely remember it now, years ago, but I thought I'd level up this pokemon. I assumed, if it was so hard to level it, then its evolution must be awesome... and it was!
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LauraDragongirl In reply to Ommin202 [2013-04-15 21:02:45 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, you're right. I thought "OMG, it's impossible! A fish evolves into a water dragon!" A little strange XD
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The-Dude4 [2013-04-13 20:24:33 +0000 UTC]
I love using magikarp early on and losing and then once it is evolved coming back and kicking the crap out of some trainers. I always have an oddly smug smile on my face when I do it as well....
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Ommin202 In reply to The-Dude4 [2013-04-13 22:30:10 +0000 UTC]
Come back when you're stronger and steamroll. You feel so great because you've improved!
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The-Dude4 In reply to Ommin202 [2013-04-14 01:06:18 +0000 UTC]
Exactly. I feel like a boss then.
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schattigerKeks [2013-04-13 19:13:21 +0000 UTC]
Struggled a lot with this one, so YAY for your drawing! ^__^
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Inspia [2013-04-13 17:54:47 +0000 UTC]
Struggle you say? All you had to do is switch him out @ the start of a battle XD
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