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omnivore7 — Though Heroes Fall - Part 24 of a Tale of He-Man

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Final confrontation at the fiery heart of Snake Mountain                                                                        Previous chapter: fav.me/dc5rxco


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9.9

 

 Orko was baffled; he looked again at the Sword – and shook his head.

“Now thus: now thus! I just don’t understand!”

It had led him resolutely in one direction, towing him along in its eagerness to return to the hand of its wielder. They had flown across the moonlit waters of the Southern Sea and attained the first of its islands, landing on a silver shore where palms laid shadows on the shining sands. But then, without warning, it had come to a abrupt halt and quested, searching now one way, now another, like the head of a hound at check and seeking a scent. And now it absolutely refused to move at all, but sat there dull and inert in his hand like some ordinary blade. He wondered with foreboding if this was the start of Evil-Lyn’s maleficent power – and if it had confused the Sword’s ability to seek for He-Man.

He looked at it again, and then drew it forth from its sheath and ran his hand slowly along the blade.

Orko was, of course, a Trollan, and it had been his people’s skilled smithcraft and artifice magical which had first forged the steel of this Sword, long ago when the world was younger and there was a different Enemy. And so it had affinity with him, and seemed to welcome his touch and to respond. Intent, he gazed on its beauty, almost forgetting his haste, his frustration in his awed wonder.

He lifted it – and took an experimental swing – which all-but overbalanced him. The Sword of Power: of Power. He could feel that ancient might stir beneath his hand, the latent strength forged deep within the steel. A lambent pale blue light played along its length as he stroked its silk-smooth sheen; he could feel a slight vibration thrum all through it. This blade alone could transform young Prince Adam into a hero with the formidable capabilities of He-Man, the most powerful man in the universe. Its edges tingled with an aura – he could sense it, feel it.

And if it could do that for Adam, then what could it do for him – for Orko? What great works could be accomplished with this splendid, shining steel? – purely in the cause of good, naturally. He looked hard at it, dazzled by the visions which arose to his beguiled mind. If the blade would respond to his own magic – and his own need – then he could storm into Evil-Lyn’s lair and all would flee before him as he rescued He-Man and bore him home in triumph. And why stop there? He-Man was likely to need time to recover from his ordeal – but Orko would be willing to hold onto the Sword awhile and make good use of it. Adam could be spared the need to live in two lives if the Power were wielded by another; there would be no further need for secrecy – why – it would be a positive boon to the boy! And with its great strength allied to his own magic he would be well-nigh invincible. No – he would be invincible – completely so! No longer merely the court conjurer; the object of amusement, of derision no more, but numbered mighty among the great. Even the power he had wielded of old on Trolla would be as nothing by comparison to that which would come to him through this weapon. There was a destiny lay upon it; he could sense it thrilling through his fingers, through every fibre of his body – a destiny which he was called to take up. And then his time would come: even Skeletor would be at long last overthrown as a new Eternian hero arose! Evil could be ended for all time by such a champion – Grayskull would have a new guardian, a master of the art magical as well as a mighty warrior – and all would bow their heads in wonder! It could be done; he, Orko the Wise, Orko the Strong – Orko the Magnificent – THE Orko! – could do it! Would do it! What need of He-Man at all when he – and he alone – would save Eternia! The Sword seemed to agree; its edges flamed dazzlingly bright, it grew heated in his hand as he held it aloft – and his lips framed the words he knew must be spoken.

And then he slowly lowered the blade again – and sheathed its sparkling steel with a shake of his head. No; no – that would never do. Not at all. Such a thing was not for him; he knew, deep-down, that he had not the inner strength to wield it. Nor had he altogether forgotten why he had lost his former power and been exiled to Eternia in the first place; it was an uncomfortable thought – but it was also a lesson best remembered. Besides, it was his duty: he had pledged himself to guard the boy, from that very first day in the Tar Swamps, amid the raging cosmic storm which had brought him to this world; brought him here to begin his penance, to earn back in humility that which he had forfeited through folly. He must not fall prey to such again. But, most of all it was a simple matter of loyalty, of trust – and of love. At some stage, unnoticed, duty had turned to affection – and thence to devotion – and that outweighed all else. For this was He-Man’s sword – Adam’s sword – and it must go back to him, his friend, who trusted him. And who was in dire trouble and needed him to come to the rescue. And that was all there was to it. And – goodness – he was here to do just that – not to daydream! Whatever had got into him that he was wasting precious time like this – –?

And suddenly the Sword twitched in his grasp – and its sheathed tip arose and quivered – pointing – pointing back to the north! 

Orko, all lure of temptation at once forgotten, looked hard, then gave it a shake. It did not respond, so he shook it again, harder – but the blade remained resolutely indicating northward – the direction whence they had come.

“Oh, you silly piece of ironmongery! Make your mind up, won’t you?”

But the Sword plainly had made up its mind – and began to pull; began to pull so hard that he could barely retain his grip on the haft.

“But that can’t be right – can it? Is this yet another attempt to thwart this quest? And after I’ve been so long on my way, too?  North?  No – how can it be back that way? Unless – well – unless they are moving him again – or else they gone and – Oh, but no – they wouldn’t – would they? Please don’t let it be that! Not Adam – But, no – no; the Sorceress said he was still alive – and he is; he is alive! I can almost feel his presence now. And you can, too, can’t you?”

The Sword did not answer; or maybe it did, for it continued to quest, to pull with renewed urgency.

“Oh, very well, then! Back northward we go. But we aren’t going to travel all that distance like this; no we aren’t! Now you just bide there patient a moment while I recall the exact words to that spell –”

But it wasn’t going to be patient, either. Within moments Orko was streaming along behind its eager pull, desperately trying to hold his hat in place. It towed him up through the air at terrifying speed, levelling out at high altitude and hurtling onward to its appointed end; to the hand of the man who was its wielder.

 

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9.10

 

Man-at-Arms viewed their objective through the lenses once more and nodded his thanks to Mekanek for his careful forward reconnaissance. He then turned back to his fellows, the Heroic Warriors and the officers from among all the men of Eternos who had elected to come with him on this mission. The thin wind blew darkly across the Perpetual Plain, but threads of molten light gleamed baleful ahead where the carven head of the snake poured forth the spew of the mountain onto the broken land below. The silent, watchful faces ringed him about – and not a word was spoken, but there were a few quiet smiles.

He drew a deep breath. “Well – here we are; before Snake Mountain – and far from our homes. You all know why we are here – and what we must do. Soon we shall go in there and execute our plan as best we may. It will not be easy; they are sure to know that we are coming and they will be ready and waiting for us. So I shall not attempt to hide from any of you my doubts as to how heavy our losses are likely to be; they are many to our few and Skeletor and his henchmen will be there in force to lead his legions – we shall face both swords and sorcery. But I know that there is not a man here who is not a volunteer for this venture – and I know that none of you will hang back in the coming fight. There are only brave men here. And it is in a bid to rescue another such that we have come. I mean to have He-Man safe away from this place and out of Skeletor’s clutches. You all know why he is held captive – and of the willing self-sacrifice that he made.” His eyes roved the circle of intent faces. “Nor was it the first time that he has done so. I am proud to be bringing aid to him at last – as I am proud to lead you and your men. Whatever befall in this coming battle, let no man forget that pride – nor yet that this day we fight for the right, for He-Man – and for Eternia!”

“For Eternia,” they echoed, fists raised in salute. “For Eternia and for He-Man!”

“Then, one final time –”

“What – another final time, ’Arms?” queried Fisto with a grin; Duncan smiled wryly in response and nodded.

“Just to make sure that we’ve all understood the plan, brother – even you. So; Stratos and his fliers are already lying concealed on the upper slopes, awaiting their chance to strike; that goes also for Buzz-Off and his people. They will make their entry as we approach. Of course, we can’t be sure where He-Man is being held – but my guess is that Skeletor will not have him down in a cell; more likely he’ll be on open show for our benefit. Keep your heads, though, whatever you see in there; they will be trying to provoke us into rash and hasty action and we must not fall prey to such a ploy. Our winged allies can use their greater speed and mobility to better effect than we – but they will have need of covering fire.”

“And they’ll get it, too,” nodded Captain Rios, whose nickname was ‘Blast’.

“Now, don’t let your men waste their power charges in shooting at Skeletor himself; save it for more vulnerable targets. More than that I cannot plan; we shall have to adapt according to what we find – but keep together as best you can – and keep your eyes and ears wide open.” He turned to the youngest man present. “You, Lieutenant Andros, will take a squad of your guardsmen and infiltrate the dungeons; as I say, I doubt you’ll find He-Man there – but it’s just possible. And – Andros – it is also very possible that Prince Adam is in there somewhere, so keep an eye out for him too.”

“Yessir!” answered the tall young officer solemnly; and then his face split into a wide grin. “I’ll very gladly find the Prince; I just really hope that he isn’t still carrying that stunner –”

“Be off with you – and good luck!” He shook his head, concealing a smile somewhere within his moustache. And then he turned to the rest. “Well; to your places, gentlemen – and very best of good fortune to you all!”

When they were all gone to ready their men, Duncan turned at last to his daughter. She stood hands on hips and gave her head a brisk shake, sending her hair-tail flying. Her impatient foot stirred the ash of the plain.

“Every man a volunteer, huh? Only brave men here? Every man knowing what he fights for –” And then suddenly she smiled, a touch crookedly. “I take it you mean women too, then?”

Duncan gave her a preoccupied, affectionate look. “Yes; I think that you can take it that I do. Girls, anyway. And one in particular.”

“Good. Because He-Man is in there – and Adam too, just as my vision showed me.”

“You can tell – even from here?”

“Yes; I can. They’re there. I’m absolutely sure of it. And so we – all of us – will go in and get them out. Both of them!”

“Elders willing we shall, child; Elders willing we shall. But, for all that, mind that you keep close to me and to your uncle when the battle begins – and that you pick no fights with the enemy’s warriors. Do I have your word on that?”

She gave him a mutinous green glare, opened her mouth – and then shut it again and reluctantly nodded in obedience. It wasn’t the season for arguments. That time was past.

“Very well.” Duncan drew a deep breath and nodded. “Then let us be moving; it is time.”

 

 

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9.11

 

 

“Be welcome, He-Man, to Snake Mountain! Be welcome indeed! Not your first visit, I know – but most certainly your last.” Skeletor bowed low with an ironic, taunting flourish of triumph; his robes fell about him flame-tinged in the firelight – but still as black as night.

From his adversary, brought now before him, came no flicker of reaction. Weary he looked and soiled and shaken – but at least the dim light in his eyes was his own again and no longer in thralldom to sorcery and lust. The shackles he had worn so long – and so briefly been without – again hung heavy from his limbs; though not, perhaps, as heavy as the abject air of defeat and of shame.

They stood in a high place, visible to all eyes from the floor of the great cavern far below, lit by the lurid glow of the flame that rose always through the cone of the hollow mountain. There the topmost tier, narrowest of all those many galleries and buttresses, hung as a flying bridge of stone carved from the very rock of the mountain itself; high it spanned the gorge of the open mouth of the stylized snake’s head which lent that ill-omened place its name. Lava ran across it, beneath it; molten magma streams rising from deep below ground were cunningly channelled to issue from the mouth of the serpent, pouring forth between great fangs of stone, falling in fire far to the burning plain below. And against this dramatic backdrop they stood, limned as if in a living blaze of flame: and every eye was upon them.

The Lord of Chaos had, as ever, set his stage, his scene, with a fine attention to detail.

Now he gave an imperious gesture – and the guards who flanked the chained captive at once laid fleshless hands upon him and sent him sprawling to the stones at Skeletor’s feet. Slowly, wearily, he began to rise – but was forced back down to his knees and there held.

And the Dark One raised wide his black-gowned arms before the assembled forces massed beneath.

“Behold!” he cried. “The Champion of Grayskull – my prisoner!”

And they too cried out in triumph to see their dark master parade his trophy in such ceremonious pomp: the feared arch-antagonist, the young hero who had so often thwarted their rise, now humbled and led near naked, kneeling, a powerless captive in chains. Their roar rang all through the mountain – an elemental and savage yawp of triumph – and the blond head fell before it.

And Skeletor, staff held in hand, gave a grotesque and courtly bow in acknowledgement – and again all that hollow mountain rang with the cheers of the hosts of darkness. The brandishing of firelit weaponry below was like the shift of a turbulent tide as they gloried in He-Man’s humiliation – and the echoes washed about the walls of that vast space, returning sweet to the Dark One’s ears.

“Our time of waiting is done!” he cried now aloud. “Long it has been – far, far too long – but now it is over! The last impediment to my mastery over all things kneels broken at my feet. The Dark is rising: soon now, my subjects – soon!”

And he turned again to his captive, his greatest rival in all Eternia brought low at last before him; and he revelled in his victory.

“Ah, but you disappoint me sorely, He-Man. What – no spark of life, no surge of pointless pride? I had thought that you would give me fine and fierce defiance.” He leaned low and brought his nightmare face close to that of his prisoner. “I expected that you would threaten me, promise my overthrow – show me your high mettle and your proud scorn.” His thin and taloned hand reached out and tilted the other’s chin upward to look close into his face. The blue eyes looked back at him dully, without expression. “But I see that you no longer have the spirit for it – that, at long last, you have finally come to recognize the futility of resisting my indomitable will. And so we reach endgame. For this was always going to be the outcome of our struggle: you, here, kneeling before my unmatched majesty – bound in chains, broken in spirit – utterly defeated. Your doom was as inevitable as the passage of time, your failure as inescapable as the fall of night itself. Oh, you had some strength, some skill, that I grant you – but not the will to use them, to wield great might in the only way it can ever be effective: ruthlessly and altogether without pity. You were ever too feeble a vessel to contain so prodigious a power; a warrior bearing a blade which you had not the hardihood to use. A sword – even one such as yours – is only as strong as the will of its wielder: and you were weak. Your absurd refusal to shed blood has ever been your bane. And that is why you are here; helpless, humbled – and at my mercy.” He released the captive’s head and shook his own, as if afflicted with the touch of human sorrow at such tragic frailty.

 But He-Man did not react at all; he seemed almost listless and yawned in the sullen light of the fires.

“None can aid you now; you are past all hope. For where is your Sorceress? Where is she? She has disowned and abandoned you – and even if she had not, she would be as powerless as her champion. As for Evil-Lyn, loyalty lies not in her; she too has deserted you; you are alone. And so where now is your defiance; where now your strength, your proud spirit? Gone, gone – all are gone.”

A misshapen hand reached out and, with an oddly tender gesture, smoothed its way slowly across the width of the broad, bowed shoulders.

“And was this truly the best your fabled ‘Elders’ could do? Was it? How could they possibly deem one such as you worthy of the Power? And how lamentably ill a choice that has proved. A rash, stubborn boy without the will to use the strength they had conferred on him, without the wit to see the futility of opposing my might – and now reduced to this: stripped, shamed – chained? Why, your very presence here today in all your defeated humiliation is living proof that their supposed reputation for great wisdom is utterly unfounded. Or is it not, rather, that they do not even exist?  That these supposed ‘Elders’ are but pretty tales; that you have followed naught but vain imaginings – and that your willing, deluded service has brought you but to this?”

The touch of the taloned hand upon his head was gentle, consoling – but the kneeling captive tensed as the fingers twined into the locks of his hair and there lingered; and a shiver ran through his skin.

“So summon the Power to save you,” said Skeletor softly. “Call upon it; have it come down and deliver you, set you free, scatter your enemies as it has so oft-times before. Surely Grayskull will not desert its champion? Call upon it, therefore – and be avenged.” The insinuating voice paused as if in anticipation; he lifted an expectant hand – and then came a chuckle of cold malice. “But you cannot, can you? You dare not. And why?” He leaned his cowled head close and whispered into his captive’s ear. “Because you know that it will not come! Because you have forfeited all right to its succour; because you have betrayed it by your weakness and your unbridled lust – and are no longer fit to be its champion!” His voice was sibilant, penetrating and a spasm shook the passive young face as the prisoner acknowledged perforce the goading words. “A hero so upright of purpose, so noble of spirit – so pure of heart! And now – so shamefully sullied – –” The Dark One shook his cowled head. “What a fall was here: I trow Eternia’s annals can show forth none to match it – no; nor plumb such degrading depths of ignominy –”

A tear leaked and ran from one blue eye – and then another – and another. And in their fall they wet the chains which bound his wrists, and which were the emblem of his loss.

But Skeletor’s spite was still far from sated. He gave a curt gesture to the guards, who hauled He-Man to his feet and retired, leaving him alone on the arch with his captor.

Slowly Skeletor circled, as does a shark of the seas its hapless prey.

“Such high, high young hopes: such noble aspirations – and now so sadly shattered. All your ardour turned to ash, your lofty purpose plunged into the depths of disaster. And you are, as yet, barely aware of the true magnitude of your failure, of the burden of guilt you must bear. Come, then: come – and let me enlighten you.”

His clawed hand grasped He-Man’s unresisting shoulder and turned him to look out over the multitude assembled in the great cavern – and whose tight-packed ranks obscured the flooring far below. Sable legions of skeleton warriors, great phalanxes of armed slaves, the levies of the Dark Hemisphere mustered up at their master’s command – even the hirelings and misbegotten spawn of evil who had chosen to serve Skeletor – all these lifted grinning faces to see their vanquished foe.

“Behold now my armies, the unmatched muster of my might! Look upon them and know the full bitterness of defeat; look upon them and know despair! Past ready counting they are – and these numbers here assembled make up but a tithe of my powers! Soon now they will conjoin, forming up into one huge and unstoppable host: a host which I shall send against Eternos. And even you, naïve young fool, know enough to be aware that my true strength lies not in armies nor yet in weapons of war, but in the terror which my arts can inspire in even the most stalwart defender. Few will have the hardihood to stand against me when my sendings come among them – and I have other allies too – oh yes! – other allies – whose capacity to instill panic and fear as far surpass my own arts as I surpass you! Men will fall upon their faces and crawl like beasts in blind terror at their coming: any who dare to stand will be cut down. The forces of my foes shall wither, shall melt like snow under dragon-fire with dread at the onset: all resistance will be in vain, and swiftly brought to a most bloody end. My armies will lay waste the land for leagues on every side leaving naught but bodies and the stench of flame. Opposition will bring obliteration. Valley and hillside shall be the roofless resting place of bones piled bleached beneath the bitter moons. Strong places shall be brought low, towers shall tumble in ruin: nowhere will there be refuge, nor yet shall any defence avail. The folk of every realm shall be but flesh to feed scavengers – and their sundered souls shall sustain the Terrible Ones who hunger ever for more. And though the carrion creatures be glutted, the black-winged starrogs sated, still the march will go on: hosts shall perish; city upon city will be stormed and razed. And I shall make of them a desolation – yea, even the very soil on which they stood shall be salted and lie forever barren; their names shall be forgotten, nor shall any remember that once they stood. Last of them all, Eternos, beset, shall fall and be put to the sack, and its peoples – those who survive – shall be my slaves, dwelling in a land of lamentation.  As for the usurper Randor and all his kin, they shall see their city burn, their subjects slaughtered, before I make of them a condign example of what befalls those who dare to defy the Darkness! Their end will be memorable and – being enacted before all eyes – will cow utterly those lesser realms whose absurd independence Randor has not found the backbone to curtail. I, however, shall not repeat his error. My own appointees shall govern them in my name and the former ruling houses of every vassal state shall be my prisoners, held hostage for the continued loyalty – and tribute – of their folk. The least, most futile hint of resistance will earn an unforgettable retribution; after all, my allies from afar will have need of food – –”

He paused, and the shrouded head cocked to one side, considering.

“What – yet more tears? And for whom, pray, are they shed? For yourself, destitute of hope – or for those whom you have betrayed and doomed by your manifest failings? Well; ’tis all one – and you will cry me an ocean before I am done. But hearken now – I have one last thing to relate! Once I have gathered beneath my sway all the realms and peoples of Eternia, then I shall deem the time meet – and shall move at last against Grayskull. My allies – grown yet stronger by gorging the souls of the slain – I shall unleash upon the place and its lorn defender. But as for my Lady, why, she shall be kept alive to be sport for me once the castle falls; there are matters we shall need to discuss; she will have much to tell me. And then my time will have come: I shall at long last walk in through the broken gateway where never yet foe trod – and take possession. All will then be mine: Eternos, all Eternia, Grayskull – and – yes – all that it holds! Its secrets shall be stripped away, all it contains be laid open to me. The Power will be mine at last. And that will be but the beginning; for what is one castle, one small realm, one world to set against the Universe entire –? I shall offer up a glory of destruction to the Darkness and it will reward me, will grant me dominion over all things: over all creation, all life – even over the Light itself: and when the last of the stars is put out, its rule will be illimitable – eternal – ever without end – –”

His voice had fallen away almost to an awed whisper – and now he turned again to his captive and leaned close to speak.

“All this shall be: all – even as I have spoken – even as the tongue of prophecy foretold. And you – swordless, helpless – broken – can do naught to prevent it; naught at all. Your failure is absolute –”

He paused to allow the dread import of his words to penetrate.

“And final.”

The broad shoulders shook; the blond head bowed beneath the crushing weight of its burden – and tears ran like raindrops as the lipless mouth murmured in its ear.

“So tell me, He-Man: who now has the Power – –?”

Satisfied at last to see such inconsolable grief, Skeletor stepped back and leaned upon his staff.

“Well; having lost all purpose in your life, no doubt you are eager to know what form my vengeance will take: it is time for you to learn your fate. For I have long awaited, long planned this day, He-Man: the day when you were brought bound before me, to do with as I will.” Again he paused for effect; the quiet all about was eerie; flame alone moved, flickering restlessly over the silent stones as the Dark One delivered his verdict.

“I had, after much careful deliberation, selected the means of your end as having you clamped down on the Enervator, that I might enjoy to the full your desperate – but increasingly feeble – struggles as it slowly, steadily drained away your power. Spread upon its slab you would die gradually, but in unspeakable torment, as your very life-force was leeched from you drop by agonized drop. Your youth, your strength – your soul itself – would be sucked from you leaving naught but pain. Hour after hour it would last, your screams growing hoarse and turning at last to sobs as you weakened, sliding slowly – so slowly – yet inexorably into the iron grip of death. And all the long and anguished while you would suffer the added torture of knowing that your power, your strength would come to me – and that Grayskull – and all Eternia – would soon be mine.” His claw-like hand reached out and battened itself firmly on the captive’s unresisting brow and held there, as if reading something by feel. “But now, alas, it is as I suspected: Evil-Lyn has done her work all too well. You are already far too weakened to withstand the Enervator and I fear that it would be over with you much, much too soon to provide me adequate amusement. And what little power you have left is barely worth the draining.” He withdrew the taloned hand and shook his grinning head within its cowl. “A pity, of course: I had promised it to myself as a reward for my great and abiding patience. But the Power of Grayskull will soon be mine in any case – and be assured that I am not without all manner of intriguing alternatives by which I may be rid of you at last. And still, as you long for death, you will have the bitter knowledge that, with you gone, I shall sweep all opposition aside.  ALL!

He turned and languidly acknowledged the adulation of his assembled forces filling the surrounding galleries and the wide cavern floor far below.

“But my pleasure – and your pain – must wait a little longer. For first we have a pressing matter to attend to; one we wait upon even as I speak. After all, what need have we to stir hence when our enemies will so obligingly come to us? Yes, He-Man; your friends are on their way here to rescue you – as they so touchingly think. But we know better, you and I, do we not? Their misguided loyalty is futile, their pitiful valour without hope: they will fail – even as you have failed them. And their annihilation will be on your head – along with so much else. And so I shall set you where you may best watch their overthrow – and my victory!”

His prisoner said no word – unless the almost apathetic look on his face, in his lustreless eyes, were answer enough.

“And when it is done, I shall not slay you, no – though you will beg for me to do so time and again before it is o’er. Yet, even though I shall indeed bring you to bale, I will not take your life. But I shall change you; little by little, in both body and mind; here an alteration, there an adjustment until I am satisfied with my new – creation. Yes, He-Man; you will indeed be changed, without and within. But rest assured that you will be left with mind enough to know what you have become, and why all shun you and avert their eyes – and why the children scream. And then: why, then – I shall let you go!”

He savoured deep of his triumph, the way in which his enemy hung his head, the bowed shoulders, the aura of utter defeat and of shame. And he was barely even begun with his long-denied vengeance on this man, the only mortal on Eternia who could challenge him.

Tri-Klops now came hastening along the narrowness of the flying buttress and bowed low. “My lord, they come!”

“Excellent! And is all made ready? Our defences prepared, our array drawn-up? Very well, then; give out my order: let it be so. All but for one last delightful detail.” He summoned Trap Jaw and Beastman forward and gestured to his silent prisoner. “He must not miss this: indeed he must have the best view of all; and they, of course, should surely see their shame-stained champion in all his vanquished helplessness.”

He swept wide his arm and pointed aloft with his staff. “Put him up!”

 

 

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Comments: 217

amtboyce [2019-10-17 01:40:56 +0000 UTC]

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omnivore7 In reply to amtboyce [2019-10-17 02:24:18 +0000 UTC]

And it only gets worse for He-Man.....

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ndrsll [2019-03-12 05:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Great work! I was eager for Skeletor use the Machine with the needles on He-man torso, just for evil amusement. I hope there are more punishments and torture to He-man!

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omnivore7 In reply to ndrsll [2019-03-25 01:47:33 +0000 UTC]

He is Skeletor's helpless captive and plunged into abject despair at his failure.  And Skeletor gloats over him - and plans his vengeance......


He-Man : Despair

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thaneangbor In reply to ndrsll [2019-03-12 22:54:54 +0000 UTC]

You mean the Machine that Lyn tortured He-Man on at length earlier in the story?


Or the one that Skeletor was talking about just now, the Enervator?

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ndrsll In reply to thaneangbor [2019-03-14 04:48:20 +0000 UTC]

I was expecting for Skeletor use the Machine Lyn had He-man tortured with. There he-man was, eagle-spreaded, ready to withstand torture. Anyway, Skeletor ordered their subdits to carry the Machine to Serpent Mountain, isnt it? I just love needles! Or Skeletor could use the new Enervator! It's your story and it's outstandingly written.  I expect a great next installment as usual! Thanks in advance!

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thaneangbor In reply to ndrsll [2019-03-15 19:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Skeletor has something even worse than the Machine in mind...?   He's got him captive now and can do whatever he likes to him.

The scenes where Lyn tortured He-Man on the Machine, stretched him and jolted him with shocks AND used the vibro-needles on him were so hot (I like needles too!)

I'm looking forward to him posting a new part too.  It's going to be soon, so he says. I can't wait!

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ndrsll In reply to thaneangbor [2019-03-22 05:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Im sure Skeletor has something worse for He-man: All his friends to see him defeated and I think He-man will surrender to Skeletor in front of everyone. Ultimate humilliation! However I´ll love to see his arch-enemy put our hero into The Machine AND The Enervator for the pleasure of its readers! 

Oh, and the needles too! Our favorites! 

Looking forward for the next chapter!

Regards,

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thaneangbor In reply to ndrsll [2019-07-08 23:11:31 +0000 UTC]

So did you see what Skeletor did to torture He-Man......?


Though Heroes Fall - Part 25 of a Tale of He-Man

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-02-17 17:44:26 +0000 UTC]

As always, amazing work. A long awaited chapter, to say the least, where everything is beginning to come together. All the illustrations to accompany it are very fitting of the situation.


First off, I am very glad to finally hear Orko's backstory! I love what you've done with him; you've added so much depth to his character, and it is very befitting of the story. Imagine, Orko atoning for passed sins; becoming guardian of Adam, with limited power. It all makes sense now -- Orko's place in the story, as well as all of his actions and words thus far. It's a wonderful touch to bring the Trollans into the mythos; to set them as those who forged the Sword of Power (back when there was another Evil! Hmm! Very interesting...). It does well to give Orko an affinity with the sacred blade, and the scene of temptation was well placed.

I must admit that the scene very much reminded me of that scene in The Return of the King, when Samwise was tempted to keep the ring, and "rid the world of evil"... Even the dialogue was reminiscent of it, and it was very well placed into the story. I am highly impressed with the whole scene; and I wouldn't feel it ill spoken to admit that it is probably my favorite sequence in the story, thus far.

Poor Orko, though! He finally made it to the island, only to have He-Man dragged off to Snake Mountain! He's not aware yet that he'll have to make another trip, and one far more dangerous then it started as.


Eternos is also on the move. They begin their assault on Snake Mountain, for better or for worse. I reckon they'll make a good decoy for Orko when he arrives (and perhaps Lyn, if indeed she still has a place in the story!).

I always enjoy seeing Duncan and Fisto together; your rendition of them is my favorite.

Teela too, is apart of the assault -- though I'm sure she's not quite prepared for what she's to find. Her will is strong, and her desire and love for the hero (both champion of Grayskull and prince of Eternos) pushes her on; I reckon her role in the upcoming battle is a bigger one then even she knows.


Last but not least; this Skeletor is truly terrifying. Nothing comical or charming about him. He's wicked through and through, and his tormenting of the poor broken hero is far too much to bear... He-man did not utter one word this whole chapter. His shame is far too great, and he has no more strength or will to fight. How can he? He has betrayed Grayskull, or nearly so at any rate. Skeletor rubs this in very cruelly, and his intentions towards the hero are none too comforting. The dark lord won't even kill the hero! He will just leave him to an ultimate humiliation, to an unbearable shame -- and what a terribly sad notion to consider! I can't help but feel heartbroken at this moment. Truly, there is no going back for He-man; or Adam for that matter. Still, the tale of this story is not "The Fall of a Hero". It is "Though Heroes Fall" -- insinuating a 'however'. Though heroes fall -- yet the second half has yet to be revealed. There is hope yet in the story. There is Orko, and Teela, and perhaps Lyn... And despite He-Man's fall, he has not yet been abandoned. There is more for him to fulfill.

Skeletor's overall plan was even more terrifying then his mocking of the hero, though. He vainly believes that he will receive a reward for his wickedness; that he will rule over all (even the Light!) and escape the ultimate judgment. His masters are not so generous. They are not so loyal. They will turn on him in the end, and he will find no mercy. Though he mocks Grayskull and the Elders, and the forces of good -- he will never prevail against them. Though he tears the hero down, lashes out at the boy's faith (or currently lack thereof. But not so much a lack, as an extreme guilt which prevents him from finding himself worthy of grace), it is to little avail. His dark dreams and desires will be the end of him, and victory will never be his. He lacks any form of understanding; his delusions are strong and he is blind to the truth. The Light will in the end prevail; and Skeletor himself is merely a pawn in the hand of providence, tempering the hero for some greater destiny.

He-Man must not rely upon himself, nor think too highly of his strength. What he has, he has been given, and not for his own purposes. This whole ordeal will lend to humbling him. He has been utterly broken, has all but lost his pride... He sees himself for what he really is now, and recoils at the knowledge that he is as other men... Yet this will all be for the best once he's again found the source of his strength, and finding the grace to proceed, no longer vainly assume that he is invincible. His faith will become stronger then ever, and through weakness he will find true power. It will not be easy, nor will it all happen at once. It will be a gradual thing, a long time in the making. He is being tested, tried in the flames, tempered by the trials and ultimately forged into a tool which will fulfill the duty set aside for it. When that time comes, there will be no more inward struggle; for though heroes fall, and break, and learn that they themselves are nothing more then men -- they will arise once more, stronger and more worthy of their power, with new understanding and new purpose; and in the end the wicked shall not prevail.


Interesting that Skeletor call Randor an usurper. I suppose he could see it that way, though of course, his perception isn't all that clear. Ironic that he's essentially telling that to Adam. If the boy was in his right state of mind, he might take the phrase into heart. If only he knew the Lord of Destruction was his uncle! What would he think then? (at the moment, probably that he wasn't any more righteous then him!)


Thought provoking, and well written, as always. A thoroughly enjoyable read, and I await the next chapter with a nervous anticipation. I do not like to see He-Man befalling such depths of humiliation. It is painful, but I morbidly look forward to seeing what happens next...

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rideatiger In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-03-11 17:16:55 +0000 UTC]

So it is true; you are back!  I am very pleased to see that.  You have been missed here on DevArt.  I hope that all is well with you?

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to rideatiger [2019-03-12 14:43:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes, all is well. I just needed a break for awhile, to focus on other things. Having an active account means the temptation to waste a whole lot of time on it! That said, I wanted to be able to properly comment on THF, and get in contact with a few of you again, so I started a new account. I'm just trying to make sure I pace myself more, and don't fall back to the habit of wasting an excess amount of time.

I hope that you are well, too!

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rideatiger In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-04-16 23:04:33 +0000 UTC]

Well, I suppose it all depends on one's definition of 'to waste'...!   But I do know what you mean.  I tend to be more active here on DA during breaks from my teaching duties, which never seem to get any lighter!   All the same, I do regard a modicum of time spent interacting with like-minded people is refreshing, and the group that has somehow coalesced around THF is a very nice and engaging one.


But, yes, I do understand.  I am just glad that we did not lose you permanently. 


All is well with me, I thank you.  Exam preparation for two of the three years groups that I teach makes matters a little easier from now on. I will spend more time with the graduate students, who are an interesting group, between now and June/July.  And then another year will have gone by! 


I hope that all is well with you also?

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to rideatiger [2019-04-26 11:56:03 +0000 UTC]

"To Waste": when I am on the site so long that I don't get anything productive done (eg, during days when there isn't much going on). When the intent is to 'check the messages real quickly', and then I look at the clock and find that it has been several hours since I did so, and am still lurking about the site without any purpose.


It helps to have rebooted my account; less temptation to do so! That way I can enjoy the brief times I do spend, and utilize it to responding to messages rather then less productive means...


That is good that your exam preparations (I imagine that it is a time consuming (though rewarding) job); I hope that it continues to go well for the rest of the school year.


Yes - all is well with me. God has finally placed me into a church, and it is good to finally attend and interact with fellow believers. Spring weather is always heartening after a cold winter, especially seeing all the plants spring up, and hearing the birds sing their joyful tunes.

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-02-24 03:00:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh - and I thought that you might like to be shown these, which are both well worth watching in their own right. 


Some people had asked what the inspirations behind this very black and bitter-witted Skeletor were.   There were many, of course, but two stand out in particular - as detailed below:


This:    www.youtube.com/watch?v=cDxnXg…                           


And the final five minutes of this - from 1.30 onwards:  www.youtube.com/watch?v=kyGVNX…                          

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-02-25 15:53:51 +0000 UTC]

Very worth watching. I appreciate it.


The Richard III speech is very befitting of Skeletor. The vengeful bitterness... The self-righteous belief that he has been wronged somehow, that notion the crown is rightfully his... There's a sinister quality almost frightening... Very much the mind of the Lord of Destruction.

(and that actor giving the speech actually suits Keldor very well; the voice would be perfect for him)


As for Ivan the Terrible.... I'm not sure I've ever actually met/talked with another person who has watched it. I've watched it many times and it is one of my very favorites. I am excited to find that you have seen it! I understand where you draw inspiration from it, and that scene from 1.30 onwards is one of the best in the film (that image of him standing at the window! It brings me chills every time).


(These of course, make your Skeletor far more intriguing. Thank you for sharing!)

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-02-26 21:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Sir Laurence Olivier's Richard III film of 1955 is a masterpiece; it can be found - brilliantly remastered - on many subscription channels, or picked up as a DVD for a few dollars, and it is SUPERB!  it is like entering a mediaeval book of hours or pageant roll brought to life.  He was as great an actor of Shakespeare as any that have ever been - and far, far better than most.  And his 'murd'rous Machiavel' was one of his own favourites.  It sends chills down my spine to see such evil a work - it is truly compelling to watch.  And it shows the subtle wiles and seductive qualities of evil too.    And WHAT a voice!


Oh, I've loved that film for years - and Aleksandr Nevsky too - but Ivan especially with its dark vein and plotting and shifting, spying eyes and shadows and low doorways and ill-lit mediaeval monastery-palaces.  As for his scheming aunt and her corrupt bishops.....   Eisenstein was a true cinematographic genius.    I'm so glad that you also like it - and can see exactly why I thought of Skeletor at once. 


And, since you asked:   www.youtube.com/watch?v=AnhBAT…                        

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-03-01 02:41:13 +0000 UTC]

I will have to search out a copy and watch it then. You peaked my interest with the clip, and I have not actually read/watched that particular Shakespeare work.


Aleksandr Nevsky is wonderful; as are many of Eisenstein's other films.

Yes, I love it too for all those aspects you have mentioned, and others besides. The score is amazing, and synced so well with the scenes. When Ivan's Aunt sings that song about hunting the beaver! There's something so chilling about it... Or perhaps the sequence where Ivan is mourning the death of his Queen, and the bishop is reading from the psalms -- intent on causing Ivan to falter and give in! Or the sudden use of red film, when the rest of it is in black and white... The architecture -- the imagery. The drawn out sequences of facial expressions and movements... His shadow creeping upon the wall, larger then the world... I could go on of course, but what good would that serve? To say the least, I love the film, and never tire of it.


That clip is perfect. I recognize every scene he used, and hearing that dialogue matched to it; very well done! I'm impressed. (Thanks, again, for sharing)

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-03-02 02:24:15 +0000 UTC]

I cannot praise it enough - I am SURE that it will appeal.  Richard III was a short-lived king who - even by the violent standards of the C15th - stands out as a monster of evil depravity; Shakespeare must have had a LOT of fun writing the part, and Olivier's acclaimed stage play was turned into a film in 1955 - well before we were born - and so we can see it again and again and wonder at the skill underlying every aspect of it.   I cannot help put feel that the playwright himself would have been thrilled to watch it......


I have seen several of Einsenstein's canon (I like classic Russian cinema for several reasons - none of them political) and I admire the subversive and courageous slant of his opus as well as the sheer cinematic skill they evince.  Clearly Stalin failed to draw the obvious parallel - which is just as well!   But, yes, the scheming aunt driven mad by the assassination of her son, which she unwittingly arranged, and singing a cracked nursery rhyme to his corpse.....  And I agree about the duplicitous Bishop of Novgorod and his intent to use the Tsar's grief for Anastasia as a weapon to bring him down.   I too have watched it over and over - and will do so again and again. 


Yes - wasn't that amusing?   Skeletor as Olivier's Richard III on the morn of Bosworth Fight - and Trapjaw as Sir William Catesby!   The voice is just perfect!   Wait until you see the scene as staged in the 1955 film.....

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-03-03 15:06:17 +0000 UTC]

It is good that they captured it on film, then. It's nice to see things that were made before our time, and be able to enjoy them as if they were new. Let alone watch them again and again.


I like Russian cinema as well. Have you watched any of Andrei Tarkovsky's works? A different generation then Eisenstein (he was obviously inspired by the former, though he denied it in his interviews), but his films were also phenomenal.

It is a terrible shame that Stalin never allowed Ivan 3 to be made... A terrible shame...


It really was; very well synced! At least with it we get a glimpse of the Skeletor we discus -- even if it's never visually portrayed as it should be. (It's hard to have any hope that any new versions of He-Man (if/when they decide to make it/them) will really do it justice... It's a different world now, and the themes they are pushing are not always best...)

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-03-04 01:56:46 +0000 UTC]

Just so; without the film it would be lost to all but memory - and even that for not much longer.  But now we have it available - and it has even been recently remastered from original footage and looks better than ever.  Do try and see it: you won't be disappointed.


Oh yes, Tarkovsky too - not least Andrey Rublev - and the harrowing Ivan's Childhood.

I think everything that Stalin ever did - including breathe - is a shame.


Cleverly done, yes, and the voice is perfect!  Did you know that Langella quoted a line from Richard III in the 1987 film?  His performance has hints of Olivier too, I feel.


I fear so; I rather dread what today's Hollywood will do to He-Man in the upcoming remake; a beard, tattoos, pants and a propensity to kill off his enemies in droves seem altogether too horribly likely.  Heroes are not allowed to be heroes any more, it seems - maybe because it would embarrass the modern world into feeling a well-merited degree of shame........

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-03-07 03:24:10 +0000 UTC]

I am glad that it was preserved. I will find and watch it.


 Andrey Rublev and Ivan's Childhood are both amazing films. Have you seen Sacrifice? Or Stalker?


That makes sense. Though I wasn't aware that the line was directly from Shakespeare, I immediately felt he captured the feeling/mood of it.


It will not be a pretty sight, that's for sure... They will ruin He-Man's moral character (as you say), with a lot of unnecessary violence and cringe-worthy humor. I don't even dare to imagine a CGI Orko...

No more heroes; that's for sure. All anti-heroes or flat out villains. I hear so many people mocking the traditional hero, pulling the "that's cliche" card... No matter how people try to frame it though, the traditional hero will always be best.

That's why Superman trumps Batman every time.

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-04-05 00:08:41 +0000 UTC]

I saw this - and knew at once that you would understand its true (and timely) significance:


Death Could Not Hold Him

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-04-10 13:11:32 +0000 UTC]

A lovely drawing; and the significance is not lost on me. The truth of the gospel is so amazing that it blows me away; death could not hold the Lord Jesus, and there is nothing more wonderful then that -- nothing more wonderful then knowing that He is alive even now, standing on the right hand of God; and that my sins (many and vile) are paid for in full by His work -- by no work of mine, lest i should boast.


Thank you for the thought. This picture reminds me specially of Colossians 2:6-15. Particularly verse fifteen, which only holds marvelous significance after reading the verses preceding it (open up your Bible and read them!); declaring all the power and glory of Christ:

    15 - And having spoiled principalities and powers, he made a shew of them openly, triumphing over then in it.


God is amazing. There is nothing so wonderful as the things which He has done, and even still does. The same yesterday, today, and for ever. Even as the hosts of heaven sing his praises: "Thou art worthy, O Lord, to receive glory and honour and power: for thou hast created all things, and for they pleasure they are and were created." (Revelations 4:11); so it is. Only He is worthy of glory, honour and power; only He is worthy of praise. (amen)

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-04-12 01:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Yes, isn't it so?   And the lion is, I think, a very appropriate image and metaphor for the Risen One.   An echo of CS Lewis' allegory too, which I am sure is not unintentional.   But, then, whatever the medium employed, the sheer wonder of the message it conveys remains the same. 


I have always liked the joyful Easter greeting of the Eastern Orthodox churches and the response it evokes.  I think it particularly poignant and powerful.  And soon that special time will be on us once again.

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-04-19 14:57:26 +0000 UTC]

www.deviantart.com/duelistgal1… - never heard this song until now, but the lyrics caught my eye.

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-04-20 01:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you; that is good.


Do you know the glorious Easter Hymn 'The Day of Resurrection', based on the ancient Takion of St. John of Damascus, and which is very much a part of the Easter Sunday services in my country?   


This comes from the Choir of Gloucester Abbey.    www.youtube.com/watch?v=MgIx_0…

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-04-26 11:42:43 +0000 UTC]

A very lovely hymn; I do feel as though I've heard it before (not this version though, very beautiful!), but it has been a very long time. Thank you!


I hope you had a good holiday.

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-04-27 00:28:04 +0000 UTC]

Yes, isn't it lovely?  An interesting blend of the ancient and the (relatively) modern, but still with that same message of wonder and joy.  I am glad that you enjoyed being re-acquainted with it.


Indeed I did, thanks; the weather was delightful and everyone in good voice!   I hope that your holiday was also a good one.

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-04-28 01:12:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear that your holiday went well; mine too. The Lord's led me to a good church recently; the sermon on the said day was one of the best I've ever heard. It's so wonderful to be able to meet together with (some of) the people of God. It's what I've been missing all these years, and I'm in a sort of awe. A lot's happened lately; all good. Much of that confusion and loss that I've felt is gone (and by no doing of my own. All the credit is God's; because it is His work, and what He's recently shown me that has made all the difference. Perhaps things not so new; but to me, like nothing I'd ever known or considered or understood before... I truly marvel at Him!).

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-05-02 00:26:28 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad to hear of it; a fine thing to undergo in every way.  Yet do not quite forget that at least some share of the credit is yours (as well as the benefit) since many are called but fail to heed the voice and follow, through doubt and self-will.   It seems to me that grace is best able to manifest itself and work its greatest wonders where the subject is willing to listen - and to be led.  And - sadly - not all are.


But, yes; awe is fitting response!

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-03-08 01:29:43 +0000 UTC]

I think that you will find it enthralling in every way.  Cinematic Shakespeare at its very best.


Yes, both are masterpieces (though I find Ivan's Childhood very harrowing to watch.)  I have heard of the other two and seen a few brief extracts, but have never watched either all the way through.  I should do so.


The scene where Richard denies Buckingham the reward he promised him for smoothing his path to the throne. Langella as Skeletor quotes the same line verbatim!


www.youtube.com/watch?v=LL0FTT…


I dread what they will do to He-Man; they cannot be trusted at all - Marvel, DC, Mattel (especially...) ANY of them! 

The irony is that constant anti-heroes and gritty and dark and 'edgy' character contexts are become even GREATER cliches - and deadly dull, as well as being subject to the crass modern weakness of moral relativism.  

And - alas - Superman too has been debased - the Injustice version where he is a monster, driven mad by power and a cruel tyrant, intent on crushing all dissent.  How lucky, then, that He-Man killed him in the most recent round of DC/Mattel comics.   How these people can be so vain, shallow and cynical  beggars belief.



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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-02-23 01:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Taking on Skeletor in his lair without their champion is not likely to be an easy task for the forces of Eternos.  But, of course, nothing will stop them from trying.  Or keep Teela away from the fight.


As for Skeletor himself, well...  I wanted to draw him as dark, bitter, cruel - a monster. There is nothing comic about him - even his wit is barbed and vicious, and his plans will plunge the world into eternal darkness, devoid of light or life of any kind. He will loose his allies from Yfarnos and revel in their gorging on souls. He is without compassion or conscience or care of any kind.  And he is very close to victory now.  If he can still be stopped (if......) then it is likely to be only at the cost of great sacrifice. He is so sure of himself that he will even let He-Man go - once he has mutilated him, body and mind alike. But for now he basks in his bombast and the joy of humiliating the hero and rubbing salt into his degradation. 


And what is there to say about the fallen hero?  Nothing that you have not already said above.  How bitterly he must now regret his youthful folly and rashness. Haunted by guilt and shame and aware of how close he came to betraying all he had sworn to defend, he can find no word to say - and no hope at all.  As far as he is concerned, the Wicked have indeed prevailed - and it is all his own fault.


Yes, Skeletor believes himself the true overlord of Eternos; strangely, even amid all his grand schemes, that still matters to the monster that once was Keldor.  Even, perhaps, as Gollum felt cheated of the Ring in the riddles contest, and could never forget that burning injustice.  And, as you say, if all was made known, then he tells this to Randor's son and heir, his own nephew.  A sharp irony that outstrips even Skeletor's dark and bitter wit.



(Sorry for the delay; I was covering duty for one who badly needed to take some leave.)

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-02-25 15:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Not easy at all; but necessary. At least now they feel they're able to do something. No longer trapped in a role of helplessness! It is hard to live knowing there is something that needs be done, but with not way of pursuing it. They have waited long and now the chance they've needed has come. It must be a relief in an odd sort of way.


You've done well with his portrayal (as of course, with all others). The event I most feared (his discovery of the hero's shame!) is come, and the Dark Lord doesn't disappoint... He's just as terrible and cruel as I expected -- though more so, I suppose -- and the scenes are almost hard to read for the weight of the situation, and the shame of the hero. I feel He-Man's sorrow -- and it is hard to bear. Every word Skeletor utters is another wound to the hero's heart... How unbearable the situation, how humiliating... And the Dark Lord is savoring every moment of it. A true figure of wickedness, but not one that wrongly tricks the reader into believing him anything else but what he is. There is no hope of redemption for him. Nothing good or likeable about his sort.


As for He-Man and Adam... There's bitterness and shame without equal. It is all his fault, all his folly... Hopelessness is what he harbors, the guilt and perception of being abandoned... The realization that he deserves every terrible thing he gets, for betraying the Power, for betraying the trust; utter despair, inconsolable sorrow... A loathing more for himself then for the things done to him. No hope for forgiveness, no more trust in himself or in the Powers which sustain him...

But Orko is on the way, as is Teela. Grayskull is not without its cards...


I think your likening of Skeletor to Gollum is an accurate one. I suppose that is exactly what he feels -- and does it not reflect his end? He will be destroyed by his own lusts, his own desires for the power; and I expect even destroyed by finally obtaining that which he desires the most. I suppose I always imagined that Skeletor would reach the secret chambers of Grayskull in the end. He would gloat and make his boasts as he seized the power; which a moment later would overwhelm him and he would find that it was more then he was able to handle. His last moments would be filled with the terrible pains and realizations that his lusts for power were impossible to be gained; and he would be destroyed at last by the very thing he sought! How does the phrase go? Consumed upon ones consumptions?

Though I also expect that He-Man has a large role in Skeletor's ultimate defeat. Which is why he is being tempered now for the task to come.


(No worries, I completely understand!)

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-02-27 02:21:09 +0000 UTC]

Yes - true; inaction is hard when those we love are in peril.  Even a fight against such odds can be a relief.


Skeletor is giving full rein to his bitter and ironic wit; he derives great pleasure from He-Man's plight and the humiliation of the hero, rubbing in his failings again and again.  And the fallen hero, lost and ashamed, believes him and drowns in his grief at the disaster her has brought about.   And note how cruelly Skeletor strikes at the last elements of his faith; the Elders and the Power have abandoned their soiled champion - and - worse - the whisper planted in his reeling mind that the Elders do not even exist, that all his suffering has been in vain, that he has followed only pretty tales........   What greater cruelty and wickedness could he inflict than to break the hero without even laying a clawed finger on him....?    No wonder he no longer wishes to  take his life; there is more sport in keeping him in this state of utter anguish to witness the downfall of all that he defended and loved - and has now betrayed.  And He-Man can find no comfort in this bleakness - none.  He sees only his own bitter fault and folly and plumbs the depths of despair.


Who can know how Skeletor will end - or if he ever will?  But there would, as with Gollum, be a poetic justice to his being destroyed by obtaining the very thing he had coveted so long.   At least Gollum unwittingly redeemed Frodo from the final temptation to make the Ring his own and, by his death, destroyed the menace of it forever.  Even that mitigation could well be beyond Skeletor who has eagerly sold himself to the Undying Darkness in return for power and is willing to sacrifice all life, all light to its insatiable hunger........



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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-03-01 02:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Inaction is always hard -- when it feels like there is so much to do, but no clear direction... Patience is a hard earned virtue, but essential; and waiting long makes the ultimate ability to act all the greater, all the sweeter...


I can't help but reread this whole sequence imagining Skeletor with that voice (from the clip you showed me). It really does suit him perfectly; it makes this whole scene seem even more... sinister.

To strike the hero's faith -- I would expect no less of the Lord of Destruction! It is one of the worst things he could do, and of course he does not miss the opportunity to tempt He-Man to losing all belief. Just imagine if he actually convinced the hero completely, that the Elders and the Power were nothing but a pretty tale -- a true triumph it would then be for the Dark Lord. Yet He-Man weeps bitterly, because of the shame -- and also because his faith wavers; though the guilt remains because his belief is not completely destroyed. Why else would he resent and feel so sharply the terrible words? He is not utterly abandoned by Grayskull, for all appearances -- and his soul is not tarnished without reversal -- or else he would scarcely feel such pained sorrow. To know that -- after a manner -- he has denied his Lord... That is the sorrow he deeply feels. He has failed everything -- he has betrayed all that he believes in. He can not possibly be redeemed -- he feels. If the Elders do not exist -- then it is the greatest loss to him. His life would be vain.


No one can know, I suppose... Though if Skeletor is unable to fulfill the role of Gollum (in the manner of his death leading to the hero's redemption), perhaps it is Lyn who would make the sufficient sacrifice? I cannot know, of course. I can only speculate. But this tale will not end without some sort of sacrifice, and I can hardly believe that Orko is the one who shall pay that price... Though I admit, I could be mistaken. (Teela is still in the mix, too, so who can know? Except for you, of course...)

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-03-02 02:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Yes indeed.  You are right.   But few things are as fretful as the sense that those we love are in danger or actually suffering and there is nothing we can do about it.   It is easier to bear patiently for ourselves than for others.


I'm very glad; I have had that Olivier/Richard III voice in my mind for Skeletor for a long time, so I'm pleased that you think it works.  And there are parallels, too; Richard, like Keldor, was a younger son/brother, who was willing to use all and any means - child murder included - to take the throne and power that he craved.  Prince Adam stands in the way of his ambition, even without being He-Man, and that proved fatal to the princely nephews of the usurper lodged in the Tower....

Interesting point that you make there - and right, too; He-Man's grief at what his own fault has let loose is for his doomed friends and family and for Eternia, but his profound guilt implies that he still believes in the existence of the Elders, that Skeletor's most wicked whisperings have not yet convinced him that they are mere tales.  None the less, he is sunk in utter despair, and who can really blame him?


Ah, well now; some mysteries are best left to speculation until the time comes for them to be uncovered.......       (Oh, all right, then: the butler did it......)

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-03-03 18:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Indeed it is...


I'll never be able to read this Skeletor (or think of his character) again without imagining it. A wonderful change to my image of his character. Very befitting of his sinister and wicked nature... So I am glad that you showed me, and told me of it, for it makes the whole THF experience more dramatic.

It is interesting to see the parallels drawn up like that. No wonder it suits Skeletor so well...


The butler, aye? Suddenly it all the pieces fit together...

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-03-04 02:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Always. Alas.


Yes, that voice and that sinister intent and ruthless dedication to his own advancement has always been a part of Skeletor to me. Richard is like Keldor, scheming his way through the court, spreading dissent and setting rivals to deadly enmity by his words and whispers - and all aimed at securing the crown for himself.    And when that fails, the sheer horror of what he is prepared to grant to the demons of Yfarnos in order to win power over the universe.   If only he knew that Adam was He-Man, then he would be only too glad to repeat Richard of Gloucester's cruel murder of his princely nephews.......


Yes. The butler. With the lead pipe. In the conservatory. 

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-03-07 03:36:08 +0000 UTC]

I would enjoy viewing more of Keldor's backstory as you tell it. It would be intriguing to hear/read it told -- if even through hints and without full mention of all events... It adds another layer to the Dark Lord's character -- not to say it would invoke sympathy -- but it would be interesting... I'll be imagining this sort of Richard III as Keldor from now on...


So this then, is your "clue" about upcoming events?

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-03-08 00:23:15 +0000 UTC]

I did drop a hint or two here in THF about Keldor as Randor's half-brother and his time at court - most notably when the King, faced with having to disinherit the missing Adam in favour of an acknowleged heir, exclaims in exasperation that Keldor's name was raised as a possible candidate.  The clear inference being that he does not know what has become of him - only that he left the Court of Eternos of a sudden and vanished almost 17 years ago - "just after the twins were born..."  (!) 


I have also been working on a short story (at the behest of Skeletor'sPain) entitled "The Exile of Prince Keldor" which goes into this in more detail - and is of the self-same MOTU context as THF, making it a kind of prequel.


But, yes, I very much see Keldor as an ambitious and scheming younger (half) brother who has much in common with Richard of Gloucester.  There is, however, some slight degree of mitigation for his actions - at least at the beginning, in that he has some reason to feel wronged by his House.  Whether that justifies what he in time becomes is, of course, entirely another matter....


Well, Keldor told me that the butler did it - and he seems a trustworthy and truthful sort of chap......

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-02-18 01:37:32 +0000 UTC]

And, as ever, my thanks for your careful and insightful critique; this is in part why your absence has been so sorely felt!


Yes, Orko...   Well, I felt that he needed a history of his own, truly deserved some suggestion as to why he was chosen to guard Adam - even before the boy was given the Power.  This tale is all about power and Orko, it seems, abused his own on Trolla and was disgraced for it - and exiled, partly to safeguard the young prince, but also to earn back his lost arts magical.  And, of course, this makes him the ideal companion to know and share Adam's secret. He knows all about the risks and perils of power, and its abuse. And he knows the lore of the Sword - which his people forged.

And so the Sword tempts him - he sees himself sparing Adam the burden (but also winning great might for himself - and no longer being risible to all but a hero himself - and he only would use it to clean up Dodge......)   Which is JUST how Lyn has tempted He-Man into the same pitfall.  Not power itself, but the good that can be done with it.  Because that is how good goes wrong - the burning desire to end wrong and injustice, and to use force to do it.  And it never works: from Saruman to Superman, they all fall into error and use more - and more - until all those who oppose them are not just wrong but evil - and must be eliminated!  Just like today's so-called SJWs.    So is Orko tempted: but he does NOT succumb.  He is stronger than he knows and wiser too - as the Holy Fool often is - and recalls his own hard-learned lesson - but, above all, he loves Adam, and it is this which holds him back.  Love and compassion overcome pride and ambition - and Orko succeeds where He-Man himself failed, and thus proves himself the truest (if unlikeliest) of heroes.


And, yes, like loyal Samwise the Hobbit, no temptation is enough, because some things matter more than power.  But that is why the Hobbits can resist the Ring for the most part; something that even the Wise dare not attempt with impunity.  There is strength in simplicity, and weakness is only weak to those who see but its surface. 


I am very pleased that you enjoyed my take on Orko; even to the extent of liking it above all the rest !  (What - even more than Lyn working her wicked wiles....???!!??!)


(I shall return to answer the rest, I promise. I'm just slightly too late to be doing so now.)

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-02-25 15:13:45 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome. It's a pleasure, as always, to be able to add my two bits on the subject.


I appreciate you giving him some history; and so well done too. It adds more depth to the whole situation. It all makes sense why he's one of the three to share the secret, and why he is essentially Adam's guardian. And being tied to Grayskull, as well? A perfect touch. I like seeing that you've kept his character intact -- his love and loyalty; but at the same time, he's now given true trials and temptations to endure. He failed once -- he abused his power. Now he must do his best to repent of that, and make amends, and it is no wonder he takes so much on himself during this whole story.

He's unsure of himself; mostly because of his failings in the past. He is tempted by the power, the idea of ridding the world of evil. It makes me wonder how it was that he abused his power in the past? I imagine that it was for much the same reasons. Perhaps a perceived righteous desire, yet riddled with a sort of arrogance, a sort of prideful desire to be great and the one to save the world. Though perhaps his intents were less well meaning in passed times. It seems he has much to feel guilty of, and it never leaves him. Even still, he prevails by the love, even as you say, and resists the urge to fall.

He is indeed a true hero, the unwilling and unsure kind; but faithful, and earnest, and loving. I find it fascinating that the Sword would have allowed him to wield it; though perhaps it was only just to tempt him and try him. He seemed surprised that he found the strength to resist; even as the realization that he loves the lad beyond mere duty seems to catch him off guard.

It seems Orko is a necessary companion to the hero. They share more in common now, then it was initially thought. The temptations and falling to them are known to them both, and that knowledge is not forgotten once it is known...


The weak things. They are the strongest, though not of any power of their own. It is the weak things which were chosen, even as the Word says, and not the things which were strong of themselves. That's what Orko here seems to reflect. It is his weakness, and guilt, and dependence upon a need for grace which moves him forward. And his faith pushes him on.


Orko was always my favorite character, when I was a child; and the love for him remains with me still. Long have I considered his past, tried to piece together the reasons why he is so important -- wondering just how he always manages to save the day (after a fashion) when all others meet failings. I've watched through the original series innumerable times over the years. I know it by heart, and the little tidbits of dialogue and backstories are not lost to me. I begin to put things together and have concluded that there is much more importance to him then just comical relief... And not the route DC went when they decided to turn him arch-villain! Indeed, it was a terrible insult to his kind and essential role to He-Man.

I admit, another reader brought up this backstory you made for Orko to me awhile back. I have long been waiting to hear more of it, and see just how you would weave it into the narrative. I love it more now, and am (again) glad that you decided to elaborate on him, and give him such an important role. Your version seems to most pure, and befitting.

So -- seeing that Orko has always been a favorite of mine... Seeing that Adam's inner struggles have always been my most sought concepts... Seeing that you weave complex and realistic themes into a world and mythos precious to my childhood... Why would THF not be my favorite? You've turned a children's tale into an epic. Made it everything that MOTU should have been, but before THF, has not been.


(Yes, even above Lyn and her wicked wiles! I have always been partial to the heroes over the villains, no matter how intriguing the villains become! And Lyn, for all the complexity added to her motives, is still for all intents and purposes a villain. I would love to see her character redeemed, but it is unclear yet whether or not that will transpire. She has much, after all, to repent of...)

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-03-03 02:27:19 +0000 UTC]

As it is for me to read them I assure you.


I did feel that Orko was under-explained, which was odd, given how different and important he is in some ways.  Yes, the entry character for the children, but with much more to him, and only a few tantalizing hints as to why.  So - what was it brought him to Eternia? Random chance?    Less so than Marlena Glenn.    At some stage the Trollan master magician had overstepped his dues and been given a penance for it.  I think it's safe to say that he acted in good faith and with the best of intents, but possibly was over-eager to show his skill and power and was tempted by pride to do something forbidden.  Which is why he is the perfect guardian to watch over Adam, who will one day face the same dilemma about the use and abuse of great power. 


And, yes; it is love for Adam that saves him from temptation. Even more so than the uncomfortable memory of the past. His surprise is that he was so tempted that he was in danger of forgetting what he had already learned the once on Trolla - but it is his devotion to the Prince which plays the greatest part in his victory over the urge to be more than he is seen to be, and the appeal of righteously punishing evil. 

Which, of course, parallels how Lyn lured He-Man into compliance with her plans; that he could end all evil, all war forever.  Again, that subtle, strong appeal to make all right by use of force - and which makes the strong weak, whereas resisting it makes the weak strong. An important paradox.


Thank you, once again, for your kind words; they make me feel that the effort has all been worthwhile.

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Amber-Rose-Blossoms In reply to omnivore7 [2019-03-03 16:46:28 +0000 UTC]

It's a good idea to compare Orko's arrival to Eternia with Marlena's; they both hail from other worlds, so it would lean less on coincidence, and more on providence (A wonderful point!)... Again, paralleling his own shaded past with He-Man's current predicament is gold. It really makes his character all the more important, and it explains why he alone was given the task to deliver the sword... I need to go back and reread all the earlier texts concerning him. His conversations with the Sorceress, as well as his inner thoughts, have always intrigued me -- and now I can see why. My favorite line still hails from chapter one, concerning the Trollan: He had not, after all, always been a comical little conjurer – even if no-one much remembered that any more – sometimes not even Orko. I have returned to that line over and over again, and I can see now it is because it was the first glean of this past you have given him -- which you have now revealed 23 parts later... It says more, in one simple statement for his character, then most other MOTU stories yield; and you have added far more, besides...

I also return often to those quotes you put at the beginning... They fit the overall tale, and frame the theme very well.


I can only anticipate the Trollan's further role in the tale... He has the sword, it leads him (unbeknownst to him!) towards Snake Mountain -- but there is still much to be done. If anyone had to see He-Man in his shamed state, I would trust Orko the most -- who understands his predicament, and loves him in spite of it. I almost cringe to imagine any other character seeing him thus; Duncan would understand, but he would be sorrowed with disappointment (seeing as he tried to stop the lad, to no avail), and his arrival would cause He-Man to feel more guilt. As for Teela, she is naive in this whole affair; though she loves, and seeks now the hero and prince -- she cannot understand everything for her lack of knowledge... Orko, however, could be a soothing figure to appear before the hero -- not to say that his reception will be the kindest (only time will tell!) -- but I think that his understanding and kind affection for the hero/prince would be best received. Most necessary for the hero... Even more so then he would understand.


I like the parallel you make between the temptation of power as seen with both Orko and Lyn. Opposites, to be sure, but two sides of the same coin. The temptation is subtle, and formed off good intentions -- though so is the road to Hell, as it is said. Which is the whole point.


As always, you are welcome.

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omnivore7 In reply to Amber-Rose-Blossoms [2019-03-05 01:35:58 +0000 UTC]

As the Lady tells Duncan, she finds it hard to believe that Marlena's arrival on Eternia was mere chance; ditto her marrying Randor and producing two special twins.  She sees the hand of providence in this, and hopes that it betokens that Adam will not be abandoned, bleak as the boy's situation might seem.   In like fashion, the inference is that Orko's coming, his appointment as young Adam's companion and guardian was not chance either.  Nor was it merely his penance for his past errors; it was maybe that he, Orko, knew the 'problem with power' and the temptation to abuse it - which made him the right one to guide a young man with vast power - and no experience as to how to wield it.

  So, yes, that was the idea with Orko from the outset, but to reveal this gradually.  The scene where he was tempted to use the Sword himself to rescue Adam - and then to clean up Dodge (...!) was seminal, in that it was his love for Adam and instinctive humilty which allowed him to overcome that pitfall and remember the past.  So past error lent him strength; the former weakness had become a will strong and able to resist that which He-Man himself had fallen for: the desire to wield power with real force and to crush evil for all time.

  Because that is the REAL problem with power - and the one which saw heroes like Saruman and Superman (in one especial setting) seduced by the use of force to mould the world into the shape they wished for it. Good intentions initially are soon corrupted and turn wholly to the use of force, without mercy or compassion.  But evil cannot be ended with its own weapons; it soon corrupts to its own service those who so try.    And now Lyn has exiled Adam and left He-Man bereft of a moral compass and doting on Lyn - and willing to follow her plan, seize the Power in full, 'cleanse' Grayskull - and lay Skeletor's head at his mistress' dainty white feet......


So Orko has escaped this trap - and He-Man, led on by Lyn, has plunged headlong into it.  Both had only good intentions - but that is simply not enough.


  As for Lyn, who knows if she truly means only to save the world from Skeletor, or if she merely wishes to replace him?  Either way, she has landed the fallen hero in this dire peril and lost him. His will is broken and his guilt and shame overwhelming.


The forces of the Light had better hope fervently that the Lady is right.......

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canadacat144 [2019-02-10 01:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Great chapter of a great story.     Good artwork too!       

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omnivore7 In reply to canadacat144 [2019-02-14 01:12:48 +0000 UTC]

So glad that it pleased you.

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Rythorrn [2019-01-31 08:28:53 +0000 UTC]

The Enervator sounds cool. How long is a short time cuz I'm okay with He-man lasting only 15 minutes.

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omnivore7 In reply to Rythorrn [2019-02-01 01:31:41 +0000 UTC]

That would be far too short a time to satisfy Skeletor's cruel intentions.  He means He-Man to suffer......

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