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Description On Speaking Sweetly

(Kl Shyʼ Ḩlw)  كل شيء حلو

Aching arms, rest your labors, reach not for the son anymore, do not
Grasp for that with which you have always held, moved, worked by

Rest

Why do you Shake? like a tempest has just torn through you
Like everything you've ever touched was a dream?
You are cold, you grasp the thin, melted air
Was there once something there? To hold against your aching rib?
Was there once something palpable? A surface to beat against?
The sand flows away, taking your foundations
Flowing swiftly away, the sand from that lush beach, on which
We were told not to build our house
True to that lesson, the rivers of Babylon carried it away
Corinth fell, Ephesus was left in dust, Athens lost its Socrates
All built on the sand where once, your ribs did not ache

Matlev, levmat, levmat

Now there is no surface to beat upon.
Thumbs flick quickly across the keys
Wiry limbo and flutterings of binary
Sweet nothings that dare not be somethings
Speaking in men's and angel's tongues
Does this excruciating limbo no good

I miss you
I miss you too
It's pathetic
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I cannot

I cannot play my sweet flutes,
That would make milkmaids dance
That would intoxicate the senses
Because you will not hear them
You hear a different god

Corlev, levcor, levcor

You are tired of beating relentlessly, so you rebuild Philomel's cage for her

Freedom is a sour thing, it gives me nothing to beat against
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Comments: 11

Fayyde [2011-04-20 01:32:41 +0000 UTC]

you've got me here pan.
As usual its about gods and religions
its also wondering
contrasting and comparing old to new, (binary and socrates)
leaving home? Because you are forced to...
you can't do what you love anymore
melancholy
destruction of a home?

(Kl Shyʼ Ḩlw) كل شيء حلو
arabic? confused.

Corlev, levcor, levcor
Matlev, levmat, levmat
still confused.

[Page]- what? more confusion.

You are tired of beating relentlessly, so you rebuild Philomel's cage for her - a philomel is a violin type instrument?


i read this probably 5 or 6 times. with thorough analysis and i know i missed at least half of it.
If only i could concentrate this hard on school...

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Panmiro In reply to Fayyde [2011-04-20 01:42:55 +0000 UTC]

Kl Shy Hlw (kel shyee hloo) = Everything is sweet

Corinthians, Leviticus, Matthew

It's a poem that puts my unique position in context with larger Events... Kind of like "Billy Budd" And I couldn't possibly expect you to understand it without understanding what I wrote it about... unless you are either Ezra Pound, Sherlock Holmes, TS Eliot, or God...

Whit I can do is tell you each one of the references. I'm touched you concentrated so hard too

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Fayyde In reply to Panmiro [2011-04-20 01:51:44 +0000 UTC]

are these bits right?
its also wondering
contrasting and comparing old to new, (binary and socrates)
leaving home? Because you are forced to...
you can't do what you love anymore
melancholy
destruction of a home?

Eliot makes my head hurt. Although I do understand his poems. They take time energy and advil.
Idk Ezra and Sherlock Holmes is my hero

so corinthians leviticus and mathew, all biblical references then? but the spelling?

billy budd. googled. need to read. another mind twister because sparknotes indicates that it is a whole lot like The Elegance of The Hedgehog

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Panmiro In reply to Fayyde [2011-04-20 02:09:43 +0000 UTC]

It does compare old to new, but the new is part of the old, a never ending psychle (and yes, I meant to spell psychle that way). I was leaving a home that had become familiar, but nothing so tangible as a house, more like a pair of arms. The son in question is a veiled allusion to jesus, more for the purity of Shake's (shake is a nickname, that's why it's capitalized) soul and his conflict with religion than for any tangible resemblance to Jesus.

In saying that I can't do what I love anymore, you were perfectly correct.

In finding out what that is, look to what the passages corinthians, leviticus, and matthew have in common. The entire thing is a huge research project combined with a riddle. Are you sure you want to take it on?

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Fayyde In reply to Panmiro [2011-04-20 02:16:07 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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Panmiro In reply to Fayyde [2011-04-20 02:19:48 +0000 UTC]

That, my friend, was awesome.

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Fayyde In reply to Panmiro [2011-04-20 02:24:44 +0000 UTC]

i try. so, mathew leviticus, and corinthians?

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Panmiro In reply to Fayyde [2011-04-22 04:29:20 +0000 UTC]

mmmhmmm exactly. They have quite a few common threads, but the threads that would fit into this piece have to do with human relations

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Fayyde In reply to Panmiro [2011-04-22 18:02:13 +0000 UTC]

idunno how im going to go about this but i will figure it out.

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Panmiro In reply to Fayyde [2011-04-23 01:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Only if you want to figure it out. It's a bit complex and random

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Fayyde In reply to Panmiro [2011-04-23 22:40:58 +0000 UTC]

ha sure.

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