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Pachumaster In reply to Ravajava [2017-08-20 19:40:53 +0000 UTC]
ehm yeah, perhaps I made it shorter when fixing some perspective. if I ever do some kind of blueprint style thingy I'll make it more proportionate
I was going for something like this scontent.cdninstagram.com/t51.… but I have no idea how to
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SirRinge In reply to Pachumaster [2017-08-30 07:50:31 +0000 UTC]
The lighting on the mist is slightly too red, but the concentration and movement of the water looks awesome! Great job
It's looking a lot better. Keep up the good work!
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SirRinge In reply to Pachumaster [2017-08-29 08:32:40 +0000 UTC]
The main thing is there's no clear line of action, everything looks like it's kinda floating. Notice how in the reference image the splash is moving outwards from where the treads are hitting and throwing up the mud.
You can try using a blur or something to force motion lines into the splash. EDIT: Also make sure you add in varying colour weights too so it doesn't look like one loose floating cloud. Right now it looks like the entire thing is settled lightly around the base of the tank. Add more mud splashes to where the mud is flying
I'm not 100% sure, but I think the splash you have now could serve a good base (:
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