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Published: 2007-10-17 01:35:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description How can one tell him,
That she lied.

How can one tell him,
That slowly she died.

How can one tell him,
That you care.

How can one tell him,
That life is not fair.

How can one tell him,
That you will always be there.

How can one tell him,
That the one who wants him is right here.

How can one tell him,
That your heart breaks.

How can one tell him,
That your hope emulates his own.

How can one tell him,
That you will never let him feel alone.

How can you tell him,
That you care for him so.

How can one tell him,
That is something that I do not know.
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Comments: 5

zodiac1805 [2008-03-03 03:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Very very relatable... Oh my goodness, it's scary how much I can relate to this poem.

The repitition works well, and you've captured some great emotion here, I can honestly say this poem is complete the way it is, it doesn't lack or overdo anything.

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OrangeMinion In reply to zodiac1805 [2008-03-03 04:07:14 +0000 UTC]

Thnx once again! ^^

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lovelyart [2007-11-10 01:52:32 +0000 UTC]

I really really like this one.
I think it is the best of all I have read of yours (which is four )

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OrangeMinion In reply to lovelyart [2007-11-10 04:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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lovelyart In reply to OrangeMinion [2007-11-10 15:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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