Comments: 13
lightningspatulas [2018-10-13 12:33:24 +0000 UTC]
I love the detail you put into her wings, she's so cute!
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ghostlyCavalier [2018-09-05 18:15:17 +0000 UTC]
Hi I'm from Project Comment!
Overall, I really like your painting in terms on composition, color, and details! The texture and detail on the wings is phenomenal, and I really enjoy how things become more blurred in the background to create the illusion of depth. The scenery isn't very detailed, but works in a way where you know what's happening without taking away attention from your baby! Speaking of which, I like the way you did her hair ALOT and the soft lighting on the clothing is great. But there are some overall problems with anatomy and the like. The forearm is a bit shorter than what it should be (forearm and lower arm are about the same length), and hand should be a bit bigger. Her fingers should also be longer relative to the thumb. The head is on the large side but it doesn't take away that much. I think the biggest problem is that the way the face is painted it just looks more smudged and not as good as everything else. It's like this really weird discrepancy. The arm is also kind of like that. Were you painting the clothing and the skin using different methods? Overall I think it's a pretty cute piece! There are some problems but luckily it's with anatomy and stuff that you can pretty easily fix for future art.
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PaulaEdith In reply to ghostlyCavalier [2018-09-16 07:53:27 +0000 UTC]
Hi! Thanks for the critique! My daughter is a two years old, that's why her head is big and her fingers proportions aren't adult ones.
The skin fairness is made to give a porcelain impression, in contrast with the hard brushes from the hair.
About the arm, there is a problem but not sure about the cause (the sketch is correct so I bet on the shadowing, levels are my weakest point).
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JMBdraws [2018-09-02 23:46:33 +0000 UTC]
Super cute. I like the worst penis of her hair and the texture in her wings. The glow affect around the wand is really nice as well. Also like how you gave a detailed background that wasn’t trying to overpower the main focus. I like the realism in this piece. She kind of reminds me of Arrietty though I think it’s the red hair and red dress.
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PaulaEdith In reply to JMBdraws [2018-09-03 17:29:20 +0000 UTC]
I think the autocorrector played a bit with your text xD but thanks for comment! ^.^
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charmedstudio [2018-09-01 21:35:00 +0000 UTC]
I checked out your blog with the digital sketchbooks, so wonderful. Inspiring.
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PaulaEdith In reply to Seeeks [2018-09-01 19:41:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! ^.^
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