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Published: 2008-06-21 16:39:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 6
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took me a while to get this print how i wanted it in the darkroom. sure i could have dodged a bit on the face, but i do like the shift from light to dark. too much maybe?shot this during one of our trips on the tgv. france.
hassy xpan.
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I'd have to agree with sublime. You really have to stare to find her ear, i'd like to see a little more of the detail in shadow. also, you may consider burning in the other cheek just a bit. right now it's almost the same white as the window, and it makes her face almost flow into it, not really what you're going for here i would imagine.
overall though, i love the composition of the shot. god i wish i had one of these cameras.
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yea, i do see what you're saying. i tried dodging a bit on the left side of the face but that print had that sort of 'less contrasty too much dodging' look. i think the problem is because i underexposed by accident in the first place... and so dodging usually pushes the photo beyonds it's limits a bit. i dunnow, i'll keep trying. and yea i'll try burning on the other cheek too.
thanks for the feedback
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light forever wins over the darkness -- perfectly framed -- later days
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Love the expression, would have dodged at least a zone on the face but like where you took it..
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