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PenguinEatsCarrots — Painterly Attempt - please critique!

Published: 2014-09-08 20:19:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 369; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description Was trying something new I'm not to happy with how it turned out but hey this was my first attempt at trying to do a painterly drawing

critiques will be greatly appreciated!

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Comments: 5

FlameBrandt [2014-09-08 21:25:46 +0000 UTC]

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Impact


Hmmm...where to start?
Well, first of all, I absolutely love the soft coloring on this piece, the lighting is also very impressive. I do however notice that the coloring is a bit blocky on some places, mostly on the green in the eyes. The divide where gray meets red on his tail is also a bit strange in the way it seems that it ends in blocks rather than the streaks that most people expect, but I'm not sure if that's what you were going for so I won't give any positive or negative comments on it. Overall, this is a very nice piece that has amazing lighting and shading!

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Aurora8911 [2014-09-09 17:17:25 +0000 UTC]

It looks very good!
But maybe softer lines or thiner ones would make the "smooth" effect more eficient ^^

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PenguinEatsCarrots In reply to Aurora8911 [2014-09-12 21:13:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you ; v ;
I will try that next time!

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Furdora [2014-09-08 20:30:48 +0000 UTC]

cutecute cutie ! I really like the colors here. Looks so soft and nice ; v ;

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PenguinEatsCarrots In reply to Furdora [2014-09-08 23:32:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you ;; o ;;

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