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outcast910 — A Lovely Life Before and After

Published: 2006-05-17 00:02:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 64; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description With a life comes death
With death comes an end
But in life I never thought I'd find a substantial loss in something not of my own
My life leaving cratoring remarks all of the time stained memories
With haunting dreams and daunting lives
I've missed out on the best things and yet still go so blind
How many times do I have to learn the lesson I already know
How many times must I resort to something so drastic
How many times do i have to cut my own breathing
Nothing in this life is true, I'm crying
I'm running out of breath
I'm running out of the air you once let off
Don't leave me behind
Not again
I've lost my way and felt the cold touch my heart
The stress suffocating all the remains
My days at ean
You had your day
Where is mine
Good day, good night
With final farewells
I thought I loved what happen to us
(Well not my best but it is the opposite of what it truly is we are back YEA...well sorta lol. To a friend)
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Comments: 9

onewithdarkness [2006-05-20 23:06:35 +0000 UTC]

wow,
how do you coem up with tittles for your poems?
there so inciteful.

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-05-21 03:46:03 +0000 UTC]

i make them up because I know they will help my friends and the ones that I write them for, they just come to me as I find the need to show some one I am here r something like that

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onewithdarkness In reply to outcast910 [2006-05-22 00:27:58 +0000 UTC]

wow, i make them, so i can channel the way i feel about the world, and channeling old boring events into soemthing colorful and wild.

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-05-22 11:43:50 +0000 UTC]

thats cool I guess....I just can't say much too down to even think right

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onewithdarkness In reply to outcast910 [2006-05-28 17:02:52 +0000 UTC]

cheer up bud, smell the roses, i'm down too, i hasve yet another premonition that my big beach endeavor tommororw might bomb, i hope it doesn't//

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-05-28 20:51:43 +0000 UTC]

hope it goes well

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onewithdarkness In reply to outcast910 [2006-05-28 23:40:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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ZachtheHurricane [2006-05-17 14:31:54 +0000 UTC]

I hope it works out because this life is too short to be misrable all the time. Sometimes it is fun to savor a bad mood but we should all be happy. It is a great poem.

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outcast910 In reply to ZachtheHurricane [2006-05-17 16:27:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks bad is sometimes good lol but others it breaks you down...its life

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