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Take-off the soul
so stale that
no stimulus
or virtue
may recapture it.

(Sally)
She is hรดt
looks like Judgement Day
Brainless capacious heart

An innocent hunter

Testi, hyper, little, popular-
Very good fun

But not the cure.
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Comments: 7

andrewpom [2012-03-31 13:30:08 +0000 UTC]

It's really enticing how you actually manage to link the random words together. In this piece, you seem to be trying to suggest a sort of apocalyptic mood -- standing on a sandy hill in the middle of a wasteland, remembering lost loves and hopes. "Judgement Day", "Brainless", "cure"... it all makes me think of a zombie apocalypse.

And the amazing thing? I have no idea how I could even derive that from a bunch of seemingly random words hand-picked from a single page.

Fantastic.

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Peris-Productions In reply to andrewpom [2012-03-31 17:18:49 +0000 UTC]

When it comes to women sometimes I do feel a bit apocalyptic What interests me is that you've managed to visualise something completely different to me, from the same set of words. I like you imagery too, and like how the love interest can be juxtaposed with that end-of-the-world visuals

But thank you for the compliment, I really appreciate you taking the time to read, conceptualise and comment. Means a lot to me

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mentevuota [2012-02-08 23:05:50 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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Peris-Productions In reply to mentevuota [2012-03-31 14:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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velocity07 [2012-02-08 18:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I love works like this - creative, emotive, and aesthetically pleasing.

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Peris-Productions In reply to velocity07 [2012-02-08 22:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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velocity07 In reply to Peris-Productions [2012-02-08 22:56:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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