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Published: 2016-05-14 19:49:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 571; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description he held out his hand
and she let her own fall into his—
into the heat
into the promise that came with the gesture

and she stood—
shoulders back—
letting the fabric of her scarlet gown
float just above her toes

he turned;
she followed
dodging the sparks that his footsteps made

he stopped
in the middle of the finished floor
in the middle of the couples twirling around them

and then they danced;
they danced until her feet blistered
until her skirt grew dizzy

they danced
and everyone watched as the pair spun
as her gown tangled itself in his inferno

they watched until the music stopped
until the girl’s posture faltered
until their eyes could no longer bear the glow

and the couple stood
panting
until their flame burned out
until their lungs were nothing but smoke
until they fell—
together—
into ash
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Comments: 18

Aart-ish [2016-07-03 04:25:26 +0000 UTC]

This is nice I admire you being able to put such positive emotion into words- negative stuff is a lot easier to me, poetically. This has such an uplifting feel to it ^_^ And the dizzy skirt is great XD 

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pages-of-poems In reply to Aart-ish [2016-07-03 04:33:50 +0000 UTC]

Negative stuff is usually easier for me too! Although I guess there is a slight negativity at the end when everything sort of... fizzles out (pun very much intended.) Anywho, thank you so much again! 

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Aart-ish In reply to pages-of-poems [2016-07-05 03:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, yes that's true XD But all good things come to an end, I suppose. Hopefully, there will always be more dances to come  

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DC-26 [2016-06-30 04:50:19 +0000 UTC]

The idea of her skirt growing dizzy!

Lovely image. I swoon.

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pages-of-poems In reply to DC-26 [2016-06-30 20:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so so much! 

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13khaleesi [2016-06-11 09:28:04 +0000 UTC]

wow!! beautiful!! ^_^

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pages-of-poems In reply to 13khaleesi [2016-06-13 18:30:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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RheaLyrinAssaine [2016-05-21 13:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Love the imagery!

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pages-of-poems In reply to RheaLyrinAssaine [2016-05-22 01:34:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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RheaLyrinAssaine In reply to pages-of-poems [2016-05-22 03:02:36 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome. 

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elextrified [2016-05-20 13:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully done and the imagery is amazing. Flows and fits well. Nicely done! Xx

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pages-of-poems In reply to elextrified [2016-05-20 14:40:41 +0000 UTC]

You really are too kind, thank you so much!!

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elextrified In reply to pages-of-poems [2016-05-20 20:30:43 +0000 UTC]

Anytime ♥

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SolonNight [2016-05-16 14:24:49 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful! Such wonderful imagery! 

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pages-of-poems In reply to SolonNight [2016-05-16 18:36:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! You're always too kind  

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SolonNight In reply to pages-of-poems [2016-05-16 21:39:46 +0000 UTC]

Words never seem to do justice to the beauty of the poems though. Kind of ironically.

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CaptainElsa [2016-05-15 15:43:17 +0000 UTC]

this reminds me of "Ring of Fire". I like the sparks theme.

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pages-of-poems In reply to CaptainElsa [2016-05-15 16:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And I didn't even think of "Ring of Fire," but now that you've said it, I totally see the similarities! But now I can't stop singing it to myself haha

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