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Spidey sequentials pencils for portfolio. Any and all comments and critiques would be greatly appreciated!See the whole sequence here - [link]
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I feel like the shot of Venom coming throught the window could use some more action. Like perhaps having some of the shards of glass flying at the camera, to help give more force to the motion.
In the middle panel, I think Spidey's hands are a little too small, especially his right one.
The bottom panel, I like how you drew the webbing, and I think this panel is pretty solid.
I hope that helps some
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Thanks, your feedback is much appreciated!
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