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Kendell2 [2013-12-16 00:31:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm really enjoying this! I agree with Alex, this is the chapter that gets one hooked!
I like how you're building this up, and Erised is fun!
Though I have to ask for the trope page, is she Pandora? Or can you reveal that or not?
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OracleMask In reply to Kendell2 [2013-12-16 04:08:25 +0000 UTC]
Super glad you liked it~
Though I have to ask for the trope page, is she Pandora? Or can you reveal that or not?
Hmm...it's a surprise~
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Kendell2 In reply to OracleMask [2013-12-16 04:20:35 +0000 UTC]
Gotcha!
Updated the trope page!
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wanderingmagus [2013-08-14 19:58:32 +0000 UTC]
hope this can continue! and if the characters are asking the Shadow Who Makes to recruit help, best of luck to all! I do dearly love what you've done with this little bubble of paradise in the midst of all these branches of possibility.
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OracleMask In reply to wanderingmagus [2013-08-17 02:03:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm really happy you liked it!
Actually, the next chapter is up if you'd like to read it~
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alexwarlorn [2013-07-26 20:02:27 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait to see this continued.
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alexwarlorn [2013-06-25 05:09:13 +0000 UTC]
Good luck ponies. I hope you find your solution before the paper runs out.
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alexwarlorn [2013-06-04 06:13:35 +0000 UTC]
Now you've GOT to write what happens next.
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sedpaul [2013-06-03 17:11:14 +0000 UTC]
Delicious, delicious writing...
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alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 06:45:39 +0000 UTC]
Puzzlemint jumped into the air and clapped all four hooves together.
:-D
“But...how do we do that?” Toola-Roola asked after a long minute of everypony grinning excitedly at each other, “I don't remember it being cast the first time. Do any of you?”
The classic story of the people in the utopia, needing to fix the machinery that keeps their world running, but having long forgotten how any of it works.
One thing is clear here. Pandora is giving these ponies a chance to deny her mother a trophy.
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alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 04:59:54 +0000 UTC]
Well reality has been rewritten here. Melody's wish was still to be a princess with none of the responsibilities (thus why she became a filly). That would have been a wish to herself not a wish to others.
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jawmax [2013-06-03 04:49:30 +0000 UTC]
One little problem. I wrote the Melody chapter in seven dreams seven nightmares and in it I wrote that Cheerilee used to be Melody's husband Ace. You may want to make some adjustments to that.
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OracleMask In reply to jawmax [2013-06-03 05:07:59 +0000 UTC]
Who said this Cheerilee wasn't Ace? :3
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jawmax In reply to OracleMask [2013-06-03 13:10:20 +0000 UTC]
Still I don't think Ace wished to be a mare.
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OracleMask In reply to jawmax [2013-06-03 13:44:14 +0000 UTC]
...I can't really explain it more here without spoiling things, but rest assured that things like this do have reasons behind them. I didn't just throw in Cheerilee without taking Ace into consideration.
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alexwarlorn In reply to jawmax [2013-06-03 05:00:42 +0000 UTC]
I actually suggested the idea that Ace would have still become Cheerilee in this reality for some reason.
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OracleMask In reply to alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 05:08:34 +0000 UTC]
And your idea was taken under serious consideration~ X3
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alexwarlorn In reply to OracleMask [2013-06-03 05:11:35 +0000 UTC]
Though perhaps I should have figured out cause before I began suggesting effect.
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OracleMask In reply to alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 05:23:52 +0000 UTC]
Well, the spell itself was altered and there was a large delay before it was finally cast. Plenty of time for ponies to change their minds about their wishes.
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alexwarlorn In reply to jawmax [2013-06-03 04:59:26 +0000 UTC]
Well reality has been rewritten here. Melody's wish was still to be a princess with none of the responsibilities. That would have been a wish to herself.
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jawmax In reply to alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 13:10:18 +0000 UTC]
Still I don't think Ace wished to be a mare.
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ardashir In reply to jawmax [2013-06-03 15:50:50 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I think that was a bit of a shock for the poor stallion. And I remember that line from the chapter: "So, does this make Rarity Cheerilee's ex-wife?"
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alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 04:18:48 +0000 UTC]
You also BTW got that these are STILL the G3 ponies, innocent and straight forward.
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OracleMask In reply to alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 04:44:51 +0000 UTC]
That's good to hear! I honestly spent a lot of time worrying about that~
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alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 04:01:55 +0000 UTC]
A Pony POV-inspired tale
A Pony POV Series-inspired tale
You could provide a link to the Pony POV Series in the description.
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OracleMask In reply to alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 04:43:14 +0000 UTC]
That does look better~ And I went ahead and put in a link to your page.
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alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 03:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Continuity question.
Is Scootaloo still an Earth Pony in this reality? (since we've seen cross species siblings before).
So at least unicorns were known about in Ponyville? And 'moved to Unicornia.'
This honestly makes me wonder how the events of Run Away Rainbow, and the meeting of the Earth Ponies and the Pegasi worked out in this reality, or if those events happened at all. And if Cheerilee is still Princess Rarity's guardian.
So many questions about this reality that clearly wouldn't have followed the paradox version and would NOT have had everything that had happened happen that way again. So many questions!
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OracleMask In reply to alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 04:33:20 +0000 UTC]
Yes, Scootaloo is an Earth Pony.
And there were a few unicorns from the start in Ponyville, including Cheerilee and Sweetie Belle. The races knew of each other before the wish spell, and in this case reality didn't reset to them almost all being separated again.
In this version, Cheeriliee moved to Unicornia as an adult.
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alexwarlorn In reply to OracleMask [2013-06-03 04:53:10 +0000 UTC]
I guess the question is who raised Princess Rarity. (Since it's sad that Ace and Melody's souls wouldn't be together at least as family here).
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alexwarlorn [2013-06-03 03:26:03 +0000 UTC]
“Cor...think about all the paper you'd need for that,”
What was she going to say?
I loved the mirror pony shape shifting. And I loved how she explained the problems that the wish spell might run into.
The story becomes a LOT MORE clear, and the plot decidedly picks up here!
And I think Tomb Heart finding the letter when he did wasn't just random chance, it was GIVEN to him so the G3 ponies this time could change their OWN fate instead of the G2 ponies doing it for them!
Of course, WHAT IS the paper the story is written on? And WHO IS the writer?
THIS HAS COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY HOOKED ME! YOU'VE ME TRAPPED BABY!
And who the mirror pony is is rather obvious. And the idea of the 'no limits question' being a birthday gift FITS PERFECTLY with the Pony POV Verse rules!!! More than you can believe!
THIS IS FANTASTIC!
Of course, have you read the latest parts of the 7 Dreams Nightmares? The one involving Bright Eyes?
I wonder if any of them will think to ask the Breezies what they know.
Of course what they're doing is just delaying the inevitable, but some would say the same thing about eating, sleeping, and going to work. Sure you do someday, but certainly and dramatically increases your life span by vast amounts. Or they just figure out how to write the story in segments so things don't burn out.
BUt seriously, Fiesta's idea IS pure genius! Then again, she is a stage manager, of course she'd think about the practical side of presentation!
And poor Toola-Roola, that isn't QUITE how things happened, but it's bloody close enough!!!
THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! THIS IS WONDERFUL! You have the characters have personalities, you have conflict, and while things seem darkly ominous, here at least there's a chance to actually rewrite their destiny to avoid oblivion. The G2 ponies saved them from paradoxes, now the G3 ponies now need to prove they have the will to live!
And what the mirror says about the problem of epically long stories are all 100% correct, take it from me. THANK YOU AGAIN FOR WRITING THIS! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue!
Want to be friends?
I believe in an afterlife, and I believe a baby is a human life even when still in the womb. I don't like bathroom humor and I love Cardcaptor Sakura. You?
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