Comments: 43
PetiteGalaxy In reply to coolyoug [2015-08-24 14:25:33 +0000 UTC]
Nothing wrong with being a perv!
Thank you! I try to write it less obvious so it doesn't get taken down >.>
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emwsai26 [2015-08-18 05:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Why was this so cute?!! Great job!
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AnimeFanatic09 [2015-08-13 17:29:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow! O.O
Amazing job on this!
I loved it!
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ThatGingahNinja [2015-08-13 02:41:42 +0000 UTC]
Why ya have to kill a girl?
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AliceAckermanSmith [2015-08-08 21:33:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow bless the sexymonth, that was damn good
(Can't wait for the next daddy!Levi fic *^*)
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enternalpose [2015-08-08 05:12:36 +0000 UTC]
Hope their children doesnt popping out in the room and ruining the lovey-dovey moment between them kekeke
Levi gonna have a new baby soon~
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Dead-Love9 [2015-08-06 02:37:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god! This is amazingly sexy XD nice job! \(^_^)b
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leviismylife [2015-08-03 22:20:13 +0000 UTC]
MY NOSE IS BLEEDING ;-;
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CarlaJea [2015-08-03 21:54:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this was really amazing!
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koukousha [2015-08-03 16:27:59 +0000 UTC]
god bless the sexy month heueheueheueheu
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PetiteGalaxy In reply to koukousha [2015-08-03 16:32:29 +0000 UTC]
It is my time for my perv to shine.
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koukousha In reply to PetiteGalaxy [2015-08-03 21:58:10 +0000 UTC]
SHINE DARLING
and give us moooore plz
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JazzyKatLovesHetalia [2015-08-03 15:33:30 +0000 UTC]
I'm getting really emotional over this, I want this. I want this so bad. You deserve cookies, and a crown. I feel like you're one of the guardians of Levi x Reader fanfics. I bless you, malady. Just- I clap and cry now.
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PetiteGalaxy In reply to gothicgaelicgirl [2015-08-03 14:43:02 +0000 UTC]
This is nothing compared to what I have planned for other stories
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marcyj93 [2015-08-03 03:34:38 +0000 UTC]
So this was basically my head and GOOD LORDY THIS WAS HOT LIKE I CAN'T EVEN
This was amazing and just so, like what almost everyone else has said, descriptive without adding a bunch of details. THAT'S WHAT I STRIVE FOR UGH
Again, super duper amazing
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PetiteGalaxy In reply to marcyj93 [2015-08-03 03:39:59 +0000 UTC]
Gahhh thank you so much!
Like I commented earlier this style is a pain in the dick and even this small nugget took me about 2 hours and I changed/rewrote things at least three times. The only helpful thing I can say is try and get your body to feel that emotion you're trying to portray and write it down. Even if its shit, write it, rewrite it, mess with the style, use words you don't see often. THESAURUSES ARE YOUR FRIEND.
Thank you for your comment
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marcyj93 In reply to PetiteGalaxy [2015-08-03 03:42:35 +0000 UTC]
YAASSS sometimes I forget that thesauruses are a thing.... WRITERS HELPING WRITERS :3
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PetiteGalaxy In reply to marcyj93 [2015-08-03 03:44:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm always here if you need help with anything
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marcyj93 In reply to PetiteGalaxy [2015-08-03 04:03:21 +0000 UTC]
Ah thank you so much!! You have no idea how much that means to me.
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Greystream [2015-08-03 02:40:08 +0000 UTC]
*chokes over the sheer beauty of this*
You didn't even have to explain every little detail to make this amazing. It was so descriptive and you could really feel how much they loved each other throughout the whole thing bUT I REALLY JUST CAN'T GET OVER THE AMAZING DETAILS YOU USED IN HERE it's amazing and I loved it omg
Groggy horny Levi is the best Levi
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PetiteGalaxy In reply to Greystream [2015-08-03 02:49:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank youuuuuuuuuuu. This style is the biggest pain in my metaphorical dick hole but it comes out so much smoother. Headcanon that levi is horny af in the morning like hullo are your eyes open good here I am ready for you!
Just you wait for this punk!eren smut. //diabolical laugh
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Greystream In reply to PetiteGalaxy [2015-08-03 03:02:35 +0000 UTC]
"This style is the biggest pain in my metaphorical dick hole but it comes out so much smoother."
This is by far one of the best quotes ever
YES LEVI WOULD BE A HORNY ASSHOLE
"hey beb are you awake? no? okay well you are now c'mere"
I might die omg
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PetiteGalaxy In reply to Greystream [2015-08-03 03:17:31 +0000 UTC]
IT IS IT BURNS MY BRAIN. My process is generally like
//pictures ocean all beautiful with waves and shining sun
//retypes the same sentence 9 times because half these words aren't real words.
You will die because punk eren knows how to work that tongue because I'm a murderer.
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Greystream In reply to PetiteGalaxy [2015-08-03 03:02:14 +0000 UTC]
"This style is the biggest pain in my metaphorical dick hole but it comes out so much smoother."
This is by far one of the best quotes ever
YES LEVI WOULD BE A HORNY ASSHOLE
"hey beb are you awake? no? okay well you are now c'mere"
I might die omg
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landra15 [2015-08-03 02:34:53 +0000 UTC]
OMG! Love this!
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PetiteGalaxy In reply to RuraX [2015-08-03 01:27:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad the visual is clear, this style of writing is kind of new to me so I'm always worried it comes off weird. Glad it got you all hot and bothered
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