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Tempest Shadow’s hooves clacked against the cobblestone paths, as she trudged through what could be considered the backstreets of Ponyville. Her ears were held against the back of her head in annoyance, and she flicked her tail as she walked. Pregnancy had been treating her alright—it was the forced leave from the royal guard that was ailing the mare. The moment she’d come to her superiors with news of her surprise pregnancy they’d lost their minds, insisting she not come back to work until the baby was delivered. With nothing better to do, she was in Ponyville again. Seeing Twilight was all well and good, but there was a completely different pony that she was expecting to run into in the small town.

“Oh my—Tempest?!”

Her ears flicked forwards, and Tempest turned her head lazily towards the sound. Luckily for the unicorn, it seemed as if the pony had found her all by himself.

“Oh, hey.”

Before her stood a pale orange stallion, his fiery mane swept back and blue eyes wide with horror. The cheerful star cutie mark on his flank provided an amusing contrast to the expression of pure distress on his face, as he gasped and mouthed words while staring at the mare in front of him.

“Tempest—Tempest is it you?!” he gawked.

“Yes, I think we made that clear,” she answered, flatly. “Fancy seeing you here, Smiley Star.”

“How did you find—how did you know I’d be—“ he stammered, looking from side to side as if hoping to find somewhere he could hide.

“Because you told me you were from Ponyville,” Tempest said, rolling her eyes, “Relax. I’m not here for you, I’ve been visiting the princess.”

Smiley Star looked slightly more at ease, though still terrified.

“That’s... well, I-I guess that’s okay then,” he said, lamely. “I... heard you had joined the royal guard.”

“Yeah, nice way to make up for my little misdeeds, don’t you think? The ones that sent you running the last time I saw you?

“I...”

He seemed embarrassed and almost apologetic, before his eyes at last landed on Tempest’s large, rounded stomach. His previous expression of abject horror overcame him again, and she let out a loud sigh as the stallion began stammering once more.

“Oh my goodness—is that—you’re, y-you’re pregnant!—is it—could it—“ Smiley Star rambled, before Tempest held up a hoof to silence him.

“To answer your question,” she said, “The answer is yes, it’s yours.”

Smiley Star wobbled in his hooves, mouth agape. He looked like he might faint.

“...Would you like me to go?” Tempest asked, her tone dripping with sarcasm, “Because I can go.”

“I... my... how can that be?” asked Smiley Star, breathlessly.

“Well you see, when two ponies love each other very much,” she began, “Or, alternatively, when they like each other for about a week—“

“Tempest!” he cried, “What—what do I—what do you—?!”

“Hey.” Tempest calmed her tone slightly, putting a hoof on the stallion’s shoulder. To her surprise, he didn’t flinch away. “Okay, so this wasn’t the best way to announce it. What can I say, I don’t have a good track record for explaining things to you. And I’m not going to lie, I’m still mad at you, Star, you ditched me.”

A million thoughts were rushing through Star’s head, even as he tried to take in what the mare was saying to him. Still, his frantic breathing slowed.

“That said, I still needed you to know; I’m pregnant. It’s a filly, she’s yours, I’m keeping her, and she’s due in two months.”

He just stared wide-eyed at her, and after a moment she continued, quietly; “I’m not asking anything from you—frankly I don’t want anything from you, but part of the whole reforming thing was learning to consider others. You’re still a good pony, and I thought you deserved to be told. We may not be on great terms, or any terms, but... it is what it is. You’re going to have a daughter.”

It was then that Tempest noticed the tears in Star’s eyes. She snatched her hoof off of his shoulder in surprise, and stepped away from him.

“What... what do you want me to do?” he asked, meekly.

“Do...” she began, stiffly. These conversations were not her strong suit. “Whatever you want. If... if you can be involved, I’d welcome you being in her life. And if you can’t, than... nothing lost.”

A palpable awkwardness held the unicorns stiffly in place, and even the act of breathing was rapidly becoming uncomfortable.

“I’m staying with Princess Twilight,” Tempest added, finally, “I’ll be in town for two more days.”

Star gulped, and nodded.

“And if you need more time...” she continued, attempting a reassuring smile, “Uh... I’m in the book.”


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I’ve never written anything more out of my realm of experience than this But I felt like it couldn’t just be left as a couple paragraphs of written explanation, I thought a story would be a lot more... fun? I hope it’s not too redundant after the last one, btw. Either way, background on the whole ditching thing here ~

Side note, I’m not trying to frame Smiley Star as a jerk by having Tempest be a little mean to him—she’s mean because she’s Tempest, and I mean the situation is not ideal


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Percy-McMurphy In reply to ??? [2019-04-02 22:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It’s not quite over as there will be a little epilogue, but the conflict is done

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ElectroSkull64 In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-04-03 07:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Awesome ^^

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MoonbeamHamato [2019-03-29 23:26:51 +0000 UTC]

I really can't wait to see the kid 😍

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to MoonbeamHamato [2019-03-29 23:31:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Can’t wait to post her~

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MoonbeamHamato In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-30 02:24:40 +0000 UTC]

She's gonna be loved by someone, at least. Whether that be her mom, her father, or her step-father.

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to MoonbeamHamato [2019-03-30 02:31:12 +0000 UTC]

Indeed

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kingofpriderock [2019-03-29 21:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Smiley: www.youtube.com/watch?v=qbeEO5…


Also that "Like eachother for about a week " line made me laugh



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Percy-McMurphy In reply to kingofpriderock [2019-03-29 21:35:04 +0000 UTC]

YES, YES, YES, YES, YES

Thanks Most creatures are 65% water. Tempest is 65% bitter.

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kingofpriderock In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-29 22:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Had to be done


Seems accurate and I dont blame her   Just not an ideal situation at all

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to kingofpriderock [2019-03-29 22:56:21 +0000 UTC]

It is my favorite sound effect

Yeah, but ~spoilers~ it’ll end up pretty okay Friendship is magic, after all!

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kingofpriderock In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-30 03:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Good choice For me it's a tie beteen the Goofy Scream and the Wilhelm Scream


Ah true true,good to know

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to kingofpriderock [2019-03-30 04:12:36 +0000 UTC]

X3

I can throw in drama but I can’t be too much of a downer

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kingofpriderock In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-30 06:28:40 +0000 UTC]

I get ya

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OffWhitePones [2019-03-29 11:32:03 +0000 UTC]

     
it'S A FILLY




I'm so excited to see the bab

The picture is lovely, Percy! I love the atmosphere and the super nice shading and lighting, Tempest's eyebrows are the exact level of floof I need to survive, The expressions are amazing! I think the sweat drop and blue lines were a tad out of place but they maximized the expression and added a nice flair o' style. Your writing has improved so much?? like how?? These recent Temp X Styg god his name is so weird and hard to spell have some of the best written stuff, at least, I've seen. Like, it's great. I'm here for you! <3

You're doing an amazing job, my friend!   
I think this chimp emote is from a fnaf fan game but it was the closest thing I could find to sneak in a bit o' chimpsexual, you know what I mean? Your work improves every day! Looks great, Perce!

I added a lil friend nickname, but like, if you don't like perce, there's PerPer or Murphy or Murphalicious or Percyboi or- or I guess, Just Percy lmao

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to OffWhitePones [2019-03-29 20:18:49 +0000 UTC]

A wittle filly indeed, and I can’t wait to post her!

Thank you very much! Hah, yeah I feel you, I’m just excessively fond of that anime expression stuff Ack you’re too kind, I just sorta got the urge to write a whole bunch of this lately and... then it was so So I’m really happy to hear it’s enjoyable!!

 ‘Perce’ is great, mate~

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OffWhitePones In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-29 20:39:38 +0000 UTC]

   No problem, Perce! I love your work! <3

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to OffWhitePones [2019-03-29 20:46:37 +0000 UTC]

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LemonKaiju [2019-03-29 11:03:56 +0000 UTC]

What happened to Smiley's horn? o3o

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to LemonKaiju [2019-03-29 20:11:57 +0000 UTC]

I’m not sure! ;-; On the show we just see him with his broken horn bandaged up while at the doctor’s, but we don’t hear why—probably something traumatic, poor guy 

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LemonKaiju In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-29 20:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Aww! Poor Smiley ;;

Maybe an accident? I don't see him being a fighting type of pony so my other assumption is that he was running and tripped or something. ;;

I don't wanna picture anything /too/ traumatic though >>;

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to LemonKaiju [2019-03-29 20:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Probably! For some reason I imagined some sort of work-related accident. Maybe I’ll figure out a headcanon for it at some point X3

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LemonKaiju In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-29 20:30:32 +0000 UTC]

It would be awesome to see what you come up with!!

Knowing you it'll be something totally unique and unexpected ;v;

I love your art and stories so much ;A;

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to LemonKaiju [2019-03-29 20:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Pffft, aw well~

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PokemonTrainerMax [2019-03-29 03:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, drama!  Will Smiley do the right thing and be a part of his daughter's life, or will he run away like he did when Tempest revealed her past?  I love how you have the characters reacting here; they both sound like how I would expect them to in this situation.  Looking forward to finding out what happens next!

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to PokemonTrainerMax [2019-03-29 03:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! I don’t want to paint him as too bad though, I think they both made mistakes—I’m so glad the dialog feels real, because I have no experience with this sort of situation Thank you, I’m struggling a bit with the way to present it, but I hope I’ll get it out soon!

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PokemonTrainerMax In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-29 04:01:03 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!  Yeah, I feel that way too.  I mean, Tempest could learn to be a little more tactful with how she reveals major information like her villainous past or her pregnancy, but she does appear to be aware of this and working to get better at it.  Smiley just strikes me as an everyday guy who ended up in an extraordinary situation; while I don't agree with him ditching Tempest in the past, I'm hoping he takes this second chance to do right by her.  Sounds great; I'll be keeping an eye out for it!

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to PokemonTrainerMax [2019-03-29 04:11:21 +0000 UTC]

Totally It’s hard to be a redeemed villain sometimes Thank you, that’s very much how I’m intended him to seem, sort of in over his head 

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PokemonTrainerMax In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-29 04:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Definitely.  That's why I like how you're portraying Smiley here.  He's basically reacting the way I think someone would if they ran into a former villain.

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to PokemonTrainerMax [2019-03-29 04:33:22 +0000 UTC]

I’m glad

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RavenHeart1984 [2019-03-28 19:39:53 +0000 UTC]

 

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to RavenHeart1984 [2019-03-28 20:29:37 +0000 UTC]

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bornthiswayfox [2019-03-28 13:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Omg its happening! And its a filly, awww what will smiley star do?

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to bornthiswayfox [2019-03-28 15:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Indeed! Well I have it planned but I’m still trying to write it, so we’ll see

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bornthiswayfox In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-28 17:36:29 +0000 UTC]

Good luck, im sure youll dia great job

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to bornthiswayfox [2019-03-28 20:30:57 +0000 UTC]

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bornthiswayfox In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-29 07:26:26 +0000 UTC]

 

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Venommocity [2019-03-27 23:29:54 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! <3 It's pretty cool to see your take on writing, and the story was very fun to follow. Looking forward to the next part! :3

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to Venommocity [2019-03-27 23:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I used to write more than I do right now, but I’m always insecure about it, lol. Thanks, can’t wait to post it

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Venommocity In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-29 21:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh you shouldn't be! Your writing is engaging and it was interesting to read. <3 I'm usually afraid what I write will be boring, though, so I completely understand what you're feeling x3

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to Venommocity [2019-03-29 21:32:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Yeah, I have a feeling nobody ever completely likes their own writing

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Venommocity In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-29 21:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Of course! <3 And hehe, agreed. We're our own worst critics, as someone (probably famous) once said :') 

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to Venommocity [2019-03-29 21:35:26 +0000 UTC]

Totally

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AllyBACat [2019-03-27 22:13:39 +0000 UTC]

Dear oh dear!

btw, I am loving this little arc so far!

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to AllyBACat [2019-03-27 22:17:47 +0000 UTC]

Gettin’ dramatic

Thank you so much!! I’m still figuring out what the next bit will be, but I hope it’ll stay interesting

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Macgyver644200 [2019-03-27 21:58:57 +0000 UTC]

Interesting.  I'd love to see how this ends.

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to Macgyver644200 [2019-03-27 22:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I’m having a little trouble deciding how I’m gonna do the next part, like which character I’m going to focus on, but I’m looking forward to getting to the ending

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Annabear1211 [2019-03-27 21:56:13 +0000 UTC]

HOLY?!?! That’s insane!!!

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to Annabear1211 [2019-03-27 21:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I’ll try to wrap it up cleanly in the next one

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Annabear1211 In reply to Percy-McMurphy [2019-03-27 22:39:05 +0000 UTC]

Ooo yeah!! Can’t wait to see

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Percy-McMurphy In reply to Annabear1211 [2019-03-27 22:53:44 +0000 UTC]

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