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READ RIGHT TO LEFT..I'm supposed to be writing a biology report right now.. But it's in the middle of the night and I'm going to upload this instead..
I really am a dummy.. 
Anyways, I like Tenten in the last panel.. And Gai is kind of like a father and very youthful..
This will be the last page in chapter 1..
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I just want to thank everyone who has been reading this doujinshi - thank you so much - and all the faves and the wonderful comments.. I'm so grateful!
My doujinshi on Youtube: [link] .. (how could I resist??
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Lovely! Jeg elsker det ALT SAMMEN! Bortset fra ShikaTema... -.- MEN udover det
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NEJI YOU POMPOUS JERK!! I shun thee
great job though on tenten
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Kenta: AAAHHH!!! GOTTA START ON THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
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Haha.. Don't say that.. He's just not the sensible type of guy..
After all I'm the one who wrote that sentence..
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I just really dispise Neji so much! 
~ Tenten
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Really? Oh, I like Neji.. He's such a nice complicated character.. Very interesting, and very good-looking..
He was quite mean in the beginning, but after knowing his past I think you understand why..
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It's really strange how I don't like Neji, but I like Sasuke. 
~ Tenten
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Hehe.. Team Gai and Team Kakashi are quite alike, but actuallt I think there's a cool and an enegic guy in every team.. Like Gaara and Kankuro, Kiba and Shino and Shikamaru and Chouji..
I like Neji better than Sasuke.. 
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Yeah! There are both guys in every team!
I like seeing the other side to liking and disliking characters. :]
~ Tenten
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Yeah.. It's always funny.. I like most of the characters though..
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I cannot wait for an update on this. ^^ This is probably one of the most adorable doujinshi's I've found and I love the way you draw Lee. Yay for father/son moments! ^^ I love that about Gai and Lee's relationship.
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Thank you!
I'm so glad you liked it..
It means a lot to me that you took your time to read this and leave some comments..
I love the GaiLee father/son relationship too.. It's just adorable..
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You're welcome! ^^ I really did enjoy it and once I started reading I couldn't stop. It's a really fun story. ^^
They really are!! Cause father/son moments between those two can be either adorable, or just plain hysterical.
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Oh, thank you so much!
GaiLee moments are so cute.. And I love when they get weird and funny! Gai's training methodes are quite rare sometimes..
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You're welcome. ^^
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Well.. I like Gai's style.. He's really cool.. And the best thing about him is that he so weird and he doesn't even notice himself.. He think he's the coolest person in the world - but he's really the craziest!
I'd be a Gai-fan just like Lee if I lived in the Naruto-universe..
I agree.. Even though his training methods seems strange, they're working.. And he definitly believes in his students and supports them in every way..
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Agreed. ^^ Gai is probably one of the few who can pull off spandex and bowl cuts. XD He's just adorable, but also very...I don't know. charming in his own way I guess. He's the coolest craziest person. XD You're not alone my friend! If I lived in the Naruto-universe I'd be a fan of his as well. 
They are. and you can tell by Kakashi's reaction in the chunin exams that the weight Lee was carrying was unexpected and definately made an impression. ^^ That's what I love about team Gai. They're essentially all the underdogs. You got the boy no one believed in, the boy with the curse seal, the girl who is really ignored, and Gai who was made to seem crazy. But they're effient, kick butt, and kinda like a family. ^^
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Him and his spandex.. You have got to love it!
I'd love to know him for real..
They are just like a family.. That's one of the reasons why they're are my favorite team.. The team no one believed in.. But they're still one of the strongest teams.. I just love them..
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You totally do!! And I swear if they drew Gai realisticly...well c'mon! That man would have muscles!!!
*hugs them all* They're my favorite team as well. ^___^ And they're just...I don't know. They're so sweet and awesome, and they've risen above so much. I think they were actually counted as the top team in terms of effiency in Konoha. That's intense! Especially after the setback they must have experienced after what happened to Lee.
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Gai is so muscular.. And, oh dear, that suit is sure a bodysuit.. Nothing would be let to your imagination.. That's kind of scary, really..
Oh, I wish I had a teacher like that.. I'd be so wonderful to know a real Gai!
I think people should borrow more Gai-speeches.. Would be fun to see people talk about youth all the time.. And running around their house 500 times if they lost a game..
I love team Gai.. They seem to be having the best relationships, and I love how unique each member is.. All so powerful and with great personallities..
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It was pretty awesome. He was everyone's favorite teacher and he and the principal had a very Kakashi and Gai relationship. Though my Bible teacher always seemed to get more digs in...then again she got in some really good ones herself. And was always very cool about it.
LOL!! That would be so funny! Youth speeches and Gai's rules. That's just entertaining right there.
Agreed. They do seem to have the best relationships amongst themselves and all the other teams. Even if they're different, they do get along and I know Lee and Neji started out pretty antagonistic towards each other...but I think they've really grown to be great friends and kinda like brothers. ^^
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Oh, what I would have given to meet that teacher!!
He sounds so awesome!! And cool KakaGai competition.. All my teachers sure are crazy.. But none of them are like Gai.. What a disapointment..
I think so too.. They didn't like each other in the beginning, but I think they've grown to respect and like each other..
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Awww, that's ok. Crazy teachers are still awesome!!
Yeah, and someone once pointed out to me that maybe Neji's coldness was also from almost wanting to keep Lee safe. Because since Lee can't do any ninjitsu or genjutsu...maybe Neji figured it was better to try and crush his dreams than let Lee get himself killed.
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I wonder if Gai's on facebook??
I like that cup!
Oh, Neji.. What an adorable thing to do.. I believe that's what's going on.. He's just protecting a dear friend.. (To abuse him with his byakugan??
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It was funny. He also had a bunch of demotivational posters up with funny sayings.
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It would be so much fun if he were!
He sure has some unlucky moments.. He can seem so cold sometimes.. For instanse in his fight against Hinata.. I didn't like him in the beginning to be honest, but during the manga I liked the way he developed and now he's one of my favorite characters!
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It would be!! Can you imagine what would be on his wall?
Yeah. I didn't like him in the beginning much either, but it wasn't that he was cold...so much as his attitude. Like his whole 'fate controls you' thing, really really bugged me and I just wanted to smack him! Then I started reading some stories by a friend of mine and they kinda made me look at him again and in a new light and then I started writing him and...I don't know. He just kinda grew on me. Plus he had a pretty emotionally scarring childhood, poor kid.
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I don't know if I want to know really..
Something containing youth I bet..
I thought he had a bad attitude as well.. I he just seemed so mean and with no emotions at all.. But I started to like him in his fight against Naruto.. When you heard all about his childhood and 'destiny'.. I like how Kishimoto always explains why the persons are like they are.. Showing that nobody was born 'evil'..
I feel kind of sorry for him.. It's clear why he was angry with the Hyuga family..
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Agreed. That's something Kishi does do well. He's good at explaining why characters act the way they do, and even making you take a second look at characters that at first glance you didn't like. Plus with Neji, he had it shoved in his face everyday of his life. His uncle's a complete look alike of his dad, he's expected to be Hinata's bodyguard, and if he steps out of line, they could kill him! O_O Kid probably got so reversed because he was scared to open his mouth.
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Oh dear.. I'm somehow glad I'm not his friend on facebook..
I really that about Kishimoto's style.. He's so talented at making charcters.. Like when I saw Chouji and Shikamaru at first I thought they'd be something like Crap & Goyle from Harry Potter.. The annoying guys who makes fun of the main character.. Mainly because of ther appearence and the way Naruto talks about them at first.. But I soon learned how wonderful characters they were.. I like it that he puts so much in them..
I feel sorry for Neji.. I bet you're right about why he's reserved.. I've never thought of it that way.. The Hyuga clan sure is no good place to grow up if you don't belong to the right part of the family.. The whole obsession for destiny is so creepy..
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Agreed. ^^ Kishi does a great job creating characters. I think that's probably his strongest point. Plot structure...maybe not so much. He's really good with short arcs. They have a tight beginning, middle and end, but with longer more drawn out stuff, I think he needs a bit more experience. But he's also been doing Naruto for a long time so...I don't know. Yeah, you don't quite know what to expect when you first meet Chouji and Shikamaru, or any of the characters really. But more often than not you wind up pleasently surprised. ^__^ I love those two. They're such great friends.
The obsession with Destiny is creepy. O_O
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Are you siriously saying that Gai's not completely insane?? O_O For real?? 
I agree.. Kishimoto's stongest point is no doubt creating characters.. He's really talented at it.. I think his plots are all right, but well.. Not the best.. The only bad thing about his passion for the characters is that he's creating so many.. I've almost stopped counting.. I think he's making too many.. And everytime he makes more it just makes less room for the old characters.. which is really sad..
I adore Shikamaru and Chouji too.. They have a wonderful relationship, and Chouji just has a heart of gold.. Shika is one of my favorite characters.. 
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Yeah, Kishi does seem to be making to many characters, and when there's that many without solid foundation for the others and normal useage, it's hard to keep track. Like I can understand if he had a lot of characters and maybe did mini-arcs in the back of his manga to look at them deeper, but he's trying to cram so much character development and people into an arc where the original characters should be the focus since it started with them. 
Chouji is adorable. And I love how protective he is of his friends and they both have such great relationships with their dads!!
lol. Yeah. I don't think I could use it that well. I think I might be better at just straight martial arts/taijutsu. Though I do know a few pressure points and how to use them, though of course I can't remember the coolest one.
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Haha.. But we love him insane..
I've never heard of anybody similar to him.. I guess he's one-of-a-kind, and maybe that's kind of a good thing.. Too mnay Gai's would be tiring..
Oh, one more thing I'll have to read.. I wish I had more spare time..
I love the Gai and Tenten father-daughter relationship.. Even though Tenten isn't that excited about Gai as Lee is, I think she appriciates him..
Oh, I'd love to read stories about that team..
I'd suck big time at Tai jutsu too..
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To true. Gai's insanity just makes him that much more adorable. O_O To many Gai's...even three or four...O_O The world would never be the same.
I know what you mean. Spare time is hard to find. Especially with School. Same here. Kishi is great at creating characters, but the old ones hold a special place in our hearts and are just so sweet. I think Tenten loves Gai, but is more exasperated by him like any daughter would be with their dad occassionally.
Exactly!! Now Ino loves her team, whereas before she couldn't stand them. And I think they both love her to and if someone wanted to hurt Ino, they'd have a lot to deal with first! And afterwards if they succeded. Not to mention her dad.
Shikamaru's would be awesome!!! Though I wouldn't want Sasuke. Apparently if you use the Sharingan to much you go blind. O_O I think it'd be cool to have Tayua's from the sound though or something. If only I wasn't tone deaf. XD
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Haha.. too many Gai's would be horrific..
Exacly.. No matter how many characters he creates, I'll still love the old ones just a tad more..
Sure Tenten loves Gai and respects him, but she doesn't look up to him as Lee does.. I totally understand Lee.. Gai was the only one who always believed in him, and I guess Lee still doesn't think he's good enought just being himself, and that might be a part of why he's fangirling Gai so much.. I really pray for him to figure out that he doesn't have to be exacly like Gai to be accepted.. That's one of the reasons why I support LeeTen.. I think he deserves to be with someone that likes and respects him for who he is..
I love the relationship in Team Asuma.. I agree that Ino has grown to love Shikamaru and Choji.. I think she really appriciates them.. And the 3 of them make a great team..
Ino's dad is very cool.. I was suprized to see how much she looks like him..
Haha.. My singing teacher is also desperately trying to help me not to be tone death.. Big failure..
Tayua's powers would be so much fun.. And I's also love Kiba's.. It'd be so nice to have an Akamaru dog..
Maybe not the sharingan, but I'd like to be able to do his fire jutsus..
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Definately agree about Lee. Because when you've been told your whole life that you're worthless and can never achieve your dream, and then you find someone who tells you differently, that's huge. Putting them up on a pedastal is just natural, and I wonder if after so many years, Lee is also afraid that if he tries to be a little different that Gai would feel hurt. Of course Gai wouldn't be. Lee could dress, talk, act, pretty much however he wanted and Gai would still love him like his son. ^^ Awwwww. That's so sweet! and Tenten would love him because of who he really is. She'd see stuff beyond just the outside...and I think that during the academy she was probably one of his biggest defenses against bullies. She just seems to be the kind that wouldn't put up with them that well. ^^
You will. ^^ Just keep at it.
lol. Akamaru is win!! My dog is kinda like that in terms of following you everywhere and barking at everything...but aside from grabbing at someone's pants leg in a fight, I don't think he could do much.
The fire thing would be awesome!!!
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President Gai!
Wonder what the world would look like..
I think so.. Lee has worked so hard to reach his dream all night, and he deserves to find out that he's good enough when he's just being himself.. And Gai would sure support him no matter what.. He is after all his beloved student..
That's why I like LeeTen better than LeeSaku.. I guess Sakura thinks too much about looks, and wouldn't appriciate he as much as she should, because he's not the best looking guy..
I hope so..
I think he could be helpful in fights too.. At least Akamaur in Shippuden.. It'd be cool to have a dog that big..
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awesome as always!! looking forward to chapter two!!
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Me too.. Thank you so much! I appreciate your comments..
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Yes, that was kind of gay wan't it neji :3 but atleast we know Lee has someone to talk to... <3 LeeTen <3
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Congratz on finishing chapter 1!
I wonder what chapter 2 will bring!
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Thank you!
I get started at chapter 2 right away..
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i have a teacher that i can talk to and his nickname is guy sensei i am so freeking lucky
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Nice!
I wish I had I Gai Sensei!
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no i call him that in front of other teachers and they look at him like wtf and he goes "ya thats what she calls me isnt that cool^^"
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Does he know who Gai Sensei is??
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