DeepChrome [2008-06-04 05:06:13 +0000 UTC]
Cool colors. I like those, and how you have them interplaying in the nebula. However, again, you really need to vary your range of brightness/darkness in the gases of the nebula. To make the nebula work for you, rather than be this one-value blanket that covers the entire piece keeping us from seing black, dark space.
I'm noticing that as a theme here, and while it works in some cases, it can definitely make all your work look too much alike, and all your nebulae too much alike--becuase they're all basically the same value, not a range of values like real-life nebulae can be.
Also, I think you clumped all the bright stars into too compact a set of spots for the composition to work for you here. The eye needs things to draw it around the image, and in space art, that is usually the nebula and well, stars.
I would suggest putting a sprinkling of faint and "hazy" stars through the nebula next time, and use your really big, bright stars as composition enhancers. They work best that way by drawing the eye to key areas. This just wastes their usefulness here.
What I'd have done here is used some brighter, more textured patches of gas, and some bright stars to draw the eye around the picture. Here, they all keep the eye about dead center of the image, and really don't help the rest of it very much. The one-value nebula just makes it worse by not giving the eye much of interest to really look around despite the clumped stars.
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