zodiac1805 [2008-03-03 03:33:38 +0000 UTC]
Very very relatable... Oh my goodness, it's scary how much I can relate to this poem.
The repitition works well, and you've captured some great emotion here, I can honestly say this poem is complete the way it is, it doesn't lack or overdo anything.
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