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Published: 2012-04-01 11:14:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 667; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 24
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Sunflower in my simple studio!Taken with Canon Powershot G7 in a make-shift studio.
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Okay. This is coming from an amateur photographer who has been taking photos for about a year so if you disagree, that's totally okay!! So first off, i love the sunflower and how you captured the sunflower's petals and even it's dewdrops.
Vision: I personally love black and white photos but to many it can see very boring. so i gave you a 4.5
Originality: I gave you a 4 because pictures like this has been done before and I've seen too many, however most of them aren't on deviantart so yah.
Technique: I gave you a 4.5 I don't think I would change anything but the lighting on the right side is a bit off from the left because one of the petals is a bit lighter in whiteness, I don't know if that was intentional but yah.
Impact: Well this picture if very pretty but it isn't impactful (or rather doesn't have impact) to me so I just gave you a 4. I would have preferred if the flower middle was at the bottom so it can represent like a sun (get it sun flower? okay bad joke). It would have more of an impact because of the rising day or some like that as a symbol.
Anyway i hope this helps!!
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Thank you for your critique. I find it very helpful. I agree with you on most points.
This photo was taken a long time ago. I'm thinking about taking another Sunflower picture, but I would have to wait until Winter when farmers plant sunflowers
I'll surely will take your advice to improve my next one!
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Cool Btw please comment and critique my pictures!!
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Sure, I will do. Perhaps within the next 2 days
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very nice.
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It's just a temporary studio. A table, a small backdrop, and a light lol
It's not even large enough to photograph a cat for today's quest XD
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