BrandonHill [2013-12-25 12:58:05 +0000 UTC]
I just finished reading the story. First of all, the cover fits perfectly with the theme. Beautiful design, there. Though I feel that the fleshing out of the relationship between the main characters remained somewhat thin, the strength of it was very prevalent throughout the story. The biology of Kiva reminds me a bit of the Oankali from Octavia E. Butler's Xenogenesis trilogy, and its effects on the characters was fascinating. Very well done.
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NetGreen123 [2012-03-30 14:25:19 +0000 UTC]
Cute!
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Paul-Lucas In reply to NetGreen123 [2012-03-31 11:46:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! = )